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jayjay123
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 34
0 miles · Texas
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Quote by sprite
If you're serious about the helpful hints, you really should think about fleshing out your stories - they're pretty short, and there's not a lot of depth to them - I don't feel like I'm given the chance to get immersed in them. Try working on creating a world rather then just banging them off quickly.
Yes of coarse, I want to become a better writer and was serious haha. Thank you for the hint, I will try and give a better "world view" in my next story. can you possibly give me an example?
Rookie Scribe
Hello guys and gals, I am an aspiring writer in adult fiction and non fiction (yes I take stories from my life). I would like you to read (and rate) my stories and tell me what you think may help me become a better writer. I am very good with constructive criticism. please feel free to post here or send me a message and add me, thank you
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Hello one and all, I am aspiring writer, among other things. I would like to get some feedback and if you would also rate my stories after you read them id be great full (if its a 5, haha just kidding) but on a serious note im looking for any helpful hints you may have for me. also please send me a friends request after you read. I will accept pretty much everyone.
