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Buz
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Just for your general information. The story queue always looks like a 1950s movie monster...



...but we slay it one story at a time and we love it when we get to verify stories that have been carefully proofread and are a lot of fun to read. And we love it when we see stories by authors that keep improving their skills and get better and better.
NO, I've signed a contract with Lushstories and can only send naked pictures of myself to other Lushies for 5 years. But you can't get them unless you have signed up for the Platinum Membership.

PS. So far Sprite is the only Platinum so I have to send her naked pictures everyday.
Well... Caitlyn Jenner is a lot more attractive than the step daughter, Kim K.

Life is full of surprises or it would be real boring. Just accept people for who they are.
ME! I am excited about Season 2. In fact, my wife and I just watched Season 1 this week on HBO OnDemand. It was great!
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Lush is actually a front for a sophisticated time machine. little known fact. every time you post, you travel back in time. it's how i remain youthful; by posting a lot.


In fact young lady, any more posts and not only will you be too young to buy any more alcohol, but we're going to have to confiscate your drivers license. Now to your room, you're grounded!
My wife and I have posed for each other in photos, her idea. She is the photographer hobbyist in our relationship.
Happy Birthday, Bethany!!! I hope you have a great one!


I have read the Bible through twice and a lot of the Guinness Book of World Records. That's all from that list.
There is no set formula. In fact going by a formula will probably be self-destructive to the story. Some stories, written just right, have a long character building, drama setting build-up – a long tease. Then the sex could either be just a tease in itself or a great long climatic sex scene at the end. Any scenario can work if the writer does it right.

Also, the story could jump right into the sex and be nearly all sex and work to perfection.

Don't go by a formula. Work on developing your writing skill, on how to develop great plots whether they be complex or simple, long or short.
The Shining
Alien
The Descent
Scream
The Conjuring
Paranormal Activity

Now I really liked the book, The Exorcist, but I've never seen the movie, except for the out take scenes of the girl throwing up green puke and her head spinning.
Will, where I work we are constantly talking ideas. The vast majority get picked apart but sometimes we do hit on a gem. Everyone is supposed to put forward ideas. Our system won't there work without that, so we grow a thick skin about getting them tossed, torn apart, changed, killed or whatever. There is nothing wrong with putting forward ideas. Any creative idea person will probably tell you that they go through a lot of ideas before they come up the the real winner. There is no need at all for you to feel like you have to apologize for anything.
That's not good since several US government as well as various state government websites we are required to use at work use Adobe Flash and Oracle Java.
I'd like to recommend this story. Hey, and really, this isn't stepping out on a limb – if you like Hardcore you'll love this one which has been around for awhile. It is 'My Last Morning With Melissa' by Milik_Redman. It's an EP and has a lot of reads. This story in fact is slowly climbing toward Legendary Story status, which is why I am promoting it here. I'd love to see it hit that Legendary status for my friend, Milik. And if you aren't familiar with Milik's stories, then it's about time you checked them out. He is one of the most awarded writers on this site. If you read this story you'll know why.

My Last Morning With Melissa, by Milik_Redman

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/my-last-morning-with-melissa.aspx
So, no one here has a ZZ Top style long, almost to their knees, bushy bush? Where's the sense of adventure, the daring, the individuality?
My left foot's big toe. Evidently that toe is sexually mesmerizing. If I expose it, women pass out from desire. Just flashing that toe seduces any woman around. It's like a weapon. I have to be real careful with it and rarely show it – never in public. In fact, when I wear sandals, I keep it covered with a little toe sock. When I go in my barefeet at the beach I have to tie that toe sock on very securely so it doesn't come off.

As a story verifier I can testify that we already have a damn good quality control system. Y'all wouldn't believe the number of stories that we reject. We try our best to inform the author of what they need to do in order to edit and improve their story so that it meets our standards. They can then edit and rewrite so that their story is good enough to resubmit.

Because Lushstories is aimed at amateur writers we have set the bar high but still attainable for the beginning short story and poem writer. It is up to you as writers to push yourselves to improve. On Lush you have access to many writers who have honed their writing skills to a high level. You can glean what you can from their work and also ask your fellow writers to help you with ideas and thoughts to make your own better, so that you may grow as a writer.

I would vehemently oppose the deletion of older stories or any stories, already approved for lack of popularity or any other reason such. I believe that would create a negative and hostile atmosphere, destroy morale and be counter productive to this site.

Popularity of stories can depend upon several factors. Quality is often one of them but not always. Some stories may be popular because of the level at which they are written. We have stories written in great depth that appeals to many readers and for some it is the simplicity. Yes, we can look at popular culture as an example. In pop music, certainly there are mega hit songs that have little musical depth. But so it is. That is life. On the other hand there are many mega hits that exhibit great musical depth and originality.

Making tweaks, every now and then, to a successful venture may be good, but such major changes as suggested, in my meager opinion, could be a catastrophic mistake to a popular site like Lushstories. Lushstories has used this certain format to bring it this far, why crack the foundation now? It also would narrow the type of people reading this site, creating a much lower viewership. That result could easily be that the site is no longer affordable and Nicola would have to take it down.

And as it was said already, there are some gems of stories here that don't have that many votes, views or have not scored well for various reasons. Part of the fun of Lush is exploring the site for enjoyable reading.
The difference is maturity. Some men acquire it sooner than others, and some maybe never.

Maturity = responsibility, common sense, experience, reasonable and appropriate behavior.
Try and get some sleep. You know you've got a bunch of friends. I'm hoping you'r feeling calmer soon, buddy.
The one where I'm laid back, she is on top, I have a glass of bourbon on the nightstand and she is grinding on me while I eat a sandwich, watch TV and smoke a cigar. She finds that very satisfying!
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I'm thrilled about this too

Gay marriage became legal in England in March last year. I have no plans to marry right now, but it's amazing and also liberating to know I can if I want to


Katie, when you do get married I am going to dance at your fiancé's bachelorette party, unless of course, you pay me double to dance at yours (that's extortion). In that case I'll wear a leopard banana hammock and a bow. But don't even think you're getting away with both doing a bachelorette party together. I'm sure Danny will attend both parties, if there's a strip party, she finds a way to be there. (And I do have a complaint about that – last time, Danny put coins in my banana hammock... in the back.)
My city of Atlanta voted a resolution in favor of gay marriage. But since marriage is a state provision by law, it is only ceremonial, officially saying it has our support.

In the USA, each of the 50 states has its own say so by law, but that can be overridden by either the US Supreme Court by court decision or by a constitutional amendment. A constitutional amendment would have to be passed by a two-thirds majority or more of the 50 states or by a two-thirds majority or more of both the US House of Representatives and the US Senate.
Lush is a site for amateur writers to grow and develop their abilities. I think we currently have a much better site and system than any of the competition does. I really think seriously changing what already works would be detrimental. If its working, don't fix it.

The popularity of the site, massive numbers of story views and our ever growing number of story and poem submissions are proof that Lushstories is doing a great job as it is. I'm very happy with it.
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i don't have to see his face - god, guys make the weirdest faces when the cum, am i right?


I'm a very stoic cummer.
Put your heart and soul into your writing and have fun doing it. I think the female audience can really pick up on that.