I do please!

Fireworks:
The fireworks went off at New Year’s Eve, and a female arm grabbed me.
“Happy New year,” she purred and kissed me hard.
I went hard looking at her hard tits pushing through her skinny dress, and pulled her into the alley.
She pulled my hard cock out and placed it on her wet pussy.
As the fireworks banged, we kissed and fucked hard, and her dress fell.
Then we came at the final bang.
Bonfire
We were caressing and making out by the bonfire.
BAM! The rain came down hard, and we ran inside.
Soaked, we hungrily pulled off clothes, my hands pawing her tits, then her pussy.
Her hand yanked off my trousers, grabbing my cock.
I pushed her to the floor and pushed my hard cock into her, greedily fucking her hard as I sucked her tits.
We moaned as outside the bonfire fizzled in the rain.
Quote by Rosiex369
When I write, I often find myself writing about a character's backstory that is not relevant to the story, but when I remove it, it looks just so empty. And I do like to go into detail. Would you write more irrelevant things so that the reader has a good image in their head while reading, or would you sacrifice it for the sake of story progression?
With my Sam series, I've fed it in where appropriate to enlighten. Think that's the best way
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I'm looking for an editor/proofer/ general feedback and comments on a piece. It is 7580 words/ 13 pages in Microsoft word. This is only my second published story so any help would be appreciated. I have run it through two different grammar/ proofing programs. Please message me if interested and I can give more details.
Thank you in advance,
Do a word Spell and grammar, then Grammarly - though that is grumpy if you aren't using US-EN
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Cory chase for sure.
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CC is a bit samey: all her scenes are similar vs e.g. Angela White
No. My GF came round to the house and started kissing me passionately from the off which was unsual. We went into my room and started doing our usual foreplay. Then she said "do I want to try?". I said "yes - no condom". She said I could do a 6 gentle thrusts in a few places, so I did that. Next night, I'd got some ..