I have written a story called Happy Birthday Pete. I submitted it and was told it needs to be i,proved. Punctuation for one. They said it was basically a good story. I am not a writer, but I did get a book published. Its on Amazon. I am not a writer and that was my first attempt. Hard to believe I actually sold over 120 copies. Even had quite a few good reviews.Now I am, trying to learn and get this story accepted here. I really hope you can lend a hand and give suggestions.

I now have 9 down for maintenence notifications

I fall into the same delimma that the others do, I submitted (before I read what is required). Now I would like to have someone proof read. The moderator that read my story says it has good potential just has to come up to our standards.
I don't know how this works. The name of the story is Happy Birthday Pete. If it were published it would probably be in Swingers. I need help to get it published, because I have a continuation story that needs to be published too. Help Please

Help. I am an average Joe. I did write a book and its on Amazon, but I never had anyone ever proof read or give me any advice on what I did wrong. I did submit a story, I was told I need help. Can anyone work with me? I would really like to share my memories. I have so many. I also have a continuation That I submitted. I dont know where it is now. I still have it but was told that the other one that was rejected was still undergoing scrutiny.

currently I have 4 notifications that say the same thing. Down for maintainence. Everytime I sign on its there with one more added.

where do I find that?

I wrote a story. Then joined. I just purchased the gold. Now that I have written the story (title above) How does it get published on here? Do you notify me? The story will have a 2nd story continuation. The stories that I am going to write are actual events that have happened. My memories.