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Burquette
Over 90 days ago
Bisexual Female
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Quote by kiera


This made me laugh....And champagne breakfasts, which are considered rather classy over here....So really, Rachel is just posh.

Hi B

Just wanted to bump your thread for you.

I have to get some zzzs now and I have a busy day tomorrow but I am going to give this little gem a read on Monday.

Enjoy the rest of your weekend xo


See. All the best people drink before noon.

I hope your busy day went well and thank you for my bump.
Quote by LYFBUZ
"Casualties" is a terrific read. Go read it. NOW.


Thank you so much. I like the NOW.

Seriously, I really appreciate this.
Quote by sprite


she writes good, too. (it's not to early to be drinking, right? i mean, if i was living in the UK it wouldn't be. i'm not, but let's just pretend).

no, seriously, she writes good. smile


I want you to save your eloquence for stories about hot, fast-food drive-thru, lesbian Dominants.

And, it's never too early to be drinking. That's why God made Mimosas.


Quote by tarnishedknight
I would agree she writes good but actually good is not good enough to describe her writing talent... she writes very good... actually better than very good.

And no it is not too early to be drinking... sometimes it is good to get a good early start.


You are my best critic. I know if you like a story I've done a good job. Thank you so much for this. I really, really appreciate it.
Well....

I have a fear of flying. I hit some "white turbulence" many years back. Drinks went flying and one of the flight attendants was hurt. I've been white-knuckled on a plane ever since. I fly at least twice a year on business and sometimes more often so it's a real pain. Also, if you see someone gripping their armrests, don't tell them that it won't hold up the plane. It's really irritating.

I'm claustrophobic but only really in caves. I learned this at Tom Sawyer Island at Disney World. Fun, that.

I do have a fear of crowds, especially when I'm not sure how to get out of one. Movies are an issue if the exit is behind me. I think it's been ten months since my last movie in a theater. Before that, I think it was a year.

I'm good with clowns, spiders, bees, heights, and water, though. (I'll probably die from drowning while in anaphylactic shock after being pushed off of a building into a swimming pool by a clown.)
Quote by puddleduck
I dunno. About a year ago, after you were widowed, you had an affair with a student, apparently much to the embarrassment of your ex-in-laws.

In the period since – unless I'm not following it properly – you've been married, then unmarried again. Difficult to keep track of things, of course, because you've been busy. You've had sex with five black guys and three women at the same time. You've fucked your boss (sometimes while his girlfriend watches), fucked your roommate, your personal trainer, at least four of your gym students, someone from Lush, and your ocme88il3MoYaRvm.Your" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">5lxJ7yE6YSc9VHXr.Your boyfriend - bless him - has done all that he could to keep it classy by fucking you with a coke can. (This act may have aged him, as he was 24 a few months ago, but now he's 28. It would probably do the same to me, though).

Really, after all that, fucking your father-in-law should be a piece of cake. Keep it up.


Wow.

Never mind. I'm not qualified to give advice. Too little experience.
Quote by Liz


Any rich uncles you can throw into the mix?


If there's a rich uncle (and he's single), lose both BF and Dad and go for him. Complication solved!
Quote by arjinof


Yes. I want money. i can't go back to my old poor life.

How can i convert this complex relationship of mine into a open threesome relationship where i can sleep with both the men and satisfy them. And live the luxury life i want. Any ideas ???


Open communication is the only way to get what you want. It could turn out well or you could lose both men.

I would talk to the father first. He knows you're having sex with both. He knows his son best. If he agrees and thinks his son will, talk to your BF together. Since you've already been lying, I would tell your BF that it's something you'd LIKE to do and not something you've DONE. Best case scenario, they both love the idea, agree to an open relationship, and you get what you want. Worst case, Dad or BF says no, and you have to accept what you have or choose between them.

I honestly hope you stop sleeping with the father and use your skills to help your BF be a better lover. But, as for getting what you want, I think this is the path to take.
Quote by 69Kisses96


Remember the telephone scene from It's a Wonderful Life? She and Jimmy Stewart were so hot for each other that they could hardly keep their hands off of each other. She wanted the D.



I preferentially read and write reluctance and seduction stories. And I read anything by certain writers.
Quote by SheriPie
Not sure if this has been said or not but the biggest improvment I would like to see is when submitting a story. When you copy and paste your story from a word document into the lush box it gets all distorted. Spaces between words (think ing), double spacing between each line of a paragraph. I finally gave up one day after copying and pasting it five times. I love writing but it just takes to much time to sit and edit a piece of work I have already edited, so I don't post stories much here anymore sad


I don't know if this will work for you, but I've been pasting from Word Documents when submitting stories here. The trick (for me, at least) was to paste your text first thing on the submission page. Don't choose a category; don't type a title. Just Ctrl V and after it pastes, a box will pop up that asks if you would like "clean word format". Click yes. Your text will still look wrong but when you hit continue, all your formatting is there.

The only thing I have to go back and fix is center justification for scene breaks.

I hope this works for you.
Quote by Verbal
But there are writers here, VirgoGo and Burquette come to mind though there are many others, who handle it with seeming effortlessness.

So, personally, I am going to quit writing shards and write a real story next. Work on my weaknesses.



I won't speak for VirgoGo, but it's absolutely not effortless for me. Thank you so much for this.

I'm looking forward to your next one.
I don't know what you keep around. Usually I drink dirty martinis but I'll take an approximation or a suggestion.

And thank you.
Quote by RumpleForeskin
Greetings to the contest winners, also-rans, and non-participants...including me.

It's pretty standard to praise the quality of the entrants in a Lush contest but in my uninformed, totally subjective, and unasked for opinion, this group had to be among the best.

BTW, before y'all slip back into alcohol induced catatonia, let me quote a shrewed prognostication from among the comments on the winner's story.


RumpleForeskin - Ms B, you may have a contest winner with this one. I am impressed....and more than just a bit jealous.


That was my comment, in case you didn't notice. You know me, always trying to drum up a little business.

Which reminds me, what do y'all want to drink in celebration of our winning customers.



You are absolutely right. And I said that I was shaky about this piece and that was true. It's like Mike says, it's funny how our personal opinions of our own writing don't always match up with the people who read it.

I'm embarrassed I hadn't stopped in recently. Is it too late for a drink?
Story is so much harder for me. So is character, for that matter (Wait! This is supposed to be an exhibitionism story. My main character is an ex-nun. Bad choice! It'll take too many words to get her there....).

The truth is that I put in far more thought, energy, and effort into plot than I do the sex scenes. They just don't require it. Hopefully, I've already set up the motivation and the emotional consequences. Now all I need is a good action sequence.
Quote by Ping


For months, I've wanted to open this up for discussion. Timing was, and still is, not good.



Just a thought....

Perhaps if this was on your mind for months, you could have waited another week to post it.
Quote by kiera




Hi B Congrats again on the win xo


Thank you! Big hug back to you.
Quote by sprite


how many times are we allowed to get in line...?



For you....? (Where's the eyelash-batting emoji?)
Quote by kiera


I can't see how the result today can be perceived as anything other than fair. Burqutte hasn't been here that long and she is not a mod, she is just an outstanding writer and I wasn't at all surprised to see that she had won.



Nobody saw the cool grand I slipped Nicola at the start of the competition. Of course, I didn't consider that the prize money was only a hundred and fifty...
I just can't think of many better ways to start a Monday. Everyone at work will be asking me what I'm so happy about!

Congratulations to Buz, Gilrenard, and all of the finalists. And thank you, so, so much!

I'm giving out kisses today. Come get yours!

I was a recipient of a Random Act of Kindness, which is why I started doing them myself.

I was visiting my parents in Florida. We were eating in a local restaurant and someone paid our bill. My parents are guarded; they don't expect good things to happen to them. Their reaction was the best part.
There once was a cat name of Lizzy
Whose stories left one quite dizzy.
She never got stuck,
And had all the luck
She toasted each EP with fizzy.
In no particular order....

1. The Godfather
2. Jaws
3. Aliens
4. The Terminator
5. The Matrix
6. Goodfellas
7. Labyrinth
8. Pulp Fiction
9. Star Wars: A New Hope
10. Indiana Jones: Raiders of the Lost Ark
Not so much planned, as expected.

It was a third date. We were both really into each other, but it's not like I had candles placed and rose petals scattered.

It could have happened on the fourth date, I suppose.
Quote by Saucymh


I think writers read what they think they've written, not what's actually there. I know I do. A second pair of eyes is VERY useful. Also, if you spot a typo in a published story it's easy to correct it. Make the required changes using the Lush editor (go into My Stories and click the edit feature next to your story) then the moderating team see the changes highlighted and re-verification is really quick.



Thank you!

Maybe I'll go back and clean up old stories.