Yup, please start a new post somewhere else to debate site rules. This one is just for a hopefully fun comp, and so far everyone has been great about tweaking their entries when asked. ![]()
Surrender to Shadows
Ancient whispers crawled across her skin, luring her toward the reflection’s gaze. She froze, transfixed by the wandering hand - hers, yet not hers. Shadows writhed beyond the glass, vast and hungry. A phantom claw traced her spine; breath stuttered, heart pounding, heat blooming low. Sinking to her knees, curled fingers found their mark. Eyes fluttered closed, a low moan; an offering of surrender. Talons pierced through the silver veil, eager to drag her into darkness.
Ooh, I really like this. Excellent.
Meagan
'Competition Top Ten' story
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/exhibitionism/faberge-eggs-for-christmas-3
(My 'Advent' Competition Story and my first Top 10 Competition Story!)
2 'Recommended Read' stories
3 'Famous' stories
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Surrender to Shadows
Ancient whispers crawled across her skin, luring her toward the reflection’s gaze. She froze, transfixed by the wandering hand - hers, yet not hers. Shadows writhed beyond the glass, vast and hungry. A phantom claw traced her spine; breath stuttered, heart pounding, heat blooming low. Sinking to her knees, curled fingers found their mark. Eyes fluttered closed, a low moan; an offering of surrender. Talons pierced through the silver veil, eager to drag her into darkness.
Shadows always writhe behind the glass! Excellent work!

Come To My Place For A Nightcap
Frank met Kristine on a Saturday night at a local Hustler Club.
After a few drinks, they went to her loft and got naked in order for her to get on top of him and ride his dude piston hard.
But just as he was about to shoot his short shotgun into her honey pot, Frank saw Kristine's eyes glowing red and razor-sharp fangs in her mouth.
After he screamed, she drank all of his blood.
WC: 75
Locally Sourced
“Where do you get your pumpkin spice?”
The slutty customer asks.
“I make my own. I’ll show you, for a price.”
I mime a blowjob, luring her to the back.
I glaze her mouth in my own cream.
Then take her through the next locked door.
She sees a quartered torso.
Limbs grinding in a strange machine,
that is spewing amber powder.
I grab her, “You’re next.” She screams:
“The pumpkin spice is people!”
Thanks Kimmi for a fun challenge.
The Ledger Hand
Mira’s fingers found Jonas’s shoulder as the fan clattered uselessly overhead, pushing only more heat. Sweat licked their skin; his breath hitched when she whispered, “Don’t stop.” Her tongue traced the salt along his neck, the room humming with the chapel’s low electric drone. Beneath them, the casket seemed to breathe—slow, heavy, alive. Later, they saw the ledger: two names looping together in ink, strokes identical as if written in one long, trembling shiver.
The Wolf Goddess
“Damn, you’re tight.” His thrusts quicken. “Gonna come.”
“No! Her night… she’s hungry… she’ll make me—”
“Spooky girl,” he laughs.
“No! Please don’t come.”
He groans. “Too late.”
“No!” Through scudding clouds, unpitying rays shaft her eyes, alchemizing her lover’s spurting passion. “You heartless bitch,” she wails, the ancient curse agonizing bone and flesh.
Beneath her, another offering twitches into silence. Fiery eyes weeping, she raises her blood-frothed muzzle to the wolf goddess and howls.
"It seemed like a nice neighborhood to have bad habits in.” Raymond Chandler
The Gin Rickey Singularity -- Dirty Talk competition entry
So many superb entries, Kimmi, and, still another 12 hours to go. Your judge is going have a tough time picking three to earn your generosity! I don't envy him.
Meagan
'Competition Top Ten' story
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/exhibitionism/faberge-eggs-for-christmas-3
(My 'Advent' Competition Story and my first Top 10 Competition Story!)
2 'Recommended Read' stories
3 'Famous' stories
I believe there are 28 entries (at the moment). Good luck, Kimmi's son, on judging them ... and a BIG THANK YOU, Kimmi, for organising this mini comp. It was fun. 😊
My comp story: The Sex Days Of Xmas
My latest story: Cash In Hand 8 - "A Helping Hand"
What! OMG, the world is coming to an end. Kimmi's competition has ended. 😢 Hopefully only until the next one which seems to grace us Lushies on a regular basis. 😋
Meagan
'Competition Top Ten' story
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/exhibitionism/faberge-eggs-for-christmas-3
(My 'Advent' Competition Story and my first Top 10 Competition Story!)
2 'Recommended Read' stories
3 'Famous' stories
My judge had a really hard time as he loved something about each entry!
Writing_Interest, expressomarkie, and Ellie73 are the judge’s picks in this challenge.
:worship:
My son and I are both sure Jimbo in Writing_Interest’s story lives in the hills of Eastern Kentucky.
Thank you all for making this fun! You are all so talented!
Kindness is contagious. Spread it! ❤️
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My judge had a really hard time as he loved something about each entry!
Writing_Interest, expressomarkie, and Ellie73 are the judge’s picks in this challenge.
:worship:
My son and I are both sure Jimbo in Writing_Interest’s story lives in the hills of Eastern Kentucky.
Thank you all for making this fun! You are all so talented!
I’m sure it’s foul play!!!
I kid, of course. This was fun, Kimmi! Thank you, and well deserved winners.
Now. Go to bed.
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I’m sure it’s foul play!!!
I kid, of course. This was fun, Kimmi! Thank you, and well deserved winners.
Now. Go to bed.
I’m unplugging for a bit now. My fingers in my right hand have gone numb from excessive coding at work. Carpel tunnel sucks!!! It only bothers me at software upgrade time. See y’all in November sometime. Be good. Or bad! ![]()
Kindness is contagious. Spread it! ❤️
Congratulations to the winners and those who took part... 😊
Thank you again, Kimmi... and maybe most importantly.
Does your son see sausages in the same way after judging this competition? 🙄🤣🤣
My comp story: The Sex Days Of Xmas
My latest story: Cash In Hand 8 - "A Helping Hand"
Congratulations to the winners and to all who wrote (and, for some of us, rewrote) a story for Kimmi's challenge.
Meagan
'Competition Top Ten' story
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/exhibitionism/faberge-eggs-for-christmas-3
(My 'Advent' Competition Story and my first Top 10 Competition Story!)
2 'Recommended Read' stories
3 'Famous' stories
Wow, being one of the winners in this challenge came as a total surprise! I was just here trying to write something fun and spooky, and now I’m one of three winners? Honestly, I’m still blinking in disbelief, kind of like the reflection in my story!
Huge thanks to Kimmi for organising this wickedly fun challenge. You managed to bring out the eeriness and the eroticism in all of us, and that’s no small feat. This win feels like a treat I definitely didn’t expect... no tricks here!
To my fellow winners, you’ve set the bar so high I’m half convinced I’m still dreaming (or possibly haunted). Thanks again for letting me play in this delightfully naughty, creepy playground. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m going to nervously check my reflection one more time… just to be sure this really happened!
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Wow, being one of the winners in this challenge came as a total surprise! I was just here trying to write something fun and spooky, and now I’m one of three winners? Honestly, I’m still blinking in disbelief, kind of like the reflection in my story!
Huge thanks to Kimmi for organising this wickedly fun challenge. You managed to bring out the eeriness and the eroticism in all of us, and that’s no small feat. This win feels like a treat I definitely didn’t expect... no tricks here!
To my fellow winners, you’ve set the bar so high I’m half convinced I’m still dreaming (or possibly haunted). Thanks again for letting me play in this delightfully naughty, creepy playground. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m going to nervously check my reflection one more time… just to be sure this really happened!
Cuntgratulations!
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Where have you posted the winners? I’m not sure how to navigate to that place on here.
They are all on Page 2 of this thread - go to the bottom of this page and navigate to page 2
(There might be a better way, but that's how I found the others)