Trust people to be themselves...
My second story ever gives us insight on a wife who is eager to ease her husband's mind after a long, stressful day at work. She understands the importance of getting him prepared to attack the following day with full clarity - and does so in rather filthy fashion.
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Edit: Alright, for some reason, it's not allowing me to post the link and I can't delete the post. So please feel free to take a look at the story by visiting my profile.
Thank you all.
You need to get up to 20 forum posts before links will work. Easily done if you go to one of the word games threads. Then you need to log out and log in again. It's an anti-spam device.
Nice story. I really like the long slow detail. My internal grammar nerd says "too many semicolons" though.
Trust people to be themselves...
Yes, I find I tend to be quite unsure about my semi-colon placement. Have to work on it. Thanks for the feedback and advice also.