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VanGogh
Over 90 days ago
Straight Cis Female
0 miles · Vancouver

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A lot of these comments are spot on.

Personal opinion - multi-part stories should have a feeling of stand-alone stories. Length of each "chapter" I hope would be indicative of the author telling that particular chapter. When you look at, for example, Buz's college series (link to Buz's Profile which is a GREAT example) ... each story is easily a stand-alone story one can enjoy without reading the previous one. His stories range from one under 1000 words to most in the 2,000 to 5,000 words range, and the finale over 7,000 words.

Regarding other lengths (hahaha)

A really long story (over 7K words) on screen is not enjoyable to me ... yet having said that, I have read some "longer" stories that have been totally engaging and fabulous.

To write flash fiction well, one has to be very selective about the word choice and how to convey much without using lots of filling .... but being sparse is entirely different and doesn't make that cut. To me, flash is similar to a well written poem - convey not just the scene, but evoke an emotion. That's a winner!

I was very disappointed once when I commented on a story that had really great potential, and it fell flat because the writer was in a hurry (or lazy) ... the writer responded with "my stories are more of an aperitif than the main course" to which I thought .... damn, reminds me of a fancy restaurant that gives you only one small new potato, a string of a green bean and a mouthful of braised pork on a very large white plate for $75. I should have been happy and honoured I got that! (not)



Anyways, I digress.

Give us the full, well-bodied and best stories you can write. A great read can be hard to find!

Van
well, obviously Castle is not a fan of American Football! (or daytime TV - soaps?)



But for those of us who are a fan ... it's a big deal!

The NFL is really working hard to ensure that the playing fields are level ... and that is a good thing!

About Tom Brady ..... for sure this is going to taint how the public and fans look at him! Look at Pete Rose (gambling).... or anyone who "cheated" at their game. What about Lance Armstrong? There was the Black Sox Scandal. Who the fuck wants to say "he's a winner" when the question remains .... "Is he really a winner?"

OMG .... and the Seahawks and their fans will be up in arms over this ....

Hall of Fame ... he should be in there with his stats .... but will it be like how fans loved Joe Montana, Jim Kelly, Dan Marino? I doubt it .... either you like Brady or you can't stand him.

I'm of the latter ....

Cheers!

Van
you should do youtube, SereneProdigy .... you might make some $$ there .... and have a great big following.
Quote by hornybloke82
anyone recommend a good office sex story?


On the left hand side of the main page, there are categories listed ... Office Sex is one of them.

Then they are listed (sorted) by:

* latest

* popular (meaning those with highest scores)
* viewed (most views on top)
* suggested (those have been honoured with an RR or EP)

The Popular and the Viewed then also are sub-filed with This Month, Last Month and/or All-Time

Enjoy!

Van
totally understandable ... but I am going to miss hitting Magical_Felix's page for his start up music .... I don't know the name of the song he had .... but I sure liked it!

(note, I was not stalking Jack ..... honestly!!)
wondering what the universe has in store .....

best thing for you (and other new writers) is to submit your work.

you may not get many responses until you become more familiar to others who read .... but submitting your work for publishing is the best place to put your work and have feedback by votes and comments.

work hard at your craft. re-read what you've written. edit it. re-word what you don't like. submit it when you feel you can't make it any better.

good luck,

Van
Both of my parents died at 69 years (ten years apart). Way too young.

My father was very artistic and shared with us the passions of music, fine arts and the creative love of words. He was a great dad when we were all young - under the teenage years. Once we formed our own opinion(s) that didn't align with his .... well, all hell broke loose. But those situations form who you are and make you learn how to handle adversity.

My mom ... well, I miss her each and every day. God .... she knew how to keep a secret. And she was always my personal cheerleader.

In turn .... I have tried to follow my mom's parenting/personal way with my children; encouraging their passions, celebrating their own personal accomplishments and telling them at every opportunity how much I love them. I never try to make my children prove their worth to me.

As TheSexyNun said ... a very interesting question and gives me something to feel #blessed about.

Van