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StormySyren
Over 90 days ago
Bisexual Female, 29
United States

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You are all awesome! Seeker4 and RejectReality, thank you especially for your advice. I really appreciate all the work the moderators do to make sure the stories are up to snuff.
Quote by RejectReality
Temper your expectations for anything long enough to consider breaking up, and especially anything over 10k words. The Lush readership trends sharply toward shorter pieces. Which isn't a bad thing, because most of the other sites trend sharply in the other direction. Having a place where shorter work gets a fair/preferred shake is a welcome arrow in the quiver.

If you do break it up, don't draw out the releases. As soon as one is approved, put the next part in the queue. The natural bleed of readers to progressive parts will only increase with time between submissions. That means having the complete story ready to roll before you submit part 1. You don't want to get into a situation where life intrudes and prevents you from delivering the ending in a timely manner.

Give some consideration to potentially triggering content that will appear in later parts of the story. If there's anything coming later that you think might make readers squeamish, you might consider coding for it with part one, or perhaps utilizing the author note section, or both. ( Describing that the tags are there for later parts of the story ) Little will make readers balk more than starting something and feeling as if they were blindsided by the later parts when they appear. They not only back away from that story, they think twice before opening the next submission they see from you.

Let readers know up front how many parts to expect. Add 1 of 3 to the title, or leave an author's note saying how many chapters there will be. If it was originally written as a single story, and not written as a serialized story from the beginning, "Part x of x" is probably the better strategy. This is especially true if any of your break points don't feel like an ending to a chapter. Readers have a different mindset when they see "part" as opposed to "chapter"

Off the top of my head.


That's all great advice, RR. Thank you! I don't think this piece is too long to be interesting, but writer's bias is thick here. I am planning on submitting it as a whole soon, just first focusing on good structure and grammar and "flow". Now the tricky part is placing it in a category. It can easily go into Straight Sex with several tags, but she does call him sir and there is a play/dominance component that makes me think I should submit it under BDSM.
I am hoping for help in figuring out whether a story I am trying to write would be better as a long story or better divided into multiple parts. It does have sort of natural breaks that are kind of "bite-sized", if you will. Which do you find yourself gravitating to: a long, completed story or a story told in multiple parts?
I usually yearn to be dominated. I need the freedom to just feel and not have to decide anything for a while. Obviously this only works with a trustworthy partner, but it can be so good