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A conversation between my daughter and I. I offer this to all young women just for the heck of it : )


My darling, you are still young and still crying like a baby cries for a bottle.

You say he doesn't plan and make lists and that these are supposed to get you where you want to be.

I say, you both worked hard at getting just the basics for yourselves and each of you did this by yourselves.

Like the baby crying, you want everything life has to offer right now. Weariness comes over you. A need to run away overwhelms you.

I ask, does he love you? You say yes.

I ask, do you love him? You answer confused and are losing faith by the moment.

You say you want your family. The father, the mother, and the children happy together.

You harden your heart but tell me girl, will this get you anything you want? Will anything but work get you what you want?

Anger fills you and there is right in anger. Anger is a tool life gives you. It gets things done. But anger is not what you want.

All doesn't happen like magic. Your relief will come with work. Add dedication and you will have what you seek.

I have this now. My home is built and it is comfortable. I could not give it to you if I wanted. It can not be given.

The garden I've grown has bloomed and seeded in you and yours.

Go now daughter and build a home : )
Life brings the words of a song
The pain opens a gate
A tiny smile brings flood
One's alone self takes a coarse
Touch is searched for and held
The journey continues away
Mournful pride slides by
Holding still and steadily
Day breaks and pushes
Winding forward and set
Elders amend and cease
The soul is not lost but placed
Melody melody
Quote by DirtyMartini
When Friends Betray Friends

When friends betray friends,
With words less than kind,
It tears apart the friendship,
And all the ties that bind.

When friends betray friends,
It hurts you to the core.
All the trust and love,
It all goes out the door.

Like an ice cold sword,
That tears through your heart,
When friends betray friends,
It will tear your soul apart.

All the love and friendship,
Built up from the ground,
When friends betray friends,
It all comes crashing down.

And all that peace and harmony,
Built throughout the years,
When friends betray friends,
You’re left with only tears.

1-26-11.




wow -that was beautiful : )
liked the last part a lot a : )

"Uh! great you feel
Creating waves inside
Twisting Drilling
Breaking me apart
Oh! Oooh! Awh!
Rip me apart
Eject as a dart
What you have in store
Incessantly even more
Hold me firm
Keep me warm
Bring the storm
That's hitting your door"
We make our own destiny and get exactly what is meant for us.
Happy Birthday Doll and Wish You Many Many More : )
Write about what you know. Experience is key. Even the simplest scenario can be interesting and arousing.

This not to say you need to go out and fuck everything in sight. Writing evolves with the writer and is interesting in this way. A story of self touch and exploration is a good place to start. This can take you to places you know about and fill your head with fantasy which is interesting as well : )

"Even in literature and art, no man who bothers about originality will ever be original: whereas if you simply try to tell the truth (without caring twopence how often it has been told before) you will, nine times out of ten, become original without ever having noticed it."

C. S. Lewis (1898 - 1963)
A good sexual experience or fantasy gives me inspiration : )
Quote by Rawiya71
One of my editors is offering a Male POV course. I am thinking of taking it. He says I don't need it but I would like to do it just so my gay erotica will not sound too girly... ;)

I am just a natural romantic... I like my /m hot, sensual and emotional...




Cool course : ) I wonder if you would be willing to share the exercises with us here on this thread?
Either is fine. I do write sex into a love story and have written love stories that are mostly sex. Sex and love are a great combination and turn me on quite a bit.
I certainly hate piss on the seats, floors and everywhere- where's your humanity? One thing's for sure, practice makes perfect either way! Sure can make a mess ladies.
Peeing on toilet seats, what is up with this? I work in a public place and deal with women peeing on toilet seats daily. We have traveled a lot and also on the road I deal with this. In fact, I have a sister who has three daughters and none of them can sit on a public toilet seat! And so, when we're traveling together everyone rushes to get to the seats before they do! Really strange. There are little kids and old people who have a problem hovering above the seat! And, some of us might like to just sit. Is there a way to stop this awful mess?

I know about the paper covers. So what? Sometimes you have them and sometimes you don't. Regardless, the paper left soaked with pee and stuck to the seat is not cool either.
Just because you say you love someone isn't going to make someone love you. But if you do love someone, tell them. I believe that when a man picks, he does this committed and the odds of success are greater.


Women let him choose you and love him all the more for it- Men, choose wisely.
I agree with WMM on this one. The guy is not large enough or of little experience. Both or either could cause loss of friction in a bunch of wetness. If this complaint happens again, try and have him work though the initial flood until it subsides a bit. For you this may take time but will get you and him where you want to be : )
Yes- in fact we mention it to each other from time to time. Think we talked about it last night. Our sessions are more than thought possible. I've said before that, he can make me orgasm with just a touch of a finger in the right place. He knows how to do so much..so well. Sometimes when he gets me there he'll hold me and keeps me cumming even though I beg him to stop. The thought of death has crossed my mind. I hope he never wants to off me.

I've heard him voice the same concern with a "what a way to go" added.


we sick i think
I believe the man should pick the woman and not the other way around- think it works out better that way naturally : )
Quote by Butterfly
Nice topic, Myself. The Rat in me agrees with you on what you posted smile

Quote by Woman


The following is from Moonslipper

They’re also thrifty and very good with handling money. Family and close friends are exceptionally important to them.

The Rat will feel glad in a lot of ways to see the end of the Year of the Tiger! There were a lot of changes and the pace was fast - not something the Rat is entirely comfortable with.

An important aspect of 2011 for the Rat is time for personal growth, hobbies and developing skills that bring happiness. For any Rats that like to write, this year will see their creativity heightened and whether for pleasure or profit, writing is highlighted in a most positive way. Health wise, the Rat will have felt burnt out sometimes during 2010 and in 2011 his vitality will be improved.


Thanks for the link, Woman. I've always thought the Chinese Zodiac is pretty cool and more on par with a lot of my characteristics...as far as the star signs go. More so than the Western Zodiac and horoscope stuff. I don't really get to into all of this but it is definitely interesting to read up on now and then.

Funny, there were a lot of changes for me (my family) over the past year and I am glad to see things starting to calm down again and get into a nice groove since our move and everything. And that little bit about being more creative...how about that!? I've never written anything for anyone else to read (other than the occasional poem for a friend or loved one). As far as penning any erotica, that desire has always been in the back of my mind. My little 'journal' of random thoughts and ideas (which I have kept mainly to myself over the years lol) has been calling to me more and more over the past couple of months and I'm really feeling that I would like to turn some of those jottings into something with a bit of a plot and a couple of saucy, fun and naughty characters...hmmm, yep, feeling the itch to do this!

Anyway, again Myself, good and interesting topic for a post :).


The combination of Libra and the Rat pretty much explains me completely. The Rat wants order for family and home and the scale of Libra needs balance : ) I want a lot (can't help it).
I only want to read about the sex for the most part. Because the rest can be old-hat. Now if a writer takes me someplace I haven't been, I like that throughout : )
Good advice for me personally everyone.

More than not, when I read, I don't know the gender of the author and so take the writing for its self without this consideration. This may be funny but, it's true. It seems if I do take the time to know the author, usually, they are writing from their proper perspective and really, I personally can't think of any example for the opposite.

But with all that said, I see your points. Writing as the opposite gender can be just that : ) Very cool and oh so interesting in its self : )
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I always get the expression "play it by ear" wrong and say "play it by year"



I think you're related somehow : )

alright/all right- cool
Rat

...Rats have great respect for their parents and dote on their own children. They love their home. Family life is very important to them. Rats born during the evening are tempted to a more hectic life than those born during the day.

Rats learn early, quickly, and are avid readers. They know how to express themselves well-both written and orally. Given the slightest chance, Rats can make a success of their lives.
for me, it's more important that the details be completely realistic and the story not so. For instance, if the green clown with the big nose is fucking the fat lady or maybe the tooth fairy, i can accept it, and even be entertained if the mood is set realistically and the actions are logical and interesting : )
RAT
Jan.31,1900 to Feb.19,1901
Feb.18,1912 to Feb.06,1913
Feb.05,1924 to Jan.24,1925
Jan.24,1936 to Feb.10,1937
Feb.10,1948 to Feb.14,1949
Jan.28,1960 to Feb.14,1961
Jan.16,1972 to Feb.02,1973
Feb.02,1984 to Feb.19,1985

OX
Feb.19,1901 to Feb.07,1902
Feb.06,1913 to Jan.25,1914
Jan.25,1925 to Feb.12,1926
Feb.11,1937 to Jan.30,1938
Jan.29,1949 to Feb.16,1950
Feb.15,1961 to Feb.04,1962
Feb.03,1973 to Jan.22,1974
Feb.20,1985 to Feb.08,1986

TIGER
Feb.08,1902 to Jan.28,1903
Jan.26,1914 to Feb.13,1915
Feb.13,1926 to Feb.01,1927
Jan.31,1938 to Feb.18,1939
Feb.17,1950 to Feb.05,1951
Feb.05,1962 to Jan.24,1963
Jan.23,1974 to Feb.10,1975
Jan.09,1986 to Jan.28,1987

HARE
Jan.29,1903 to Feb.15,1904
Feb.14,1915 to Feb.16,1916
Feb.02,1927 to Jan.22,1928
Feb.19,1939 to Feb.07,1940
Feb.06,1951 to Jan.26,1952
Jan.25,1963 to Feb.12,1964
Feb.11,1975 to Jan.30,1976
Jan.29,1987 to Feb.16,1988

DRAGON
Feb.16,1904 to Feb.03,1905
Feb.03,1916 to Jan.22,1917
Jan.23,1928 to Feb.09,1929
Feb.08,1940 to Jan.26,1941
Jan.27,1952 to Feb.13,1953
Feb.13,1964 to Feb.01,1965
Jan.31,1976 to Feb.17,1977
Feb.17,1988 to Feb.05,1989

SNAKE
Feb.04,1905 to Jan.24,1906
Jan.23,1917 to Feb.10,1918
Feb.10,1929 to Jan.29,1930
Jan.27,1941 to Feb.14,1942
Feb.14,1953 to Feb.02,1954
Feb.02,1965 to Jan.20,1966
Feb.18,1977 to Feb.06,1978
Feb.06,1989 to Jan.26,1990

HORSE
Jan.25,1906 to Feb.12,1907
Feb.11,1918 to Jan.31,1919
Jan.30,1930 to Feb.16,1931
Jan.15,1942 to Feb.04 1943
Feb.03,1954 to Jan.23,1955
Jan.21,1966 to Feb.08,1967
Feb.07,1978 to Jan.27,1979
Jan.27,1990 to Feb.14,1991

SHEEP
Feb.13,1907 to Feb.01,1908
Feb.01,1919 to Feb.19,1920
Feb.17,1931 to Feb.05,1932
Jan.05,1943 to Jan.24,1944
Jan.24,1955 to Feb.11,1956
Feb.09,1967 to Jan.28,1968
Jan.28,1979 to Feb.15,1980
Feb.15,1991 to Feb.03,1992

MONKEY
Feb.02,1908 to Jan.21,1909
Feb.20,1920 to Feb.07,1921
Feb.06,1932 to Jan.25,1933
Jan.25,1944 to Feb.12,1945
Feb.12,1956 to Jan.30,1957
Jan.30,1968 to Feb.16,1969
Feb.16,1980 to Feb.04,1981
Feb.04,1992 to Jan.22,1993

ROOSTER
Jan.22,1909 to Feb.09,1910
Feb.08,1921 to Jan.27,1922
Jan.26,1933 to Feb.13,1934
Feb.13,1945 to Feb.01,1946
Jan.31,1957 to Feb.17,1958
Feb.17,1969 to Feb.05,1970
Feb.05,1981 to Jan.24,1982
Jan.23,1993 to Feb.09,1994

DOG
Feb.10,1910 to Jan.29,1911
Jan.28,1922 to Feb.13,1923
Feb.14,1934 to Feb.03,1935
Feb.02,1946 to Jan.21,1947
Feb.18,1958 to Feb.07,1959
Feb.06,1970 to Jan.26,1971
Jan.25,1982 to Feb.12,1983
Feb.10,1994 to Jan.30,1995

BOAR
Jan.30,1911 to Feb.17,1912
Feb.16,1923 to Feb.04,1924
Feb.04,1935 to Jan.23,1936
Jan.22,1947 to Feb.09,1948
Feb.08,1959 to Jan.27,1960
Jan.27,1971 to Jan.15,1972
Feb.13,1983 to Feb.01,1984
Jan.31,1995 to Feb.18,1996

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