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DirtyMartini
Over 90 days ago
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Quote by Sirene_Jaune


I knew my story was good and from the comments that were posted by readers they enjoyed it to and want me to continue. However from his negative comment I just stopped writing it all together.


So yes, do you share your work with your other half?


Yes, I've shared my work with my girlfriend...but, only after I'd written it and published it...and she did make some interesting points, mostly about the stories I had originally posted under Exakta66, which were for the most part done as a series...so, I always had to break up with the girl in one story to move on to the next scenario...she seemed to be bothered by the fact that none of my stories had "happy endings" so to speak...

I think I'd be reluctant to show anyone my stories prior to publication, though there is something to be said for that from an editing standpoint, but the point you made about the negative comments sort of reminds me why I've never shown anyone anything before I've posted it...

You have to remember...regardless of whether they are your significant other or not, it is still one person's opinion...and though you may highly value their opinion in other matters, they may or may not be that familiar with writing, or expectations of sites like this, or what you were trying to convey...

And I would never let one person's opinion stop me from writing...regardless of who it is...
Personally, I was never a huge Joe Pass fan...but, I have to admit the man can play...


And btw Miss Rascal...George Benson was hugely influenced by Wes Montgomery...
A little jazz guitar from the man who is arguably the most influential jazz guitarist of all time...
Good Morning Lushketeers...that was indeed a wonderful sermon there Right Rev, as righteous a sermon as one can expect in these here parts and is truly deserving of a big "A-Men"...

In fact, I think a sermon like that deserves a second helping of communion wine, just for celebrational purposes...the only problem be, that I can figure, is that we be out of communion wine...again...

So, what else we got here suitable for internal consumption this morning?

Well...give the subject some serious type thought, and I'll be back...

Nice to see you'll here...
Cheers,
Alan.
Quote by Jack_42
When I click a featured member's profile on the Home page, look at the profile, and then go back to the Home page, I sometimes have to click twice or more before the featured members come back otherwise they are not there just the normal Home page.


You do realize it alternates with the promo video thingy at the moment...right?

Btw Gav, I mentioned over on the other site there's an issue with the Stories Picks list...haven't seen it here though, at the moment anyway...so...
Tried to find the original Eddie Cochran version of this, since it's one of my favorite songs...but, no go...found this instead...
Quote by beowulf69
generally MTV SUCKS!


MTV has sucked for a long time...I remember when MTV actually played music videos, but that was like the early 80's...

I have a Beavis and Butthead T-Shirt btw...I'll have to start wearing it again...someone I knew who had a custom T-shirt shop gave it to me, I was never really a huge fan, but sometimes it's good...
Good Evening Lushketeers...Hey Rump, I hope you restocked the supply of communion wine for tomorrow's services...I sincerely doubt anyone here wants to sit through one of your sermons sober...just saying...

On another note, nice to see Holly, Chef and Sharon stumble into this fine establishment...actually, this is probably the nicest bar called Rumplebations on the block...I do believe in giving credit where it is due btw...

It's not often around here I know...

Hey Rump, how about a double Dirty Martini and I'll pay you back tomorrow? You know I'm good for it...besides I'll be passing around the collection plate again tomorrow, though that hasn't looked too promising as of late...

We need to do something to lure some paying customers back in through these doors...maybe we can drag that old mechanical bull back out...

Just a thought...
Cheers,
Alan.
Quote by Fugly
- not good when you drunk ramble and regret it in the morning LOL


Don't you know that drinking and blogging don't mix? Btw, I just have to ask....when you drink, do you actually go out to a bar? Or do you, um..."brown bag it?"

Just had to ask...
You know, I kinda like door number 1...but, are we sure the door will open?

How do we know we're allowed in?

Where are these doors anyway???

Oh, it sounds like you'll be flying soon ScotishGal...and hopefully your plane will get off the ground as well...
Quote by Dancing_Doll


Figging, on the other hand, is a whole other ballgame.


You know, there is probably a way to combine the two...

Just saying...and no, I did not look at the pictures...I just ate, OK hours ago, but that's close enough...

Can't really imagine in my own mind why anyone would be tempted to try this one...
Oh yeah Rev. Rump...and I heard cologne is always good to drink in a pinch...I've heard stories of people pouring cologne through a piece of bread to "filter" it, though thankfully I have never actually witnessed that myself...

I thought I saw a case of High Karate in your office btw...unless Coma and Tose got to it...
Good afternoon Lushkins...did I hear there was a bottle of K-Mart cognac in the house? Bringing out the good stuff, eh Rump? What's the occasion? Never mind, just pass it...

Btw Chef, I never mentioned anything about Rump's spelling...that was someone else, if you read it...

If you've ever seen any of my stuff before "Spell-check" you might mistake it for another language...just saying...

Now pass that bottle...
Cheers,
Alan.
Good Evening folks...did I hear correctly that there is a special on fine vintage vino for a mere one dollar a galleon? This is great news...I think if we take up a collection between us, we can make this happen...

Hey Chef, Scooter...I just need fifty cents from each of you'll and I'll put up the rest...

Bring that bottle over here Reverend, and start pouring...
Quote by ordonex
I'm not sure if this has been posted before, but it would be great if there was a way to mark which stories you've already read.


When you click on a story, the line under the title goes from red to gray...
Hey Mr. Gav...is there any way to send a friend request to all 90k members?

Come to think of it, never mind...I'll send them out one at a time...

Nice avatar picture there Miss Kiki...
Good Morning My Dear Lushketoids...how be you'll this fine and dandy morn?

Hmmm....looks like everybody is doing their best Coma and Tose imitations...reminds me of that old commercial..."Is it live, or is it Memmorex?"...

Anyway, let me get a large mug of Busty's latest attempt at brewing a caffeinated liquid substance...probably the closest thing to real coffee we'll see here in these parts today...but, what the heck?

How we doing this morning Reverend? I would most decisively be in full-time agreement with you that Scooter boy is nothing but trouble...

I bet his parents gave him a set of luggage for his eighteenth birthday...and most likely had it packed already...

Yes Sir...come to think of it, reminds me of my childhood...from what I can recall...

Anyway...pass the caffeine...have anything to add to this gooey mess to improve the drinkability quotient? Heck, I would just like to get it liquid enough to be able to stir it without bending the spoon...

Yeah, pass over that bottle of Cosco Premium Sloe Gin...that'll work...for now...

Cheers,
Alan.
Quote by GallagherWitt
GAWD that stuff drives me nuts. >.< Sex is an enormous part of the human condition, and acting like we shouldn't write about it is absurd. Especially when most of the people who spout all that crap have no problem at all with violence.

Case in point: I was 16 when Titanic came out, and a lot of parents were horrified about us going to see it because of the TEH BEWBAGE and the OMG BACKSEAT SCENE. No one batted an eye about Rose's fiance' smacking her across the face, a guy bouncing off the ship's prop, or, you know, dozens of people freezing to death in the Atlantic.

And don't even get me started on people who think smut is "well, it's okay, I guess", but are horrified -- HORRIFIED I SAY! -- about gay erotica. Nothing entertains me more than looking them right in the eye and asking, "Oh really? And just WHAT is wrong with two men having consensual, passionate sex?" Usually makes them stammer and stutter a bit...hehehe

Anyway.

/rant over

Great post, Morgan, as always.


Your post, and this thread reminded me of a picture one of my FB friends shared today...

A gay Vietnam vet's last words...I think this sums up your statement...


Quote by scooter

I got 91,301 Al, and counting


You're just a really friendly guy Scooter...I have no idea how you do it...
Quote by scooter

LOL back at ya Dirty,
I probly should of left the Rump out LOL, or shouldn't of


Lol...you're just trouble Scooter, I don't know how Nicola puts up with you...

I'm surprised she's not here in the bar more often...
Quote by slickman

I think im up to 150 friends, so is this the limit??


I believe the limit on the number of friends is currently about 90,300...but, I could be wrong...
Lol...yeah, thanks for pointing out the errors of my ways there Mr. Scoot...I think you've been studying for those story verifier tryouts real hard...

Watch out, they might try to throw you some trick questions...better bring your grandson to do the typing...though it looks like you can pass the beer verifier part pretty easy...

Just watch out when you're using greasy dick, nuts and Rump in the same sentence...especially with kids around...
Good Evening there Fine People of Lush...and this crowd as well...

Damn, Mr. Scooter...what the heck, did you decide to write a book there? That's longer than most of the stories I've verified over on Stories Space recently...and maybe better written, but that's another subject...

What's happening Chef? Nice to see you around...don't get Terrence too spoiled catching all those flies for him, he'll become dependent on you...ah heck, just claim him as a dependent come tax time...

What the heck is this Moe Fuckers Greased Staf beer all about? What's the drinkability rating on a scale of 1 to 10?

Hmmm...no, you can't use negative numbers...ah, let me try one...slide it down here quick before Scooter grabs it...

Hope all is well in da hood here...
Cheers,
Alan.
Quote by gav


At anytime you can "reset" the order back to the default behaviour.

Now to code it.....


You know, that all sounds wonderful Gav...and we all appreciate your hard work and efforts...but let's get real here...

I mean, surely you'll be adding other sorting options in the future...nothing fancy, of course...but let's say, for instance, I wanted a list of female friends, within 30 miles of New Jersey, with more than ten pictures in their profiles, single, and two or more BDSM stories with an average score of 4.8 or greater?

Shouldn't be a problem...right? Just thought I'd ask...
I liked it the way it was, that they appeared on the page, the latest additions...the way things were, and btw, I am not a big fan of change...unless it's from a vending machine...

I think ideally, it would be nice if we had the option of reversing the order...so that the oldest friends would appear on the profile page...I could easily go for that...as long as they were in order of how they were added...
Quote by nicola
They will all be member votes Alan, plus votes from surfers over the last fortnight or so you guys have been running on Mongo.



Otay Nic...I still don't have a clue as to what is going on...but, I guess that's why I'm a porn writer and not a programmer...