Sillyswager's Forum Posts

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16 Feb 2009

Although the two-women-one man scenario is most popular here, I like a two man-one woman sceario, where the woman is calling the shots, telling two heterosexual men what to do, forcing them to kiss each other, again, the woman calling the shots, the two men beholden to her. Feel free to extrapolate, but the though of two hetero guys being controlled by a woman.......

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Sillyswager

Rookie Scribe

2 Feb 2009

Thank you for the commentary and I appreciate the follow-up of the readers of this thread. I also, like many want some actual criticism of my stuff, as I am new to this. I found one great writer, link below, who manages to combine the erotic with the humorous:

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/close-teacher.aspx

Alot of this stuff is written off the cuff, and although I spell check and look for grammer errors, I often don't know if it's cool or crap until get some feedback.

Thanks, and check out that guy's stories, great character details!

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Sillyswager

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20 Jan 2009

Yes, research would be in order. Does anyone remember in the movie, "The World According to Garp" where the kids are looking at a porno mag and one of them says, "Wow, if I was a girl, I woud just take off my clothes and look at myself in a mirror all day!"

good one.

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