Would appreciate any comments on this recent piece to be found at:
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/this-moment-of-afterglow.aspx
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redwriter34
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 91
0 miles · Whitley Bay
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Quote by 69Kisses96
Your movie should start with "r". Rocky.
If you look you will see that Etairay beat me to the punch by a few minutes--I type slowly--old age, you know lol
Damned Yankees
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One dog--shih-tzu, Chip, 8years old, who licks my feet as I put them on the floor first thing in the morning. He has such good taste.
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I have over 30 stories on Lush since November 2017 (more on this later as I try to break through the 8 comment barrier) I have just had my first love poem verified and had a couple of very kind comments from a very low viewing figure. I would appreciate being told, if someone is kind enough to read it, whether I should keep up the poetry or stick to the stories. The poem would be located here:
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lovepoems/beforepassionbegins.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lovepoems/beforepassionbegins.aspx
