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Was that from another site or did you know her?
We were friends on another site already. I soon discovered that Lush is by far the best site in the entire genre.
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Buz
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Quote by Magma_Boils_333
Now I'm confused. You say that both are accepted but my friend's story was rejected for using one form and the people who have posted above have pointed at only one being accepted here. I tutor people in English, I know the nuances and differences and also that they are all correct, my question was what is accepted on this website as when people write, it is a matter of personal preference in the form that is used.
No, what they said was that we approve the consistent use of one or the other. While we most often see the commas inside the quotations, the other version is also considered acceptable. There was probably inconsistency of usage that led to the rejection of your friend's story.
I am an American and I have approved the other UK style several times before. I did ask other mods about that when I first encountered it and they pointed out that it is also correct, but each story must consistently use one or the other throughout.
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We as story verifiers work hard to familiarize ourselves with both the UK (Commonwealth) versions and the American version of grammar and spellings. We accept both. As long as the dialogue punctuation is consistent it is accepted either way. If it fluctuates between one and then the other, then it needs to be corrected to be consistent.
There are several Lush verifiers representing the UK, Canada, Australia, and the USA. Actually several from each of those English speaking nations. We keep each other informed of our unique differences. Really grammar differences are minimal. Spelling differences are more common, but those are easy to recognize.
There are several Lush verifiers representing the UK, Canada, Australia, and the USA. Actually several from each of those English speaking nations. We keep each other informed of our unique differences. Really grammar differences are minimal. Spelling differences are more common, but those are easy to recognize.
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I don't have a formula. It depends upon which scene setting you think best suits the story. Feel where you want your story to begin and create from there.
It usually takes me a few days to write a story. I rarely have several uninterrupted hours available to do story in one setting. Often when I come back to the story I feel I need to change something and rewrite. Once I have completed it and proofed thoroughly myself, I send it to someone else to proof again. They always find something I missed. Once I have taken care of that its ready to be submitted.
It usually takes me a few days to write a story. I rarely have several uninterrupted hours available to do story in one setting. Often when I come back to the story I feel I need to change something and rewrite. Once I have completed it and proofed thoroughly myself, I send it to someone else to proof again. They always find something I missed. Once I have taken care of that its ready to be submitted.
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If I send a friends request it is because I have recently become familiar with the person, usually by reading one of their stories or that they have been reading and commenting on my stories. If someone signs up to follow my stories or adds one of mine to their favorites list, I will friend request them. If they like my stories enough to honor me that way then I want to be friends with them.
If someone friend requests me, I always check out their Lush profile page.
If someone friend requests me, I always check out their Lush profile page.
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Quote by AngelHeart01
Are those "brown field peas" the same as black eyed peas? Was your creamed corn home made? It all sounds amazing!!!
Mine: London Broil, baked potato, salad and iced tea
The 'brown field peas' are the same shade of dark brown all over and a crunchier than black eyed peas, but each pea is about the same size. The creamed corn came from my granddad's. They freeze it and store in plastic containers. It's white sweet corn. I love it. I also get cornmeal for the cornbread from him. I'm trying to learn all I can about all that from him.
Tonight I had baked chicken breast, green beans, steamed carrots, mashed potatoes & brown gravy with white wine.
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You can pm your story to a Lush friend to proof/edit and have them pm it back to you to post. You can also email it to one another as a Word or other text editing file if you like. Then once you feel really good at about it being ready to submit, just copy and paste it into the story submission box. When submitting make sure you type in your teaser line and the tags to the story, along with your title.
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Putting an unaltered picture of oneself up for public viewing on a sex story & discussion site could be a good way to ruin one's career. One great thing about Lush is using an anonymous name, using an altered pic or a pic of someone or something else. Real names, real faces are generally not a good idea. Such things can be used against you at your job, office, or even such as child custody hearings. Just be smart and use common sense.
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My wife had a pair of black Lulelelomon's on, but with a light weight red sweater that fit like an ultra mini, so I saw no sign of sheerness on hers. And I didn't see the sheer effects on everyone's yogas either. However, there was a quite a few that did have a problem. They did seem to be girls with the tightest fits.
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I read recently that Lulumon realized that their quality control standards had become quite lax, and their yoga pants had developed very real problems of being sheer and piling.
I saw just how sheer they can be for myself this past Saturday while tailgating at the football game. It was the first game that was cool enough for the coeds to wear yoga pants and leggings instead of their standard short little red sun dresses. I noticed that in the sun at certain angles the yoga pants would just about go invisible, showing all the girls' goodies. At one minute the pants would appear to be completely opaque and then a slight turn and like magic 'wala' invisible. One could easily see what type, color, and/or lace pattern of panties a coed had on. In some cases it was easy to see that they were going commando underneath. I really did feel bad for them but didn't think I should tell them, "Hey your yoga pants are so sheer at certain angles I just saw your vajajay split" or "Is that a birth mark on your left butt cheek?"
So you ladies may want to check out just how sheer those yoga pants are appearing while out in the sun. Believe me at certain angles and turns, everything you've got is going to be exposed.
Maybe Lulumon should change the name of their yoga pants to hologram pants because of their changing affects.
I saw just how sheer they can be for myself this past Saturday while tailgating at the football game. It was the first game that was cool enough for the coeds to wear yoga pants and leggings instead of their standard short little red sun dresses. I noticed that in the sun at certain angles the yoga pants would just about go invisible, showing all the girls' goodies. At one minute the pants would appear to be completely opaque and then a slight turn and like magic 'wala' invisible. One could easily see what type, color, and/or lace pattern of panties a coed had on. In some cases it was easy to see that they were going commando underneath. I really did feel bad for them but didn't think I should tell them, "Hey your yoga pants are so sheer at certain angles I just saw your vajajay split" or "Is that a birth mark on your left butt cheek?"
So you ladies may want to check out just how sheer those yoga pants are appearing while out in the sun. Believe me at certain angles and turns, everything you've got is going to be exposed.
Maybe Lulumon should change the name of their yoga pants to hologram pants because of their changing affects.
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Yes. Whipped cream, ice cream, sherbert, strawberry juice, chocolate syrup, caramel, cherry syrup, champagne, blueberry pie, apple pie, watermelon and juice, strawberries from navel, grapes from navel, warm wet Chinese noodles, peanut butter, raspberry sauce, apple jelly, chocolate pie, banana pudding... I'm sure I've left something off the list I'll remember later.
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I think I posted on this thread before, but anyhow, flying in an open cock pit plane is really awesome. I've been in planes open on the sides and in biplanes where with your head sticking out (wearing goggles, etc.) The pilot in the biplane did several flying stunts while he had me in the plane. Damn that was fun. I really must do that again. Actually, I really would love take flying lessons and become a small plane pilot.