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For your eyes only

This is my very first poem. Constructive comments are welcome.
Saturday morning I wake up with a spinning head,
System failures and urgent meetings in office until 2am last night.
Family, work, mortgage payment, laptop bag,
My typical middle class mainstream life.

One click on the mouse I get into lush site,
A fantasy land where I can escape and don’t need to hide.
A new email brings me a wonderful surprise,
All of sudden I feel like in paradise.

Like an angel you show up in my sight,
Sent me a private gallery just for my eyes.
You said sometimes you’re wild but sometimes you’re shy,
So please respect and don’t show it to other guys.

You’re stunning gorgeous as I had imagined in my head,
But it’s your sweetness and trust that blow my mind.
I want to cross all the distance to hold you tight,
Give you my promise and steal a kiss on your forehead.

You give me your trust and I give you mine,
If you like you can check my profile tonight.
A new private album has just been set,
Only to be shared with my closest online valentine.

In my album you will find an ordinary guy.
I’m not George Clooney nor am I Brad,
I’m not handsome and I’m also a little shy.
But at least now you know,
I’m not just another faceless fake guy.

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