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You're a sexy witch! Would you give me some advice on how to meet similar witches in real life? I've read an article about Slavic women here , but I'm not sure. Would you recommend something for me?)

If you want to meet real witches, check out any local esoteric store, or campus, or even go online to look for pagan groups or covens in your area. Simply find them, get to know them, and the rest, as they say, is magick.

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Probably is written somewhere on the site, but I a bit lazy so I will just ask here: what are the criterias based on which a story is declared the winner? Thanks!

Competition stories are judged on the overall writing quality, originality, story, how closely it adheres to the theme, and flow, as well as enjoyability and other abstracts. A group of talented writers reads all the stories and vote on which ones are the best in their opinion.

If you like fun, like sex, and enjoy a good cyber...please check out my CyberPunk story, Hot Blood (<--click the link to read, like, and comment). It's a fun, Sci-Fi romp through the seedy sections of a dystopian, cyberpunk future.

My contribution to the competition:
Hot Blood, a sexy Cyberpunk romp through the pleasure district of a dystopian, corporate-ruled future.

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And already experienced in the genre of steampunk! Planerscapes was a really fun series. ;)

Oh, thank you so much. It's probably the only one of my stories that I wasn't disappointed with.

Krystal-Punk: noun. A subgenre of Punk literature pontificated with overt sexuality and horny redheads, typically drawing from Dark Sci-Fi and Noir but riddled with humor.
I'm so IN!

I plead the fifth

Congrats, ladies!

Yes, the moderators are well aware of the difference between UK and US English and we do take that into account. The draft going to bit-heaven is a tech thing, not a mod thing.

All our love and witchy, positive vibes for you and yours.

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put it through Word checker. They are funny about punctuation in quotes, so might be best to rework to avoid direct quotes

The mods aren't "funny" about punctuation or quotes or grammar; they just want it to be correct. Any AI editor, punctuation checker, or editor is very helpful but not foolproof, especially for dialogue and literary comma rules. While they are quite helpful, and I run everything I write through two online editors and grammar checkers, you still need to have a basic grasp of dialogue rules, and punctuation, and know what is or isn't an independent clause. Nonetheless, that is good advice but is only a starting point, not the final destination.

I learned the hard way, repeatedly, that being upfront and open is always the best policy, and saves time as well. If my S/O can't handle my passions, then they won't be able to handle me in the long run. That being said, I have some pretty wild urges and I still get nervous about asking for some of the crazier stuff.

In your particular situation, especially if you think he would judge you negatively (but, as an aside, every man wants a freak!), then have him go first. Suggest that to "spice things up" you two watch porn, together. then, get him all riled up and play with him while you choose some Cuckquean thing "entirely accidentally." Go insane and then have him take you while you dirty talk about how hot it would be to be made to watch as he has sex with another woman. I promise you that if you do it without embarrassment, he won't last long because no man can resist being urged to fuck somebody else while they're having sex.

Then, either set it up and go through with it, or keep it as a fantasy and introduce the converse of that, him watching. More dirty talk, more sex, and bring it up enough that he knows that you want it.

When your partner is a part of the fantasy, from beginning to end so far as they know, magic happens.

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So... if you're having sex with someone? you usually know their name.

I plead the fifth.

He approached me and asked me my name.
"Let's cut to the chase," I replied. "Unless you have your own car, five thousand in the bank, and an eight-inch cock, I'm not interested."
He laughed and replied. "I have several cars and a motorcycle. I probably have nearly one hundred thousand in my 'play' account right now." He paused. "But, if you think I'm, going to cut my dick in half just to talk to you, fucking forget it!"

If the man is a good lover and knows how to turn on my mind, then no, size doesn't matter for good sex. However, if he knows how to push my buttons and turn my dials, has a nice, big, thick cock that fills me up, and knows how to use it, wow, just fucking wow.

Great work, everyone. Congrats to the podium winner and the top ten! I loved this comp.

I grew up fairly poor, so no internet, no cable TV, etc. However, my mother has an addiction to Romance novels, so I inherited her trove of housewife smut. I can still hear her. "Oh, Kryssi, you just have to read this one; it's steaming hot. I bent down the corners of the first pages of all the best sex scenes in case you want to flick the bean."

Avast, me mutiny is only the beginning, for I am the reason Roger is Jolly, and my reign of WHORE-er has just begun. The Sea-witch not only looks good in a hat, but the crew of buccaneers makes her buck as they sing the praises of their true captain Krystal the Red, the SEA-witch!
"Fifteen men Jizz on Krystal's chest. she's a ho-ho-ho and covered in cum!"

Now hoist the main sail, pay the Devil, batten the hatches, and set course to the seven seas. second star on the right and straight on 'til morning. For to a'glean enough crew to sate the Rad Captain's lust, we're going to need a bigger boat.

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Krystal, I think you are one of the most intriguing people on Lush. Insightful, intelligent and a tough Mod who gives exceptional guidance. Coming from a “shallow pool” I took no offense but if we could find a place I would surely attempt to add some some depth to my groping and grunting. I love you dearly just so you know.❤️

I'm not really a tough mod. If the writer is trying and learning from the advice, I'll go way above and beyond to help them realize their true potential, as well as get their story published. When I began writing, the mods taught me more with their (constant) returns than myriad "how to write" books ever did, and I'm just trying to pay the potential they saw in me forward. I may, at times, come off a bit terse as a moderator, but that's more tonality from brevity than my actual mindset. In fact, I feel that the mods, as a whole, are very much like that.

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Obviously some think men are shallow pools of hormonal driven urges with no other thoughts but to rut with whatever comes their way.

If you meant me, that was neither my intent nor what I intoned (at least, I thought so). I did mention the inner drive and root mote of personality. That was me attempting to sum up, for brevity, the stoic solidity of character and its depth that makes a man a man. To me, men, real men, are strength and determination, dedicated to their inner essence, unwavering, and their moral compass unyielding. that is what I meant.

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I'm surprised nobody has nominated you. Ye certainly has the ass-ets to lead both sexes astray and spearhead a mutiny 😜

Lily-livered landlubbers, the lot

I'm surprised there aren't more entries. I'm tempted to single somebody out for Krystalization... eeny, meeny, miney...

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If it prevents just one instance of uninspiring, uninspired all-caps-repeat-letter-multiple-exclamation-points, it'll have been worth it, really 😐

*hangs her head low and closes her word processing program

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Hello I am new to this group, thought I was a good writer but had so many grammar errors! Can someone help?

Before i even think about submitting a story I do the following:

Let it sit for at least an entire day and then proofread it, very slowly. That ensures that I read what I wrote, not what I meant.

Run it through the free versions of Languagetool and then Grammarly. There are several, good online editing and proofreading checkers; those are the two I use. They aren't foolproof and sometimes disagree because AI is never perfect; however, an unbiased, virtual eye is always helpful.

Go over every word and phrase in a quick read, asking myself if this phrase or that word is clumsy or could be improved.

Double-check word tenses for consistency.

For me, that knocks out probably 80% of my errors.

Captain Winky McWinkface! the scourge of the seven seas

Here's a good starting point for writing from the different perspectives, as far as erotica goes: Women need a reason to have sex; men just need a place.

To write a believable woman, regardless of sexuality, simply go one layer deeper into the psyche and show us "why" she's doing what she is. Then, tie in her thoughts and feelings as most women are the complete package, not just what flickers on the porn screen.

"Krystal was so horny that she fingered herself," simply doesn't evoke anything beyond the visual aspect of the aforementioned, slutty redhead finger-banging herself.
To make it "womanly," dive a little deeper and add in her heart, mind, and soul from her perspective. "Seeing him standing there, those taut muscles rippling in the sun, his brilliant smile piercing her soul, Krystal became so possessed by the dirty, lust-riddled thoughts coursing through her mind that her hand wandered between her heated thighs, her fingers stroking her engorged clit exactly the way she wished he would."

To write men well, one only needs to know their inner drive, the root mote of their personality, and the fact that, for the most part, it is the acts of sex and enticement that get their motors revving. "Jeff's fingers worked their magic up and down her thighs; the sight of her writhing in ecstatic bliss set his passion alight, his cock rising as high as the fires burning in his soul."

My two cents.

Cyber has honored me with some of his sketches, and they're quite flattering.

Excellent story and well deserved!

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And don't forget Krystal ... NO punctuation

Mind you, I thought Rachel wouldn't mind being a bit tied up in the basement.

Better yet, Shatner commas...

I, looked, all around, seeing nothing, but, the, two, nude women, caressing each other.

My new 115-word story, A Taste of Sprite, should be there soon. Now sex, no action, just a few sentences ending with ...to be continued

So, my new one, based on Shakespeare, How Would I make Sprite Orgasm, Let Me Count the Ways, is a no-go?

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stories that have lots (or any) of this. OH MY GOD, FUCK ME BABY, STICK THAT BIG COCK IN ME. OH MY GOD, I AM CUMMING. YES! YES! YES! YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

Stop eavesdropping on my sexy, naughty fun time!