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Quote by Mit
What a waste of time and brain cells for the story mods weeding out the wannabe writers!

It is a ballache we could do without, and the more people who help us encourage fellow authors to explore their own voice the better. I'd like to see the site evolve to make AI stories an unwelcome guest, offering them accommodation on a dingy, stained mattress in the basement with no windows and a single locked door before we herd them towards the shredder in the corner. We're getting there.

As a team, we're becoming really good at spotting AI—as you'd expect when we have seen thousands upon thousands of identikit stories in the exact same voice, battering the queue for the last year or so.

P.S. I don't want to derail this comp thread into another AI discussion so this is just informational.

Quote by Mit

the site's only not-a-wannabe WannabeWordsmith of course 😉

Hehe, too kind. Thank you.

Quote by Shyexhibitionist

Is that not fewer than normal?

We have probably rejected nearly half that number of AI entries.

Quote by techgoddess
my main focus right now has been a story about... well, I don't want to give it away

A redhead in a hot situation? 😁

(hope that's not a spoiler lol)

Quote by CarltonStJames
RDJ says Kiss Kiss Bang Bang is the best movie he's ever done. How many people even know about that film?

I agree. It's amazing. Also, Shane Black writer/director so it was in good hands from the start.

Quote by Mandapanda2025
This generator has a gallery (scroll down) if you see an image that is simular you can get the prompt used to create it.

That's really handy to see the sort of prompts other people use, thanks for sharing. And there are some impressive photos there, though I see many people struggle (as I do) to make the engine actually do what it's asked. Like when it insists on putting things in the wrong hands to those you specified, or uses the wrong aesthetic. Or, in this case, the prompt states:

an 18-year-old anime girl (extremely girlish cute face, blue eyes), closing one eye, sideways peace sign near her eyes, sticking out tongue a bit at the corner of her mouth, with innocent cheeky tongue-out smile. Focusing on her beautiful blue eye, world-class masterpiece, 4k, best quality... an aesthetically pleasing anime art with impeccable attention to detail

Yes, attention to detail like making sure the model has one eye closed like asked. And her tongue peeks from the corner of her mouth. And she has the correct number of fingers. And her finger ends haven't been mangled by a bacon slicer.

But y'know... details matter 🤣

Feeling frisky? Got a camera nearby? Grab it and head over to the Challenge Erotica group. It's free to join. In there, you can either:

A) Post an arty photo of yourself or an arty photo you found online as a "Challenge" to other Lushies.

B) Reply to any challenge with your own posed version, as close as you can to the original (or some interpretation of it).

Or you could do both!

I've posted a few challenges as a starter. Feel free to add your own challenges or reply to any posted by Lushies in this (Public) Group.

Have fun 😃

Challenge Erotica

Calling all erotic photo lovers who want to play at photography. Post an arty photo - either of yourself or one you find online - then challenge others to...

Quote by JustForYou
Not everyone has the type of personality to talk about their "best".

Totally. My "best" changes fairly frequently as I evolve my writing. I thought my first story here was my best work once. How things change!

Story length no doubt plays a part. Some of my most character-driven writing is 5k+ but few have the spare time to invest to read it. For the ones that do, I'm so grateful. Especially with comments, as you say.

Splitting stories up into chunks seems like a win-win to keep readers, but viewership almost always tails off in later chapters, so that tactic risks people not reaching the end.

Quote by KimmiBeGood
I try not to worry about the votes, etc and count one happy reader as important as fifty.

Oh absolutely. This isn't necessarily just about votes but also overall impression. The piece I singled out above has got some amazing, lengthy comments and I treasure every one because they mean people resonated with the writing. Each one counts for about fifty Likes in my head!

I find it interesting that I've put out stories I think are run-of-the-mill concepts (albeit done well, imo) and been blown away by how many people leave "great story, loved it" or even longer comments, when I expected to fight for five reads and a single comment given it was "just" a story about girl meets boy and they bonk.

Category plays an important part, I'm sure. And many drive-by readers are probably looking for a quick story to get off, and then go do something else. So titles with rude words in them, or those that "explain" the plot in the title (e.g. "My hot cousin visits and fucks the pool boy") are going to do better than the more abstract titles with that demographic.

As I says it fascinates me.

Glad I'm not alone in that disconnect between my expectations and those of readers.

Okay then, I'll start. I still think the piece that shows off my greatest depth of writing is When Yesterdays Fade. But, maybe because people think it's going to be a heavy slog or an uncomfortable subject, it's relatively uncharted by readers. Of those that do take the plunge, it's very well revered and that makes me all warm and fuzzy because it took aeons to write and perfect. [It's meant to be an uplifting celebration of a life well-lived and how that sentiment is passed on through generations].

However, in terms of sheer ratings and apparent satisfaction, that's tied between Blank Canvas and my Pink series. Both in the category. Is it because that category is more travelled, or do those pieces represent a more accessible and acceptable level of pornage that readers are here to enjoy than the heavy-going, emotional journey I consider my best work?

Intriguing.

When Yesterdays Fade

Danielle learns that life is far more than waiting for the curtain to fall.

Love Stories

This is one of those topics that fascinates me so I'm curious how other authors feel.

We all have our favourite stories that we write - ones we think represent our "best" (at the time) work that we're proud of writing. And yet these are not always the stories that evoke the greatest reaction (views, likes, comments, ...) from readers.

My questions are therefore simple:

1. What do you consider your best work (and, briefly why)?

2. Do readers agree, or has another piece you've written surprised you and resonated more with them?

Quote by LordCephius

Have you noticed more readers finding these competition entries? My story has three times more views than most of my comp entries! Maybe it's the 'mainstream' category I chose.

Competitions get a fairly high number of reads because entrants tend to read each other's for support. But yes the category can make quite a difference to reader volume, depending on how many are watching it.

I find it interesting that, besides the people who follow me, how different account names crop up on the Likes list when I venture into a new category. It's like some people gravitate towards one thing they particularly enjoy and don't stray much. So, as authors, something you may be proud of gets relatively low views if it's in a non-mainstream category. Such is the nature of Lush.

I was really struggling to come up with a cover pic for my latest story I posted above. I wanted an empty bottle of vodka lying in the foreground, and a couple in their underwear on the bed, blurred in the background, her sitting astride him.

That's very specific, and a Google search of course came up with nothing I could use, so I figured I'd try to split my search efforts and manually composite the elements. Hunted for "sensual woman on top" type images and found a few that didn't match but were possibilities, and downloaded them just in case. Then tried to find "empty vodka bottle on its side". Nope.

I turned to various AI tools for generating the full image. They almost all wanted me to buy credits to even see the first result and I wasn't risking cash when I doubted the results would even work out. Plus, any time I used "in their underwear" or "lightly clothed" or whatever, I got nsfw warnings, and the porny generators have nearly all gone to subscription models.

The most annoying part: not a single generator would render an empty bottle on its side. Not one. Even if I changed the prompt to only try to render an upturned bottle on a table. I got full bottles which were somehow full of liquid, even though the bottle was open and on its side. I got half empty bottles likewise. I even got weird bottles with a neck either end, still half full of clear liquid.

In frustration, I remembered seeker4 said Nightcafe was good so I signed my account up. Tried a prompt that wasn't too explicit at first, just asking for people in their underwear, her on top of him, and after a couple of tries got this:

https://creator.nightcafe.studio/creation/fcgHg2ETdH4zFm4MDW4q?ru=KrsMwHyeCae0yqFR2Fa91I2E5do2

Fine whatever, the bottle isn't empty but at least it looked the part and was actually bottle shaped. And crucially there was a natural break where the bed starts. So I snagged the pic, put it in Affinity, erased the couple, hunted the web for a couple in their smalls and eventually found one. It was full colour, tonally different, wrong lighting, wrong size but if I zoomed the vodka bottle in a bit, I could sort of get away with pasting the image behind it to line the beds up and maintain the perspective.

Then I adjusted the tone for colour correction, gave up fixing the lighting and just hoped nobody would notice, set about blending the two images where the beds joined so it looked kind of like a seamless shot, then applied a subtle blur to give the illusion of depth, and added Gaussian noise to try and match the grain of the vodka bottle image.

Annoyingly that left no room for the text. I wanted it in the space above her but had to put it in the middle. That did help hide the ropey stitch job, so every cloud.

Anyway, the result worked out and I was happy with the effort. I've just logged into my and have 35 messages from Nightcafe congratulating me on achieving rewards and earning badges and reminding me to log in to create more and that people have commented on my work and that I should gift people stuff to earn more points and I need to buy Pro and....

Wtf?

I didn't even click any button to "publish" the work. I thought it would.be private until such time as I was happy with the result, but no, it had published my failed attempt too, and people had commented on them both. I eventually found out how to log in (it kept logging me in as Anonymous User from the email links, and then refused to let me log in with my actual account until I ditched the cookies and started again). Found the delete button to erase the WIP image.

And found the Notification prefs.

My goodness. If you think Facebook has a tonne of settings, try Nightcafe. Notify me when someone I don't know comments, notify me when someone sneezes within half a mile of my creations, ... it goes on and on and on.

Now I've turned all those off, it'll hopefully stop spamming me. But I still haven't found out how to create something from a prompt and NOT immediately publish it. Probably there's a tick box I missed when I clicked Create. But I'm in no hurry to use it again unless I absolutely have to, so that's a problem for future me.

To be fair, I'm impressed with the quality, and it's certainly better than most of the AI image creators out there (thanks for the tip-off, seeker) but I'm not sure it'll become a staple part of my cover-generating workflow.

Quote by fuzzy1954
Bear has been on holiday in France we believe he'll return next week

Part-timers 🙄 Can't get the staff.

Quote by KimmiBeGood
I’m obsessed with an owl cam

That's so cool. I was thinking of getting a cam for our birdbox after a family moved in a few seasons back. When they left, I cleaned it out, but it's been empty since. Shame. The rent is cheep.

Quote by Seeker4
don't think I have ever even seen golf ball sized hail.

Nor have I. Judging from the size of the holes in the cheap, plastic outer skin, they were maybe 6-7mm, which is biiiig for the UK. It was this short, intense burst of cloud-dumpage - maybe 20 seconds - in the middle of a rainstorm, then it was gone.

Glad I wasn't outside. Would have hurt!

Quote by wxt55uk
we could talk about real football

Haha. I probably know only fractionally more about football than I do about that Americanised version of the game, handegg 😁 But thank you for the drink. Much obliged.

Quote by wxt55uk
judging by the size of the hailstones

That's not hail, it's weaponised weather! Insane. The biggest I've ever seen have been, like, maybe sixth of a golf ball size that damaged our conservatory roof one time. Those ones in the photo up there are next level.

We don't use AI to detect AI. After extensive testing (1 year+), we weren't comfortable with any of the AI scanners out there. Many of them give false positives, and then try to upsell 'fixes' to humanize stories.

We advise you don't use AI detectors to check your own, or our published content.

We have our own methods based on empirical observation, and reach a consensus among the mod team. If a consensus can't be met, we give writers the benefit of the doubt.

We're still developing our processes, and are fully aware that stories with various degrees of AI-generated content are getting published, but we're very happy so far that we catch the majority.

Quote by joe71
One glitch: when you Like a comment or a photo, the heart symbol doesn't turn red

Ack, drat. That was reported yonks ago and I thought it had been fixed. I'll prod the dev team. Thanks for the nudge.

The march towards Omnium unfortunately includes the Novels category, so I've taken the plunge with a series based on a bunch of random photographs I found that I'll use as cover art.

The first 'Frame' as I'm calling the chapters, has dropped, so get in on the ground floor and find out how our photography protagonist gets on Exposing Summer.

Exposing Summer - Frame 1

How Summer overcame her inhibitions and grew to love exhibitionism in front of the camera

Novels

Quote by LuceDevlin
trimming the fat off it once it's done, yknow ... those pesky conjunctions and such

Well it worked for James Ellroy...

Quote by Mit
is there a list of acceptable editing tools that will not be considered cheating when utilised

No. Keeping this list up-to-date would consume more time than there is in the universe.

Use common sense. If you ask some software to write a story for you or edit your work to improve the wording/phrasing/etc, it's the same as if someone else had written/edited it. Therefore it's not your own work. Therefore it's not permissable.

If you ask some software or a person to check your work for technical issues you might have missed (i.e. proofreading) then there's no issue.

Bottom line, the comp rules state (and have always stated) that entries must be your own work. This competition is no different.

Quote by TheShyThespian
Is it still okay to use Grammarly to check grammar and spelling

Yes of course. Or any other tool of choice, as long as it's limited to fixing basic mistakes of tense, punctuation, spelling, etc. The technical stuff we all miss after having stared at the piece for the fiftieth time.

There's a huge difference between "please mop up any grammatical mistakes I may have missed" and "write me a story about..." and "rewrite my sentences in the style of..."

Quote by AAnna
Earth wind and fire that would make a good name for a rock band

Yeah. Presumably the lofty heights of their career came after they fired Water from the band.