Tease you with my tongue until you beg for more
Agree
Being naughty under the table in a secluded corner of a restaurant is better
Shows you how naughty I can be
They say nice guys always finish last ....
Let's find out: fuck
Probably not, but those who've read my stories know I've thought about it
Adele was Abner before "the operation"
Guilty
Ever had sex in the grass in a public park?
Well .... This hot guy walked into the room and I don't know how it how it happened, but my clothes just sort of fell off
Hmmm .... I've never been with a woman, but it might be fun to explore ;)
It wouldn't turn me on at all, but there are people out there into some pretty kinky things
Speaks fluent Smartass ;)
An experienced woman can show you more pleasure on the way home than some of these young girls could show you all night
I've never been with a woman ... convince me ;)
Like any vote, I generally vote for the things that I like.
I seldom give less than a 4 and don't always have a particular comment to offer.
No rating system is perfect, but I'm pretty comfortable with the one we have
Let's look at the comments on a couple stories I have done:
"Whoo! Extremely arousing! The way you set the story up, developed the characters, built the sexual tension, and brought it all home is truly a work of art. Great job!"
The fact that it got 37 votes in a little over a month with an average score of 4.78 suggests that a number of readers agree
Another comment on the same story: "Scored with a 2 because: This story just didn't seem to fit the topic. Sure it involved married people, but it was straight sex, with no extra tension or forbiddeness to it."
This was a little disappointing, but I saw it as more a comment to the effect that this reader didn't find what he expected in that particular category than a mean spirited comment; with the suggestion that he might have given it a better rating in another category.
Personally, I didn't see that dwelling on the fact that they were sneaking around behind her husband's back would have added to the story; but that's one person's opinion.
A comment on another story: "Excellent build-up, sets the mood just perfect! The foreplay and oral sex is great, but the main event is way too short...more detail would have made this an outstanding story! Very good, to be sure, but could have been just a tad better."
He was right; and the slightly lower scoring of 4.59 tends to confirm that
It was 4 in the morning and I was anxious to finish the story.
I could have added more detail and at some point, I may go back and do so.
Oh .... I'm sure we could think of something interesting ;)
Things I would take:
A map of Los Angeles
A map of Los Vegas
Enough cash to buy up a few hundred acres of << ahem >> "worthless" desert
Why:
Can we say "Thousand Oaks", boys and girls?
What I'd bring back:
Clark Gable