Certainly there can be stories with perfect grammar that still suck because they are written very bland, the subject and action is boring and so forth. There are fabulously entertaining stories that are weak in grammar. The job is to continue to improve as a writer and enhance your ability in both areas.
People would be surprised at the famous and successful authors who were never very good at grammar, were horrible at spelling or poor at punctuation. But they had excellent professional editors and proof readers.
Lushstories provides amateur writers an avenue to explore and grow in our writing. The 1-5 scoring system is the most common one used throughout the internet by sites such as this. Possibly a 1-10 system would be more accurate, but can you imagine the nightmare it would cause in making the change to the thousands of stories that are posted?
It's real hard to say. the first night I arrived at college I ended up partaking in a 2 girl gangbang (about 8 guys). An eye opening experience. The 2 girls seemed to compete as to which one could be the sluttiest and wildest as they competed to out fuck each other.
I've been in threesomes, sex in public, received blow jobs while driving, played naked Twister; with a crowd watching I've cut circles on the road on my motorcycle only wearing boots and a pair of panties on my head, and more...
I wear my gold wedding band on the traditional 'third' finger of the left hand. Like Metilda said, the fourth finger is the small or pinky finger. There are four fingers and one thumb on a normal five-digit hand. On the third finger of my right hand I mostly wear my university class ring. Sometimes I wear a sports championship ring I earned as a member of a championship team. Both the class ring and the championship ring are rather large, so I only wear one or the other at a time.
A confident woman who is in charge of her sexuality. I've always preferred sluts over prudes as they are much more interesting, entertaining, enticing and charming and usually much more intelligent.
Get in line asshole! No, don't stand several feet behind the person in front of you and then act all offended when someone steps in front of you into line, because where your are standing IS NOT IN LINE, you doofus, stupid dimwit.
If someone has to ask if you're in line, then you are standing too far back and you ARE a moron!
It's hard to say for sure. If she's interested in being a normal member it will soon show. She has added several friends. She is not advertising a competing story site, right? Should we give her some leeway for a awhile?
I spent a few days kissing a really pretty French girl once. I highly recommend kissing French girls.
The Color Purple
(It's those purple panties)
A cheeseburger with slaw, mustard, ketchup & onions on it, home cut fries, sweet tea and a fried peach pie.
And it beats having to use chalk to write 'meet 5:15 in the park, come armed' on the side of public mailboxes. Aw who's kidding who, I'll continue to do that.
As an American I declare her a sweetheart!
if my wife is making me laugh.
I was well ahead on points in a boxing match, got cocky and started hot dogging and ended up getting knocked out cold by one punch.
I like to sleep nekkid, swim nekkid, bike nekkid, skydive nekkid, surf nekkid & party nekkid.
While I couldn't hit or punch a lover, I do slap ass pretty hard. I've done some light choking when they've asked. I definitely have done a lot of hair pulling or whatever. If this is something that she is into and it provides pleasure for her then I could do it, but I would never be abusive. I will add, my wife can get into some pretty rough sex and I love to make her happy. She has begged me to slap her ass, but so far she has not asked me to slap her face.