"Ok, I'm still woozy but i'm commenting anyway. There is beauty and depth of both anguish and growth in this.piece and you should be proud of it.
By the way, only the elite get scored a One Bomb, and that's how you know you Made it as Lush writer. There are a few who are so cool the incompetants who need to make themselves feel better bizarrely overlook them, but generally, if you get a One Bomb, you know you have a talent"

"This is a great story, the only reason I hadn't posted on it before was I hadn't read it through and your stories demand careful reading. You use the most delightful imagery and buildup, and turn what could be a simple sex scene into a full-fledged character study. I want to bring myself off and yet I want to see what happens to these characters because they are great thinkers and have real emotions. I don't want to disrespect them by spilling my seed until I can thank them and the woman who gave them life."