This doesn't seem like a very popular topic, but I found it interesting so I gave it a shot.
Story title: Dear Diary Con't April 9th
Author: sweet_p
Category: Love Stories
I did not finish.
Unfortunately it was not to my taste. Although the plot of the story was something I might enjoy (a heat of the moment lovemaking outdoors in a summer rain), it was almost immediately filled with tense errors and the author switched back and forth between "his" and "your". I believe from the title that it was intended to read as a diary entry, but I didn't really get that from the start. Perhaps a read from the beginning would shed a better light. The comments on the story reflect a different critique, all but one singing it's praises.
I just spotted this, great post idea Gyspy.
I won't say the name of the story or the author, because it was prior to our stricter guidelines and it would've been sent back now. It was about tanning, from April 2009.
It was in the Straight category and I did not finish it. I got to the "he was like OMG!" and that did it for me.
There was a lack of character development and little story background, so I can't recommend it.
What was the title of the story, and who was the author?
-The Night Jodie Rocked My World X by JemisBi
What category was it in?
-Lesbian
Did you finish reading it?
-It was hard but yes.
If you finished reading it, did you like it?
-Not really. Too many mistakes and it was just a block of text. Hard to follow too.
Would you recommend it to anyone else? If yes, please post the link to the story here. If not, you can say why not, but aren't obliged to.
-No
When was it first posted here?
-March 18, 2008
What was the title of the story, and who was the author? My Maaster by Sexy_biatch
What category was it in? BDSM
Did you finish reading it? Yes
If you finished reading it, did you like it? No
Would you recommend it to anyone else? No
I think the storyline idea was very good and promising. However, the grammatical structure of the story was a distraction. I wasn't sure of what was going on and when. The interaction between the dom and sub was hot, but could have been presented better.
When was it first posted here? January 31, 2010
What was the title of the story, and who was the author? The Grudge Fuck by Spitfire
What category was it in? Reluctance
Did you finish reading it? Yes
If you finished reading it, did you like it? Yes I did quite like it, but was a little disappointed in the way it ended
Would you recommend it to anyone else? yes
When was it first posted here? Oct 01, 2008
What was the title of the story, and who was the author? Great Group
What category was it in?
Did you finish reading it? NO!
Would you recommend it to anyone else? no sorry
When was it first posted here? Sept 12 2007
Honestly, I did not get through the third paragraph. I have to admit I have a hard time understanding broken english i'm a 1oo% Canadian Baby, but found it nearly impossible to read it. I'm not sure how it made it through to get posted, maybe lush wasn't as strick back in 2007?!?!?!?!?