A conversation between my daughter and I. I offer this to all young women just for the heck of it : )
My darling, you are still young and still crying like a baby cries for a bottle.
You say he doesn't plan and make lists and that these are supposed to get you where you want to be.
I say, you both worked hard at getting just the basics for yourselves and each of you did this by yourselves.
Like the baby crying, you want everything life has to offer right now. Weariness comes over you. A need to run away overwhelms you.
I ask, does he love you? You say yes.
I ask, do you love him? You answer confused and are losing faith by the moment.
You say you want your family. The father, the mother, and the children happy together.
You harden your heart but tell me girl, will this get you anything you want? Will anything but work get you what you want?
Anger fills you and there is right in anger. Anger is a tool life gives you. It gets things done. But anger is not what you want.
All doesn't happen like magic. Your relief will come with work. Add dedication and you will have what you seek.
I have this now. My home is built and it is comfortable. I could not give it to you if I wanted. It can not be given.
The garden I've grown has bloomed and seeded in you and yours.
Go now daughter and build a home : )
Life brings the words of a song
The pain opens a gate
A tiny smile brings flood
One's alone self takes a coarse
Touch is searched for and held
The journey continues away
Mournful pride slides by
Holding still and steadily
Day breaks and pushes
Winding forward and set
Elders amend and cease
The soul is not lost but placed
Melody melody
liked the last part a lot a : )
"Uh! great you feel
Creating waves inside
Twisting Drilling
Breaking me apart
Oh! Oooh! Awh!
Rip me apart
Eject as a dart
What you have in store
Incessantly even more
Hold me firm
Keep me warm
Bring the storm
That's hitting your door"
We make our own destiny and get exactly what is meant for us.
Happy Birthday Doll and Wish You Many Many More : )
Write about what you know. Experience is key. Even the simplest scenario can be interesting and arousing.
This not to say you need to go out and fuck everything in sight. Writing evolves with the writer and is interesting in this way. A story of self touch and exploration is a good place to start. This can take you to places you know about and fill your head with fantasy which is interesting as well : )
"Even in literature and art, no man who bothers about originality will ever be original: whereas if you simply try to tell the truth (without caring twopence how often it has been told before) you will, nine times out of ten, become original without ever having noticed it."
C. S. Lewis (1898 - 1963)
A good sexual experience or fantasy gives me inspiration : )
Either is fine. I do write sex into a love story and have written love stories that are mostly sex. Sex and love are a great combination and turn me on quite a bit.
I certainly hate piss on the seats, floors and everywhere- where's your humanity? One thing's for sure, practice makes perfect either way! Sure can make a mess ladies.
Just because you say you love someone isn't going to make someone love you. But if you do love someone, tell them. I believe that when a man picks, he does this committed and the odds of success are greater.
Women let him choose you and love him all the more for it- Men, choose wisely.
My man is the Dragon through and through : )
I agree with WMM on this one. The guy is not large enough or of little experience. Both or either could cause loss of friction in a bunch of wetness. If this complaint happens again, try and have him work though the initial flood until it subsides a bit. For you this may take time but will get you and him where you want to be : )
I believe the man should pick the woman and not the other way around- think it works out better that way naturally : )
Happy Birthday and many many more : )
I only want to read about the sex for the most part. Because the rest can be old-hat. Now if a writer takes me someplace I haven't been, I like that throughout : )
Good advice for me personally everyone.
More than not, when I read, I don't know the gender of the author and so take the writing for its self without this consideration. This may be funny but, it's true. It seems if I do take the time to know the author, usually, they are writing from their proper perspective and really, I personally can't think of any example for the opposite.
But with all that said, I see your points. Writing as the opposite gender can be just that : ) Very cool and oh so interesting in its self : )
Rat
...Rats have great respect for their parents and dote on their own children. They love their home. Family life is very important to them. Rats born during the evening are tempted to a more hectic life than those born during the day.
Rats learn early, quickly, and are avid readers. They know how to express themselves well-both written and orally. Given the slightest chance, Rats can make a success of their lives.
for me, it's more important that the details be completely realistic and the story not so. For instance, if the green clown with the big nose is fucking the fat lady or maybe the tooth fairy, i can accept it, and even be entertained if the mood is set realistically and the actions are logical and interesting : )
Libra born in the year of the Rat : )