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Clumeleon
Quote by Shylass
So you can be picky about grammar and I can't be picky about a label?
No, apparently. My pickiness was commented on twice.
I was only suggesting that you don't get yourself as worked up as you appear to about that "label"; can't be good for you.
Bollocks to it; I need a beer.
Clumeleon
Quote by Shylass
And bollocks to being British! I'm English. And I say it with a Yorkshire accent, not a British one, so bollocks to one thread sounding "British" because we all sound different.
I say it with a Scottish accent (quite generic because I move around a lot) which, by definition, is a British accent. In the same way, a Texan accent is an American accent.
You know, I'm a Scottish Nationalist and all for breaking up the United Kingdom but I've never come across someone as anti-Britain as you, lass. I don't really get it (and I'm not proposing we get into it) but, for goodness' sake, ease up; it's only a flippant remark.
Clumeleon
Quote by 1ball
I'm pretty sure mouths would be left out by that design thing.
True but shit doesn't come out of my girlfriend's mouth (that's the party line and I'm sticking to it).
You have pointed out a big flaw in my argument; drat! However, oral sex can be viewed as a whole other thing, often part of foreplay, whereas anal is really an alternative to vaginal intercourse.
Alas, I clutch at straws. I just don't want to put my penis up anyone's arse is all.
Clumeleon
I like Magical_felix's advice, personally. Keep doing your best, day after day. It's hard but relationships are hard. To support her through this is a truly noble act, even if it is at the cost of your relationship in the end. You seem to care for her a great deal and so I sincerely hope it works out.
If you are religious or spiritual in any way, use that. Seek guidance from a priest/rabbi/senior in faith/whoever and pray/chant/meditate/whatever. You have to be a rock.
If you decide it's too much for you to handle, you must make a clean break. Remember that you're not the reason she became depressed. It may well be that the reason she has become depressed was to show up the weaknesses in your relationship. That's life. Don't beat yourself up over it.
Make sure that you stay healthy, well-rested and on top of your studies. You're no use to anyone if you're in a low life state yourself.
If you are religious or spiritual in any way, use that. Seek guidance from a priest/rabbi/senior in faith/whoever and pray/chant/meditate/whatever. You have to be a rock.
If you decide it's too much for you to handle, you must make a clean break. Remember that you're not the reason she became depressed. It may well be that the reason she has become depressed was to show up the weaknesses in your relationship. That's life. Don't beat yourself up over it.
Make sure that you stay healthy, well-rested and on top of your studies. You're no use to anyone if you're in a low life state yourself.
Clumeleon
Quote by KatarinaLaurent
Which is better?
Long story, or several short stories with the same characters?
I already have a start of over 3k words, but would like to do more with these characters.
What is the limit on length? Is it 10k?
The limit is 10k, yes.
I don't think one way is "better" than the other. If you can tell the whole story in 10,000 words, I think you should do that. If you have three distinct 3,000 word stories that involve the same characters then you should submit them separately.
If it's a larger story arc then ensure the breaks are natural. Also, be aware that, unless your opening chapter is truly outstanding, your readership will tail off with every successive chapter. Make each part captivating and make your reader want more.
For longer stories that are successful, see any of Dancing_Doll's work. She writes 8-10k stories which are inevitably popular.
For a series of distinct stories with recurring characters, see the Robert and Julianna series written jointly by Alphamagus and Principessa (found on Principessa's page).
For a long story in chapters, see Jaymal's Nailing Neely Jordan saga in ten parts - truly fantastic.
