Hi I have just written my first Story and submitted it here on Lush but it was rejected. Could someone please help with it?
Maybe proof-read my story? Any help woult be greatly appriciatted
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Did the moderators indicate to you the reason for the rejection? Also, how long is the story?
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Don't take it personally. My first story was rejected first time round. They must have said why? Feel free to PM me if you like.
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Hi I have just written my first Story and submitted it here on Lush but it was rejected. Could someone please help with it?
Maybe proof-read my story? Any help woult be greatly appriciatted
If you use MS Word, you can get it to read it back to you. If there is one tool to use that would really help, I find it's this one. I write professionally, boring stuff but mistakes cannot happen. This tool has literally cut my edit times by 50% easily.
Text to speech can be found in the accessibility features, just go the MS Office help pages and it will show you how to switch it on.
It depends which version you use, I prefer 2010 because it's rock solid and very suitable for web publishing. It's very simple, select the text, click the icon and it reads it aloud - headphones might be a good idea
It's not so great for scanning and annunciation, if you read it back at the same time as the robot, that's your job. It will find missing words and typos easily. 
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Hello
I am an author of a dozen stories and novels. I want to publish it but I am not a native English speaker so my stories probably have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. is there any good soul who can do a little correction and proofreading on my stories so we can publish them? No need to be professional, we are just amateurs who like to write and read sex stories.
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I haven't had my stories been rejected, but I do often let people proof read it first. I just send them the link to the preview of my stories here on Lush.