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charity69
Over 90 days ago
Female, 61
United States
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HELP PLEASE
I am looking for someone who can help me edit and proof my writing. I have deslixa and was very slow to learn in school if your not aware deslixa is a learning disorder the best way I have to describe it is a lack of being able to transfer rules of grammar spelling or even mathematical appropriately I also have trouble with being able to uses verb tenses correctly or consistently. This is what I see as my main problem but of course grammar spelling and punctuation is also something that I require help with.
I have been told that I have a gift for writing but I've found that publishing my work is horribly stressful and filled with so much frustrating that I am finding it more and more difficult to submit my work. I need a buffer someone who can help me decide which tense to work with to point out when I shift offer advice as to changes to help with the flow of the story character development, and most of all punctuation so that the story reads the way it should.
I would be willing to give credit of course. If your interested I can seen some of my work to take a look at.
xxx's Cherry
I am looking for someone who can help me edit and proof my writing. I have deslixa and was very slow to learn in school if your not aware deslixa is a learning disorder the best way I have to describe it is a lack of being able to transfer rules of grammar spelling or even mathematical appropriately I also have trouble with being able to uses verb tenses correctly or consistently. This is what I see as my main problem but of course grammar spelling and punctuation is also something that I require help with.
I have been told that I have a gift for writing but I've found that publishing my work is horribly stressful and filled with so much frustrating that I am finding it more and more difficult to submit my work. I need a buffer someone who can help me decide which tense to work with to point out when I shift offer advice as to changes to help with the flow of the story character development, and most of all punctuation so that the story reads the way it should.
I would be willing to give credit of course. If your interested I can seen some of my work to take a look at.
xxx's Cherry
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Quote by HeraTeleia
A "deeper friendship" that is exclusively online? Hang on a second, I need to stop laughing. Okay. Better now.
The truth of Lush is, a lot of the people on here--maybe even most--are not who they claim to be. Out of all of the people on my own friends list, there are perhaps five or six whom I consider to be "real" friends--meaning we communicate, and regularly, outside of Lush, in real life. We don't (usually) talk sex, aside from comments about whatever is going on with whomever we happen to be with at the moment. We talk about ordinary, everyday things--work, kids, work, laundry (no, really), vacations or lack thereof.
Searching for "the one" on Lush is a fool's errand, IMHO, although it does happen, and several real-life, solid relationships and marriages have happened after a meeting on Lush. I wouldn't pin your hopes on it, though.
If someone clicks with you, great, just don't spend your time obsessing over their friends list (I make it a habit to not even look at my friends' friends lists, or their profiles at all, if I can possibly avoid it) and don't take it too entirely seriously until you have something solid going on outside of the confines of Lush. Meaning that you've talked with them on the phone, you're texting/WhatsApping/Kiking on a daily basis, and that person is reciprocating--meaning that you're not always the one to take the initiative.
Good luck.
Laughing that was hurtful.... Fools errand even more so ...thanks for putting it in such a way as to make sure that you were only being helpful next time try not to be so "helpful"
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I was hoping that starting a conversation among submissives (especially those of us who enjoy heated bottoms). All of us feel differently about the amounts and types of pain we enjoy when it's no longer working me to that point of flying above it. Or it's not just about the impact and connection to the Dom then it's enough for me. I would love to be able to set a quantifiable measurement to it but the truth is it is different for me with each experience. I've never been caned and it sounds intense but lol there goes that tingle. LOL, So I'm sure I would not be safewording it right off the bat at least.
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Looking back I can say that I have always been submissive. I did not always have a name for it but I knew that I enjoyed certain things which at the time I was embarrassed about. I grew up in the deep south bible belt with strong Christian values. I was both ashamed of and turned on by that. I both enjoyed and hated being punished physically, I did not always get turned on by the punishment itself but later when I was alone.
It wasn't until I began reading about my "proclivities" that I understood and accepted who I was. Now I am proud of the fact that I am submissive.
It wasn't until I began reading about my "proclivities" that I understood and accepted who I was. Now I am proud of the fact that I am submissive.
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Looking for more than Sex. I want a relationship, someone, I can devote myself to I'm not interested in random hookups and I won't do that. I am not asking for you to give up your friends online but I do want you to be devoted to a deeper more intense relationship with me.
Contact me, chat for a bit lets see if we can be more.
Cherry
Contact me, chat for a bit lets see if we can be more.
Cherry
Pass..but a couple of drinks as friends
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Why do we do our nails, hair, dress sexy, walk that walk, wear those fucking heels, worry about our hair, makeup, and about a million other things we want to be seen, as a sexy woman or just as someone who cares about our looks it's all about how someone else views us. and of course to feel good about yourself, or for pride because others find you attractive. You don't want to appear ugly or unkept it's all visual.
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Hello, my name is Charity but most people call me Cherry, I'm 52 and although I am new to the lifestyle I have been submissive all my adult life, my first fantasies were of submitting to someone usually people in authority. I married young seeking something thinking a family would make me feel fulfilled so I had children with someone who was the least dominant person in the world. Which of course led to massive amounts of us trying things to try to make it work sexually, some things helped for a time, but eventually faded and I was back to my fantasies again. So after all these years I am seeking someone to bring me into the lifestyle.
One thing about waiting so long to take this leap, I have done plenty of research I know what this lifestyle is and is not I am seeking a true power exchange. Dominated not bullied. I am willing to take my time to find the right person. I will be honest with you and devote myself to you.
I would like to get to know any subs who might me willing to guide me as well.
Cherry
One thing about waiting so long to take this leap, I have done plenty of research I know what this lifestyle is and is not I am seeking a true power exchange. Dominated not bullied. I am willing to take my time to find the right person. I will be honest with you and devote myself to you.
I would like to get to know any subs who might me willing to guide me as well.
Cherry
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I am a 52 year old submissive looking for a male dominant who will lovingly guide me I am not into heavy humiliation unless its part of punishment I do not want to be degraded. On-Line Only with a full contract. If you will have me I will be a loving submissive your needs will be my sole concern It would also be good if their was a female submissive who can help guide me into selecting a Dominant