Oh yes, zoeys is excellent. Hope someone on a computer will link it. hint hint.
just got home.
a Hannah, please.
and i need to make one of these threads. the only problem wiv lush is that peoples be way too nice!
Mike, as you already know, i adore that story. UN DOS. It's even in my favourites list.
When i was reading it, i had one small qualm. His wife was not fleshed out enough. She seemed vaguely bitchy and i could not understand why he'd married her. Of coursr, i feltyou might have made her this way on purpose; as Malena is the heroine slash protagonist but it irked me a little. It seemed almost too convenient. I would have preferred if maybe he'd fallen for gher first and then they grew apart. She just seemed very cold.
Idk if that's the kinda criticism you were. after but it's all i got, fam. Was a brilliant story.
Excuse the typos... phone!
Just got up. Tea, please.
I think it's okay. I hate when i read a bdsm story and it seems like the dominant is simply cruel. Anything worse than a bruised butt seems excessive. Or when the sub is literally crying. i mean wtf? I read one of those last night and it also said something about tying up someone so their tits were numb. Nah fam. Spanking, butt plugs etc is all fun but when it comes to humiliation or simply cruelty... nah fam.
He's nice and supportive and funny and he can write pretty well too. Also, as you can see in his avatar, he's one seriously hot dude.
Fair enough though it seems rather a long shot to me. Sometimes it's best to let go. There are plenty of other highly entertaining stories to read.
I need an extra strong cup of coffee, please.
i'm a neat freak and he is a closet slob.
First the worst. that's all I'm gonna say.
He'd say "why'd you fucking abandon me, you heartless bitch?"