Thanks for the feedback guys and thanks for the honesty.
I'll keep them in mind when I come to writing my next one.
Bob
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shindigbobby
Over 90 days ago
Male, 44
United Kingdom
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Hi everyone,
I'm new to writing and I submitted a story for the first time last week.
I would be very grateful for feedback and tips for improving, like was there enough sex, was there too much build up etc, as I have lots more experiences with my wife I'd like to share.
Thanks
Bob
I'm new to writing and I submitted a story for the first time last week.
I would be very grateful for feedback and tips for improving, like was there enough sex, was there too much build up etc, as I have lots more experiences with my wife I'd like to share.
Thanks
Bob