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Quote by Raven_Star

They're one of my biggest pet peeves. Comma splices, I mean. This is because there are many different ways to avoid them. A comma is not meant to be used to combine two independent clauses, unless it has a conjunction to go along with it. Here's a comma splice example for you:

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

(It was painful to write that, by the way.)

Fixing that is so easy. There are so many ways to do it!

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, and he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists; he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists. He struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

All of the above are more correct than the comma splice. All it would take is a moment to change punctuation, capitalize a letter, or add a simple 'and'.

So, in light of this, I posit that most of the instances of comma splicing that we see are not intentional 'style', but rather carelessness, laziness or simple lack of knowledge regarding proper punctuation.


Quote by Raven_Star


They're one of my biggest pet peeves. Comma splices, I mean. This is because there are many different ways to avoid them. A comma is not meant to be used to combine two independent clauses, unless it has a conjunction to go along with it. Here's a comma splice example for you:

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

(It was painful to write that, by the way.)

Fixing that is so easy. There are so many ways to do it!

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, and he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists; he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists. He struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

All of the above are more correct than the comma splice. All it would take is a moment to change punctuation, capitalize a letter, or add a simple 'and'.

So, in light of this, I posit that most of the instances of comma splicing that we see are not intentional 'style', but rather carelessness, laziness or simple lack of knowledge regarding proper punctuation.

Lol, I edited in to my post about related clauses. I was told I was comma splicing but they weren't independent.
It could be argued that in the example that you give, they are related. The struggle being due to wrapping the shirt around the wrists. I would actually have used a comma followed by the gerund and argued my point.
The biggest problem is determining whether clauses are independent or related. It can be a headache.
My pet peeves are using commas AND conjunctions and the lack of commas with a subordinate clause.
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Lol, I edited in to my post about related clauses. I was told I was comma splicing but they weren't independent.
It could be argued that in the example that you give, they are related. The struggle being due to wrapping the shirt around the wrists. I would actually have used a comma followed by the gerund and argued my point.
The biggest problem is determining whether clauses are independent or related. It can be a headache.
My pet peeves are using commas AND conjunctions and the lack of commas with a subordinate clause.


While they are related, they are also independent clauses all by themselves. If they are going to be joined by a comma, a conjunction is required. Not recommended. Required.

Gerunds are different. With the example given, it's more difficult to join with a gerund, because the first complete clause focuses the verb action on the first person. The second complete sentence focuses on the other character. In order to properly gerund the second clause, I'd have to focus the verb action on the first person. So I'd have to change it up a little more:

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, feeling him struggle only slightly before submitting to my will.

That's not a comma splice. Now they are properly related clauses. Note that the gerund makes the second clause subordinate, or dependent. Oh the joys of gerunds!

When the action in both clauses is directed at the same character, the clauses can be said to be related. Exceptions, such as the comma and conjunction, exist, where the clauses although not necessarily related, can be combined.

Ahh, the comma and subordinate clauses. That's a whole other discussion. It would seem that the rule is somewhat reversed, but that *is* the rule. It's proper grammar to leave the comma out of the sentence when dealing with a simple subordinate clause. Why? Who knows. I follow the rules. :-)
Quote by Raven_Star


While they are related, they are also independent clauses all by themselves. If they are going to be joined by a comma, a conjunction is required. Not recommended. Required.

Gerunds are different. With the example given, it's more difficult to join with a gerund, because the first complete clause focuses the verb action on the first person. The second complete sentence focuses on the other character. In order to properly gerund the second clause, I'd have to focus the verb action on the first person. So I'd have to change it up a little more:

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, feeling him struggle only slightly before submitting to my will.

That's not a comma splice. Now they are properly related clauses. Note that the gerund makes the second clause subordinate, or dependent. Oh the joys of gerunds!

When the action in both clauses is directed at the same character, the clauses can be said to be related. Exceptions, such as the comma and conjunction, exist, where the clauses although not necessarily related, can be combined.

Ahh, the comma and subordinate clauses. That's a whole other discussion. It would seem that the rule is somewhat reversed, but that *is* the rule. It's proper grammar to leave the comma out of the sentence when dealing with a simple subordinate clause. Why? Who knows. I follow the rules. :-)

My head hurts, lol. I'm off to lie down and digest it all. I'll be refering back to this, thanks.
I would like to send a big thank you to the Lush staff again, and so many other author's that have offered their assistance in my attempt at writing. Everyone that has written me has offered their assistance.

Again I find this extraodinary! You would think most would be competitive against each other.
You know, each one wanting to be the best writer.

But the opposite is true, at least with me. I find that very refreshing that so many would offer their assistance.

This time it is moderator JessicaX - That needs to be commended - She helped me a bunch. I must have sent her a half a dozen messages and she replied to everyone quite quickly I might add. She always had great solutions and great tips. Thank you so much JessicaX.

I feel it's only right to thank sweet_as_candy - Milik_Redman - that helped me so much a few months ago.

I wish I wouldn't have deleted the messages from so many authors that offered to help. I would have posted their names as well. But a big thank you to all.

Kathy (kathys_show)
I appreciate all of our mods for donating their time!

I haven't dealt with many so far, but I really enjoyed KatieElizabeth. She was very helpful when I submitted my first story and gave me great advice. smile

Please check out my stories. <3
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I appreciate all of our mods for donating their time!

I haven't dealt with many so far, but I really enjoyed KatieElizabeth. She was very helpful when I submitted my first story and gave me great advice. smile


that's odd... she's actually pretty mean. AND she swears like a sailor. Most of the mods are kind of scared of her, honestly... do NOT tell her I told you this!

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

I feel kinda special now. smile
I still talk to her once in a while too!

Please check out my stories. <3
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I would think that all of the mods/verifiers are deserving of accolades. The time and effort they donate to keep this site at the quality level it currently is at is absolutely amazing, IMHO.


Not all. They only keep me in the mod squad because I squeal so cutely when they spank me. And they always find reasons to spank me. Oh bummer! I probably shouldn't have said this...
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Not all. They only keep me in the mod squad because I squeal so cutely when they spank me. And they always find reasons to spank me. Oh bummer! I probably shouldn't have said this...



Chrissie, I'd like to use this thread to thank you personally and publicly for all the help you gave me when I first joined and started posting stories here. I think you grabbed my first five or six stories, and 'trained' me to clean up my act, and follow all the protocols and guidelines for formatting stories on Lush. You've been the mod from whom I've learned the most, so big hugs for that!

...and a bonus hug for Sprite for reminding me I use exclamation points far too frequently!!!!!
I've been a moderator for, oh, maybe three years now. I was already fairly well known by the time I was asked to join and held more than my share of EP's. That sounds like bragging and I am proud, but the point was, it wasn't being a mod that got them for me. I truly dislike that implication.

What I wasn't was well read or very polished. I wasn't a good writer, I was just a really good story teller. That's when I met Buz. I was invited in and I quickly discovered a group that was as dedicated to improving writing skills as I was. Moreover, it was at that time that Nicola really decided she didn't want to accept stories of low quality. The effort that was put in was nothing short of Herculean. I helped but I spent more time learning from these incredibly talented people and today they are dear friends.

Those who haven't been behind the curtain simply cannot know how dedicated and hard working this team is. They work together with the forum mods, who are an equally dedicated group. For me, it became too much. I could no longer face having to send back fully 50-60% of the stories in the que over the same simple things the last was rejected for. I burned out, like many before me. Now, I'm an 'advisor' which basically mean I get to hang out and be in the way while the current group busts their collective asses.

What they do is amazing and I don't know how members like Buz or Coco keep going.

The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe

Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart

Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2

Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-child

I would like to thank Jayne. She was the first mod to verify and to ever help me with my stories and had to deal with my horrible grammar errors. I'm still having a little trouble with them, but I really really did and still do appreciate her helping me all the way through biggrin

Thank you Jayne! heart
There have been so many mods that have interacted with me and gave me advice and even one that cut me down to size. Which I'm grateful for. You know who you are. Learning to not only listen to others opinions but respect them, even if I don't agree.

Nympwriter, Milk Redman, Lisa, Sprite (and her humor), Raven star, Dancing Doll, Sweet as candy, DanielleX, Buz, avrgblkgrl, Callisto, Poppet, ruthie, so many more. It is all possible because of Nicola.
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I've been a moderator for, oh, maybe three years now. I was already fairly well known by the time I was asked to join and held more than my share of EP's. That sounds like bragging and I am proud, but the point was, it wasn't being a mod that got them for me. I truly dislike that implication.

What I wasn't was well read or very polished. I wasn't a good writer, I was just a really good story teller. That's when I met Buz. I was invited in and I quickly discovered a group that was as dedicated to improving writing skills as I was. Moreover, it was at that time that Nicola really decided she didn't want to accept stories of low quality. The effort that was put in was nothing short of Herculean. I helped but I spent more time learning from these incredibly talented people and today they are dear friends.

Those who haven't been behind the curtain simply cannot know how dedicated and hard working this team is. They work together with the forum mods, who are an equally dedicated group. For me, it became too much. I could no longer face having to send back fully 50-60% of the stories in the que over the same simple things the last was rejected for. I burned out, like many before me. Now, I'm an 'advisor' which basically mean I get to hang out and be in the way while the current group busts their collective asses.
What they do is amazing and I don't know how members like Buz or Coco keep going.


Thanks Milik. This was helpful. I volunteered but am kinda happy they didn't accept me. I'm not ready for that yet. I need to just keep writing and improving my skills. One that is ready is Bethany_Frasier. She's smart and fast at editing.
It is and invidious task to pick out one particular moderator for special praise. I discussed the experience of being a moderator with Milik many months ago, and up until then I had not realised how difficult it was, having assumed that it was just a matter of checking grammar and spelling, but he soon disabused me of that idea, and also told me how much abuse he suffered from would-be authors who did not agree with his judgment.

This is addressed to all of you therefore - thank you for the wonderful job you do, and for your patience and forbearance with "know-it-alls" like me. And an especially big thank you to those who have moderated my recent stories and poems - MadameMolly, Ruthie, Echelon, KatieElizabeth, Sprite, Buz, Milik_Redman, Sitting, ChrissieLecker, Danielle_X and Wilful. I know there have been more, but that is as far as my records extend. I am constantly amazed at the alacrity with which they read and approve my stories, and for the kind comments that so many of them append as well. I would also like to thank you for the way you accept my antiquated British spelling and use of outmoded diphthongs, and my old-fashioned ideas about English grammar, which were honed by a variety of English teachers back in the 1950s and 1960s.

I would like to say final word about those boring and tendentious subjects, spelling and grammar. To younger readers and writers, I would remind you that back in the dark ages in England, to get into a Grammar School one had to pass an examination at age 11, in which English Comprehension played a major part; at the age of 16 one had to pass an examination on English Grammar to be able even to consider applying for a University place, and those of us who studied scientific subjects up to the age of 18 also had to take an extra examination on the Use of English. This was undoubtedly a chore for most students, who would have preferred to be doing something much more interesting, but in later years I have learned the value of these painfully acquired skills. A well written story is one in which the technicalities of spelling and grammar do not get in the way of the narrative, but actually contribute to clarity and comprehensibility; in other words the technical aspects of the story should be invisible.

As an aside though, one should not be afraid to break the rules sometimes - great writers of prose and poetry such as Shakespeare, Donne, and Lawrence all did, and Shakespeare invented new words when it suited his purpose - and some of the rules, such as the ones on splitting the infinitive, or not using a preposition to end a sentence, were invented by 17th and 18th Century pedants and scholars, such as John Dryden, who decided that if something could not be written in Latin, it should not be written in English.

In conclusion, I may not have the most exciting or vivid of erotic imaginations, and there are many authors who's stories are infinitely more arousing, but I do try to produce work which is technically good, not because that gives it special merit, but because it facilitates the reader's experience, which is why I write in the first place.
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that's odd... she's actually pretty mean. AND she swears like a sailor. Most of the mods are kind of scared of her, honestly... do NOT tell her I told you this!


I can confirm that KatieElizabeth is very mean.

One time she had cookies and didn't share. Made me sad.
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I appreciate all of our mods for donating their time!

I haven't dealt with many so far, but I really enjoyed KatieElizabeth. She was very helpful when I submitted my first story and gave me great advice. smile


Aww...stop it now!



Quote by Liz
I can confirm that KatieElizabeth is very mean.

One time she had cookies and didn't share. Made me sad.


Now you know its only the cheese I tend to hog don't you?!

You can have my "cookie" anytime
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/fetish/worship-my-bum.aspx
My new story has been awarded the Recommended Read. If you adore a needy bottom and fancy a short, but very naughty read...
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that's odd... she's actually pretty mean. AND she swears like a sailor. Most of the mods are kind of scared of her, honestly... do NOT tell her I told you this!


Now why would anyone think I was mean or be scared of me? I'm just the most normal, gentle, mild mannered Kat you could possibly imagine.....



https://www.lushstories.com/stories/fetish/worship-my-bum.aspx
My new story has been awarded the Recommended Read. If you adore a needy bottom and fancy a short, but very naughty read...
I can't pick a favourite. (I can say that it's a MUCH more democratic and collaborative process than you might imagine.) There is a Mod Forum where discussion takes place, opinion is sought from others, POLICY is decided...

Being a Mod is not JUST about being a good writer/editor; you also have to have a real love for other writers. And PATIENCE. And a thick skin.

I did it for years. MOSTLY I think I did it well, but not always. I'm NOT a HP Lovecraft fan, but I have friends who are. There's an RPG game based on the 'Call Of Cthulu' series where as you play the game you are driven insane. That's as close to illustrating the experience of being a Lush Mod as I can describe.

(And of course it doesn't drive EVERYONE nuts!!! Most Mods cope more than well. Me, not so much in the end!!!)

Maggie Rascal and Gypsy Moth mentored me. When I got GOOD at it I hung with Rachel, Millie, Principessa, Coco, Lisa, Buz... In turn, I MENTORED some new ones! (Then I went MENTAL!!!)

A lot of the newer ones I don't know at all. (I have no doubt they are as good as anyone I ever worked with...)

But they bust their arses to do a FUCKING tough job. And they do it with skill and considerable grace. Every one of them have my thanks and respect.

xx SF
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I can confirm that KatieElizabeth is very mean.

One time she had cookies and didn't share. Made me sad.


Haha, so you guys might have just witnessed my gullible nature. I seriously was thinking to myself "she seems so nice, I can't imagine her being mean." Gotcha now ;)

Please check out my stories. <3
I think of the Mods as a collective consciousness, like the Borg. I've used that line before, but it's kind of true. I think I've been edited by a different Mod every time, and they've all been helpful and supportive and knew grammar like a bird knows the sky (well, okay, I've disagreed with one edit, but it was a long time ago, and I made the edit, as asked). I don't even know who the Mods are; my friends keep casually mentioning they are Mods weeks and months into a friendship. I think most of my friends might actually be Mods, though I didn't know it at the time we became friends.

I went and looked it up, Liz edited my first story (Reflections, which wasn't very good) and my second story (Strangers, which was a little better). So thanks Liz!
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Being a Mod is not JUST about being a good writer/editor; you also have to have a real love for other writers. And PATIENCE. And a thick skin. I did it for years.
(And of course it doesn't drive EVERYONE nuts!!! Most Mods cope more than well. Me, not so much in the end!!!)
Maggie Rascal and Gypsy Moth mentored me. When I got GOOD at it I hung with Rachel, Millie, Principessa, Coco, Lisa, Buz... In turn, I MENTORED some new ones!
xx SF


I can attest that when you were a Mod you were an excellent mentor. You helped me out a great deal and I really appreciate it.
I'd like to name some Mods that mentored me when I was brand new to the team. Some are still Modding and some have retired (currently saving their sanity).

Stephanie, Lisa, Cocokisses, Principessa, Clum, Sprite, TXGirl, Dirty_D, Sandrine, GemGeeket, MaggieRascal...

A big thanks to y'all.
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I can attest that when you were a Mod you were an excellent mentor. You helped me out a great deal and I really appreciate it.



I GOT more than I gave you Cute Dawg. xx SF (And YOU still DO IT!!!!!) Jesus, you Mod ME now!!!!!!!

(The BURNOUT on Mods is higher than you'd think...)

The ABUSE you get is BEYOND UNDERSTANDING!!! (It takes a SPECIAL person to not to let it get to you...) I couldn't do it after a few years... (It SAPS your energy...)

I MISS IT LIKE FUCK! (I would NEVER EVER do it again...) I MISS the banter, the fun, the KNOWING you're on the INSIDE... (I'm being HONEST...) but it COSTS... I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT... But it's not for everyone...

At THIS MOMENT, maybe FOUR Mods are looking at The Queue. (Thinking, "WHERE DO I START WITH THIS???")

God Fucking Bless Them. (Without their talent and commitment we can't FUNCTION...







xx SF
Quote by RavenStar


They're one of my biggest pet peeves. Comma splices, I mean. This is because there are many different ways to avoid them. A comma is not meant to be used to combine two independent clauses, unless it has a conjunction to go along with it. Here's a comma splice example for you:

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

(It was painful to write that, by the way.)

Fixing that is so easy. There are so many ways to do it!

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists, and he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists; he struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

I pulled his shirt off and wrapped it around his wrists. He struggled only slightly before submitting to my will.

All of the above are more correct than the comma splice. All it would take is a moment to change punctuation, capitalize a letter, or add a simple 'and'.

So, in light of this, I posit that most of the instances of comma splicing that we see are not intentional 'style', but rather carelessness, laziness or simple lack of knowledge regarding proper punctuation.


You do realize that the story you told me you would send back because of all the long and unwieldy sentences you ended up giving a RR smile.

And you, of course, are my favorite Mod (blush).
OMG so much flattery... I too wanna become a mod please, please hehehe.... Even a Deputy Mod will do please, lol....
Well umm frankly, my initial experience with mods is not worth mentioning. I took them as stalkers or police.... but later I realized that they're here to guide me and they're also like me and that they're also not foolproof, so I relaxed. And later when I got some of the mods as friends I started loving them.
Ok coming over to my favorite mod.... I think my favorite mod should be more of a human than a robot.... more of a friend than a boss.... more of a teacher than a catcher....and above all without any prejudice... omg what I'm doing lol.....
Alright, I've found KatieElizabeth and NymphWriter very loving and considerate mods.... smile

PS: Mods who wish to to be highlighted and praised here, can contact me anytime..... service will be free, which imply no fee if you respond within five minutes after reading this.... hehehe :P
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You do realize that the story you told me you would send back because of all the long and unwieldy sentences you ended up giving a RR smile.

And you, of course, are my favorite Mod (blush).


You wrote that story very well. I found nothing unwieldy about it. ;-)

And thank you. *blushes right back* You're one of my favorite authors. :-)
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I'd tip my hat to Wonder Mods RUTHIE and NYMPHWRITER except the glare off my bald head might strain their eyes. ;)



I can't believe I missed this a year ago. Thank you so much!

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There have been so many mods that have interacted with me and gave me advice and even one that cut me down to size. Which I'm grateful for. You know who you are. Learning to not only listen to others opinions but respect them, even if I don't agree.

Nympwriter, Milk Redman, Lisa, Sprite (and her humor), Raven star, Dancing Doll, Sweet as candy, DanielleX, Buz, avrgblkgrl, Callisto, Poppet, ruthie, so many more. It is all possible because of Nicola.


Thank you Chuck! That made me smile!

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OMG so much flattery... I too wanna become a mod please, please hehehe.... Even a Deputy Mod will do please, lol....
Well umm frankly, my initial experience with mods is not worth mentioning. I took them as stalkers or police.... but later I realized that they're here to guide me and they're also like me and that they're also not foolproof, so I relaxed. And later when I got some of the mods as friends I started loving them.
Ok coming over to my favorite mod.... I think my favorite mod should be more of a human than a robot.... more of a friend than a boss.... more of a teacher than a catcher....and above all without any prejudice... omg what I'm doing lol.....
Alright, I've found KatieElizabeth and NymphWriter very loving and considerate mods.... smile

PS: Mods who wish to to be highlighted and praised here, can contact me anytime..... service will be free, which imply no fee if you respond within five minutes after reading this.... hehehe :P


Thank you Peri!

I never expected to see my name in this thread, but to see it three times from three amazing authors... really touches my heart. Thank you all.
I like to believe in all sincerity, that all mods are creative alike...the way it should. Like all 'lay writers' I have my complaints, but in truth I probably should remain reserved. It's not easy defining what is and what isn't passable writs...my eyes and emotions would be worn down. I have actually just begun to scratch my writing and wish to applaud mods that have stuck with my melodramatics when I'm pissed. THANK YOU.