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1 month ago
Straight Male
0 miles · Colorado
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Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Wipe me off your floorboards, you heartless beauty witch...
It doesn't need to rhyme does it?
Because love, it ain't a two-way street
I'm tired of playing cat and mouse, or panting hound and bitch.
And tired of falling asleep at the wheel
So while we drive, please make me feel
I may be a witch, but I think you're very sweet.
Your love for me is oh so real,
Imperfect as our rhymes pass by...
You know I know you're real...
I live for the sweet moments
That we steal.
I look at you, please meet my gaze
It doesn't need to rhyme does it?
Because love, it ain't a two-way street
I'm tired of playing cat and mouse, or panting hound and bitch.
And tired of falling asleep at the wheel
So while we drive, please make me feel
I may be a witch, but I think you're very sweet.
Your love for me is oh so real,
Imperfect as our rhymes pass by...
You know I know you're real...
I live for the sweet moments
That we steal.
I look at you, please meet my gaze
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by stephanie
It's freaky that you can't spell or punctuate on a site that's about writing.
I'm INTRIGUED about the Master Of Oral Sex thing??? (They didn't have that when I did my post-grad...)
xx SF
. I was going to say something snarky, but your retort was much wittier, so I'l just tip my hat. 
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
I may be playing devil's advocate here, but I think his point may have been that erotic stories always have an upbeat ending, and it might be interesting to write something sad and serious and sick. Yes, it's against policy, and yes, it's unthinkably irresponsible. But it might make a good story, if not necessarily erotica (or maybe the erotic part wouldn't be the orgy).
I've got a mean-spirited piece of erotica half-written in my head, but I keep thinking "who the fuck would want to read this?" Besides me. And maybe the OP.
But, yeah, what Hera said still applies: the woman should be shot. And were my kids or their friends involved, I'd be doing the shooting.
I've got a mean-spirited piece of erotica half-written in my head, but I keep thinking "who the fuck would want to read this?" Besides me. And maybe the OP.
But, yeah, what Hera said still applies: the woman should be shot. And were my kids or their friends involved, I'd be doing the shooting.
