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SummerLeigh
Over 90 days ago
Straight Female
0 miles · Detroit

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I AM eager for the New Year and all it will bring! Happy New Year to all!
That you can face the world...and cope
Which my child is a bit different than just hope

For coping means to doggedly deal
But hope...that gives you courage to feel

And in truth you will always need both
Coping sustained makes reality of hopes

During hard times you'll need to get through
Sometimes blind resolve is all you can do

But your path will feel less a steep climb
If you can focus on the prize you will find.

And believe it inevitable to be
Your birthright, your due destiny.
I love, love, love this song...and the video. Like when she sings "I'm so gay" she is literally coming out of a closet. It's just such a liberating, F 'em type message said in the nicest way possible.

A craft beer that goes with BBQ perhaps? Maybe New Belgium Fat Tire? Sorry, not much of a beer connoisseur but I tried...Slainte!
Duolingo...I am "determined" to learn Spanish, French, and Italian. And maybe Mandarin Chinese. Finally. I hope. Perhaps. We'll see...
Hmm...wish I knew him but I don't so this is just a comment on his avatar...

Awkwardly tanlined
Well, equipment is enjoyable regardless but if I had my way trimmed is nice. The worst is shaved and picky...if you can't commit to keeping it smooth (guys or girls I suppose) then definitely leave the razor for your face.
I've had a few sequel requests but very few actual suggestions to improve a story or suggest edits.

I actually am a bit disappointed by that as I suppose I had hoped to have a mentor just land in my lap once I published my first piece here. If someone were to make a critique on a story or poem I would be thrilled to bits. It would feel like they really were interested in reading. Unfortunately, while I appreciate my 5s, I have little faith in them as an accurate measure of literary opinion.
I'm not counting poetry in this as most of it is not erotic and even the few that are, well, poetry doesn't lend itself well to hot and sticky stuff in my opinion.

The stories now...well those are a bit different. I was surprised to discover that when I write I get no wigglies out of writing it. None. Zero. Zip. Zilch. So, I think the sex bits are somewhat over the top to provide a teeny sense of how someone else may perceive it. Either that or they really are wobbly bits numbing...(eek!...and so hyperventilation begins). While I don't really care what other people do when its being read I would hate to discover that on this erotic site mine are non-erotic.

I agree with VirgoGo, writing the sex parts are a challenge. Usually things are flowing along then I screech to a halt at the first glimmer of a sex scene. This is followed by at least a day of procrastination while I avoid thinking of sex at all...'ish. Then when I find I can't put it off a second more I sit down and blaze through the sexy parts without stopping or thinking or feeling.

But there are many that say they're hot...they score with mmm's, and many other comments which lead me to believe they may have been read one-handed. Either way, it's a joy to write and I appreciate any who read and frankly my dears, I don't give a damn what they do as long as they don't unfollow or give me a 1. Or a 2. Or a 3...
There's so many...Anything by Robert Palmer to start. I'll tell him what I'd like to do with a sledgehammer.

Ooohh...yikes...how disturbingly violent of me.
I don't think any of mine have even close to 10,000 and just my circle read me I think. Your following is amazing and your story skills and evidently marketing skills too are to be commended. Great job!!!!!

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Terrible, overused puns are the lifeblood of this story. Everything is competition worthy if you do it right.


Oops. I think I sounded insulting. I didn't mean your story isn't comp worthy. I meant I wrote a story called jingle my bells...that's what I meant by it's already been done and it isn't comp worthy. Sorry...I'm sure yours is very good.

And this is why I generally stay out of the forums...I don't like the feel of foot in my mouth. I think this is safest