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Revolution

"When surrender is all you want to do."

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The first thing stirring is your tongue within my mouth

As your hands travel softly south

Tension is rising like the wild tide

Building arousal, I can no longer wilfully hide

As you handle me so soft and so slow

My embers begin to gleefully glow 

You read me like an open book

You breathe my name while giving that knowing look

Hunger is rising in my core

My soul screaming for you to give me more and more 

Your words salaciously swimming in my head

Let’s take this to the bed. 

You struck the match 

To the itch alone, I just can’t scratch 

You say jump, I ask how high

You say ‘I’m going to make you fly’

I long for you to tenaciously tire me out 

Make me whimper, moan, and shout 

I know you will get me there to the end 

Filling me with your exceptional care and the time you spend

I feel my soul split down the middle 

Lost completely by the way you eloquently fiddle 

So close to the beautiful brink

Each gasp louder the further you sink 

Slow, sensations to strategically entice

Until I willingly pay the ultimate sacrifice

You give me unconditional absolution 

My body breaks blissfully under the ravenous revolution

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Written by Bluebird2
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