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Quote by TheDevilsWeakness



Speaking of learning new things...
You should ask sprite about the restraining order she has at the grocery store. She's not allowed in the produce department of the grocery store unsupervised. Or the candy section either, now that I think of it.


umm... or maybe you shouldn't... did i mention i discovered that they make ginger lollipops, btw? two birds, one stone!
Quote by asleep


I hope SPRITE will forgive me for this, but here is a copy / paste of an email I sent to her (Sprite). I could very well say the same thing to another mod here also, and be just as sincere. She kinda "Shy....", so I won't mention her name.

Sent to SPRITE: "..Once upon a time so to speak...you 'rejected' some of my writing and made me work on it some more before accepting it. What REALLY surprised me was that you "scored/commented" with a "4"... AND YOU EXPLAINED, PUBLICLY (in the comments section), WHY I didn't get a "5". Truth be known, I'm a little surprised that mods. score / comment on stuff they approve.

Sprite...That experience sealed the deal as far as I was concerned...SPRITE is somebody super nice and special. I have 'valued' those remarks / explanation FAR MORE than a higher score.

Thank you for all the work you team of Mods do for a site such as this. I know its got to be a pressure packed job in a very 'intense' environment."

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That's all I've got to say about that. (Forrest Gump??)

Rick


lol - usually when i give 4s, i get yelled at *hugs* btw, i told you that you'd get better, and you proved me right smile
RRs are handed out to stories that deserve them. period. i have handed them out to friends as well as to people i've never spoken with before. a little history - the RR was developed in order to showcase some writers who are excellent and haven't gotten the exposure that some of those more outgoing have gotten - we keep that in mind. for every "friend or fellow mod" that i've given an RR to (and i think that Dancing Doll's were well earned, as were Jaymal's, quite honestly) i've made it a point to give one to someone whom i admire and have never even spoken to. That's why you'll see RRs on people like TamLin or Feather Watt or Metilda or Alexanrda A - excellent writers who are either new to the site or have flown under the radar here.

yes, when it was first introduced, a lot of us made it a point to honor some of the older writers who deserved them in the past - now, though, it's more a matter of reading a new story and being so wowed that you want to do more than just leave a comment - btw, if i give something an RR - i always leave a vote and comment. that's fairly common practice among the mods when they are able.

so, to answer your underlying question, OMKN - no, they are not based on favoritism - feel free to compare my friends list to the RR list if you have the time. you'll find my friends woefully under-represented. and please, in the future, if you have an accusation to make, be direct. i'm not fond of insinuations.
girls with colorful hair, blues, green, pinks, purples... mm... just so fun and sexy and creative!
how NOT to deal with a rejected story: verbally assault the mod who rejected it either in public or in private. apparently that is a new, and very disturbing, trend here.
Quote by overmykneenow
The only time I've been irked by a verifiers edit was when one of them changed the proper spelling of "traveling" to the US corruption that is "traveling".

I'm more than aware that this is my problem, not theirs.


there, i fixed that for you *giggles and runs*
Quote by CleverFox


I did not mention any specific person.


if you are really going to insist on being nit picky, yes, you did - see my above post, please. really, i'm just about out of patience here. by publishing on lush, you agreed to the rules. whether or not you like them or not, doesn't apply. some people don't like not being allowed to write stories involving underage participants. guess what. we don't allow that. we as simply asking that you do your best to follow basic grammar rules, the kind we were all taught by the time we graduated from HS. nothing fancy. just basic sentence structure. it's just that simple. i think most people will agree that i am normally very reasonable and pleasant and polite. that i have been pushed to this point, i hope, says a lot about what is going on here.

in closing, let me ask you this. do you really want a site where anyone can post a story without going thru a verifier? do you? because there are some out there and they are beyond awful.

ok, i'm done with this. it's giving me a headache now.
Quote by CleverFox


Why did you bring up my story here? Isn't that personal? I have not said anything personal about anybody else.


ahem...

Now if you (OWA and Liz) feel this makes a story better then you can feel free to pat yourselves on the back. But don't expect me to thank you for anything but helping me with the technical aspects.

After reading the replies from OWA and Liz I see the error of my ways and I now realize that none of the people that have posted stories here on Lush could possibly have teached their full potential with out the help of the verifiers.

We need the verifiers badly.
Quote by CleverFox
Sprite, I understand and agree with what you are saying for the most part. If a story can't be understood then it really isn't a story. I am also sorry and do apologize for my rudeness, that was why I almost immediately changed that post but I wasn't fast enough.

I do resent anybody that think he or she has made my story "better" by pointing out technical errors. I appreciate the help on the technical aspects of my story.

If I were to take somebody else's story that was flawed grammatically and rewrite that story would it be better? And I mean if I just fixed the spelling errors and punctuation but didn't really change the main thrust of the story.

I don't really think it would make the story better. The story would just be more easily understood.

I see OWA read what I said about Shakespeare and my point is that changing something won't necessarily make it better. How can anybody possibly make Shakespeare better? Of course if you read some of his plays he does have huge plot holes but it is the poetry that makes it great.

There was somebody that thought King Lear should have a happy ending to it and rewrote the ending. My Shakespeare professor read the rewrite to us. It was horrible.


a note: we do NOT rewrite stories nor ask that you do it. we simply ask that you use correct grammar - sometime that means rearranging a word or two - we will NEVER ask that you change a plot unless it's an issue with breaking the content guidelines, such as age issues, etc. trust me, we don't want to rewrite your story either - we have our own to write.
Quote by CleverFox
Do you think fixing technical errors makes the story better? I think it just fixes technical errors. A bad story sucks no matter how wonderful the grammar may be. All you are doing is making the story more easily understood.

Now if you (OWA and Liz) feel this makes a story better then you can feel free to pat yourselves on the back. But don't expect me to thank you for anything but helping me with the technical aspects.


umm... what's the point of writing a story if no one can understand it? actually, we don't expect any thanks. that's not why we do it. we DO expect some respect. i have lost count, this week alone, of how much abuse the mod team has taken. every thing from being called out in public blogs after bending over backwards to work with writers to being called "twats", "stupid", or worse in PMs. no one here is obligated to accept our help, just as we are not obligated to publish a substandard story. and yes, that's an official response. you can't be bothered to write an erotic story that doesn't meet the standards set by lush, it will not be published. period. if that sound bitchy and harsh, i'll be happy to open up my PM file and give you a tour of all the little love notes i receive after rejecting stories that are substandard, or blatantly break the rules. i don't have any problems working with people who want help. if you don't, that's fine as well.
Quote by sexy_fireman4106
Ladies, how many loads of cum have you taken in one night, it can either by mouth or any other way, lets see who has taken the most! Please explain!!!!


oh, yeah, NOW you fill in the box - for the record, this was blank until just now. silly
once, i took 3 loads to the dump - this was before i bought my pickup, obviously - now i can haul a lot more and can usually get it all with one load.
just a note:

we are member just like everyone else who have taken on the responsibility of making sure that the stories on this site are quality stories. this is for the benefit of both readers and writers. hey, you don't always have to agree with us, but if you approach us with the same respect we show you, like Annie said, we will usually be open minded about figuring out a solution - at the very least, we will explain the issue.

that all said, too often people DO throw tantrums and blow things out of proportion which doesn't help anybody. seriously, if you don't like a mod's decision, talk to them like an adult - this IS an adult site. don't go bad mouthing them or voting down their stories. really, it's not helping your case. trust me, i try really hard to keep our writers happy to the point of bending over backwards for some of them when i can. we've had for too many nasty responses lately to content or technical issues this week - if you're getting a story back, it's for a good reason, people, not just cause some power hungry mod has nothing better to do - you DO realize that every time we reject a story, it's doubling our work load, right? because it means we have to mod it a second (or third, fourth, sometimes fifth time!)!

thank you
Quote by Metilda
The Trekkie in me absolutely hates it - it's a vile abomination. . .My smooth, hip alter ego thinks they did a good job with the effects and plot concepts.

When it comes to Star Trek - I listen to the Trekkie. . . and give it 3stars purely because I can't bear to 1 star anything that has the Enterprise and Spock in it.

I've watched every episode of Star Trek - OS and all the spin offs and other such movies - I know what they've done . . . and who they did it to. It does not pass my lemon test.


i get this. that said, for those of us who where never really fans until the reboot, its' great - i'd have never been into Star Trek if not for these movies - oh, i watched some of the older movies - a couple of them were good - the one with the whales and the other one with Khan - none of the others were. seen some of the series episodes too, and mostly, those were pretty good (the 60s one, tho, is totally camp - it's fun, but it's not exactly stellar). this is my generations Star Trek. look at is this way - if it wasn't for the reboot, Star Trek would probably not exist except in re-runs.
Quote by Naughty_Nurse
Hi, maybe it comes over as if i am unaware of the fact that everything you publish is possible to copy.
I am aware of that possibility.
I didnt fully realized how easy it was to copy, so that made me wake up;)
So that is why I wonder if it should be a good thing to aware people more by adding a little note for example.
I know it isn't the responsebility of Lush, but I just think it is a good thing to do.
I wonder what others think of that?


attention all lushies. people can, and will, copy anything on the internet. this has been a public service announcement. if you don't want people copying pictures, don't post pictures. thank you.
Pandora. your story is now published. I took the time to make numerous corrections - hopefully this is a learning experience for you - i sent you a msg with advice - heed it. the next one is all on you. compare what i did with what you gave me to work with. please. if you want to be a good writer, the onus is on you to work at improving your craft rather than letting someone else fix it for you.

thank you.

sprite
senior story mod
lush stories.
Quote by Magical_felix
I lived with a chick that used to ball up her loose hair and stick it on the shower wall. She would do it so it wouldn't go down the drain but then she would forget to remove it and there would be a bunch of them stuck on there. It wasn't that gross but it irritated me.

There was also this one girl that was pretty petite. Pretty normal eating habits. Wasn't farting all the time but when she went to the bathroom she would crap with the door open. It wasn't smelly or loud... But like she would sit there for like an hour. Just sit there. I would ask her if there was turd coming out like the whole time and she said no, that she just didn't like to rush it. It's not a good thing when your boyfriend sees you sitting on the toilet that often.

One of the most annoying habits I have encountered was this girl that would never leave her leftovers at the restaurant or throw home meal leftovers away. That wasn't the bad part. The bad part is that she would never eat them either and just leave them in the fridge until I tossed them away. It was so gross and annoying.

Also, girls who insist on having a pet but can't take care of them right is a deal breaker for me. I like animals but I hate shitty cat boxes and hair everywhere, thats a no go.


owning a pet is not only a great joy, but a great responsibility. just like a child, if you're not willing to put in the work, you should be having one.
you know, it's like getting a tattoo - if you want it, you want it. seen some very lovely breast jobs, honestly, and some kind of suspect ones. most of the time, you can't really tell, tho, that someone's had them done.
as much as i hate to admit it, i fart. not constantly, but it happens. burp too. Kate does it as well. the human body is a wonderful thing. now, if someone was constantly gassy, it would become an issue, mostly because that's usually a result of bad eating habits - fixable eating habits and seriously, it would become annoying after a bit, specially it they're smelly farts!

as for peeing, really, if i'm intimate enough to have sex with someone, i'm intimated enough to pee in front of them on occasion, or be peed in front of (shut up everyone who knows about my watersport fetish). pooping tho, nope - that's a private matter - don't want to see it or be seen. as for skid marks, yeah, i'm with doll on that one - i mean, come on, wipe, people!
Quote by Magical_felix


I wouldn't call him a hack. He did create the universe and I like the movies. He just tried to make the new ones kid friendly with comic relief when the movies would be better treated seriously like how the empire strikes back was. You can't have a character slaughtering kids one moment then throw in R2-D2 being all slap sticky the next and expect it to be good. It's retarded. The romance was so lame too, crow barred in. I like romantic scenes but those seemed like they were written by a 14 year old. He tried to please everyone and he fucked it all up. But still, he did create the whole star wars universe.

I'm going to go do something really un-nerdy now to cleanse myself of this post.


like talking about Spock's bowl cut in Star Trek?
Quote by Magical_felix
The good thing is that george lucas will neither write or direct it.


probably not going to be a popular comment, but seriously, the guy's a hack.
*puts on kevlar body suit, stands in middle of room with painted on target and announces* Star Wars is dumb. It's not sexy. Star Trek is sexy. he should sex it up. Benedict Cumberbatch as Darth Crunk!
speaking of facebook, how come we don't have the opportunity to play Candy Crush Saga here? (waves good bye second before Nicola deletes my account)
Quote by Mazza



All set!


and that was just the first of 3 loads.
Quote by Saga


Let the fun begin!!


it already has! answer your door, dammit! it's cold out here, woman!