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Dirty_D

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Pan Female, 47

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3 Aug 2014

Quote by BraveBitch
I have written many novels but the longest one I have written has around 120K WORDS. I just finished writing it's 106th chapter, and I still have a lot to tell in this novel. It's a novel in which you will read about everything- love, crime, seduction, and lots of SEX - I would say it's my best work. I have written this one all by myself, and I feel proud to tell that it has just crossed 450K READS. If someday I get a chance I would like to make a movie on it because that's what my readers have suggested : )
It's not very good in terms of grammar and English, but my readers love it and I hope that someday I will find a right person to edit this whole novel for me.

By your own admission its both a behemoth (120K words) and poorly written. You should probably utilize a professional. Fortunately, we live in the digital time, and such are only a finger tip away, this one came up at the top when I typed "online proofread" into google.

3 Aug 2014

Quote by SereneProdigy

Thanks for that reply. Now I'm even more confused though. Is there any coherent rule to know which form to use?

Haha. No. Its what makes English so frustrating, and don't forget that how we use the language varies depending on what continent we are on also. even how we spell things.

2 Aug 2014

*really wanted to vote wingdings, but restrained myself as I rather like the Geogia font

2 Aug 2014

Quote by emilykiss
I think I can relate to the whole anxiety about putting yourself down on paper, although it's not fear for judgement that I felt.

I remember seething with anger when I wrote The Apology (still one of my favorite pieces to date). My fingers were literally shaking at one point and my chest was constricting, burning almost. Had to go for a run, right after, to cool down.

End result: I was quite happy with what I'd cranked out, but I don't think I want to revisit that place. Too dark. Closure has been found.x

(P/S: Yeah, have to say, I have no clue how ABG cranks out amazing poetry on a rather regular basis!)

If I have a poem posted here, you can bet it a cauterizing something that is hemorrhaging in my real life that must be expressed. Then typically I sit and hold onto them, until my hands no longer shake when I edit it. Only then do I post.

I have several right now hiding on my hard drive that may never see the glow of a lush page.

2 Aug 2014

Quote by Haineko
Because I'm working on an erotic poem and my anxiety & nerves are so high I feel like I am gonna puke. I actually have to stop every little bit to take a deep breath.

I'm liking this but worried about other's opinions. This is the most personal piece I have ever written

I don't often post poems, and when I do, I find them highly stressful. A story? Its just me going what if?? A poem is me saying this is me. This is who I am; don't judge me. so I think by nature a poem is stressful. The successful ones, to me, take the same actions as in a story, but then it stripes away the extra, until you are left with just the emotions.

The best ones then take that emotion and distill it further until you are left with the essence of what is to be us. but those are rare thankfully. Can you imagine how exhausting it must be a poet of the class of say Averageblackgirl or a few others here? they leave me breathless just reading their work.

2 Aug 2014

Quote by MasterJonathan
So THIS is where all the Mods hang out! They should rename this the Lush Break Room! ;)

Well, you'd need a forum mod for that

Oh wait, that would be me ;)

2 Aug 2014

Clum has as good suggestion. Here: Still this is one of mine, and you can listen as it has an attached audio.

2 Aug 2014

It's gone for good.

http://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst37348_The-Incest-Category-is-going-to-be-removed.aspx

http://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst37397_I-don39t-want-to-see-any-more-Incest-related-threads.aspx

1 Aug 2014

Quote by Magnetron

I whole heartedly agree with that.

And being accused of doing things you weren't doing is equally as obnoxious.

Sometimes it's important to be aware of the perception your words might give off not simply your intent.

To keep the thread on track:

I yawned, rolled over
Stretched and ached.
Pink light streaming through my window,
I blink, close my eyes to the glare.

31 Jul 2014

I tried to watch it, and found it dumb. Plus its not original anyway, it was done better here:

30 Jul 2014

Quote by SereneProdigy
Pitiful self-promotion of some songs/videos I made. The 3 videos were edited with dozens of clips found here and there; the music was created by me from scratch. Somehow the louder the volume, the better the songs sound. Hope you enjoy!

I really like this, Its going on my play rotation.

This one is a current favorite, I'd really like to have it for download

30 Jul 2014

I have been offered.

30 Jul 2014

Quote by nerdjack
What does R+L=J mean? TELL ME!

Rhaegar + Lyanna = Jon Snow

It's the theory that Jon Snow is actually the son of Lyanna Stark and Rhaegar Targaryen.

Supporting evidence includes:

1) a bastard is against Eddard's character.
2) Rhaegar fell for/ran away with Lyanna starting the rebellion.
3) Lyanna was alive after the battle of the trident, but died on a bed of blood. (childbirth?)
4) In Dani's vision, Rhaegar says the dragon has three heads, commonly thought to mean 3 children, not simply the two he had with Elia.
5) most compelling of all in my opinion. The kingsguard was guarding the tower with Lyanna. The king's guards sole duty is to guard the blood of the line. Lyanna was not, thus the only way they (celebrated knights each) would have fought to the death for the tower, would have been for a son of the line.

30 Jul 2014

Sexiest thing I received was from my ex.

"I miss you"

30 Jul 2014

Quote by sexstarveddude
Fucking a girl who is having her period is very exciting for the girl and a buzz for the guy

Not always exciting for the girl. Count me as one girl not interested in being fucked then.

29 Jul 2014

Quote by chatnstroke

Years ago when I started travelling internationally, one of my first trips was to London - and my UK based colleague offered some advice before we went. I was going with a group of coworkers - some women and men. He told us don't get alarmed if any of the guys get called "blokes" or the women get called "birds" - it's just British slang for guys and women - and nothing rude is meant by it.

We all thought it sounded funny - and sure as heck, we heard it when we were there lol..

One of the best parts about travelling all over is learning about different things - so for what it's worth, the bird reference was not distasteful.

As for the original posting, I've found my best chat friends by accident - not really looking - just roaming around the forum threads and you'll find lots of interesting, fun, nice people. Have fun

It can be depending on it's use. Like a lot of other terms, it can be very insulting to different people. I have been called a bird and felt it very demeaning.

28 Jul 2014

Quote by SirDominic
grey is a kick ass emotionally unstable dom.

Is it just me or is this an oxymoron?

28 Jul 2014

Quote by RavenStar

My question is, what changed? Is this permanent? It's going to make browsing on my phone uncomfortable and clumsy.

:-(

this

28 Jul 2014

Quote by BethanyFrasier
That's one of my pet-peeves in porn! Take your heels off, bitch! You're in bed, getting fucked! I hate wearing high heels even more than I do wearing a bra! Who designs these instruments of physical torture for women?? ...and yes, I DO wear them sometimes because I'm so damn short, and its the only way I can look hot in a dress or a skirt.

Haha! I'm completely the opposite. I love my heels and will wear them for no reason. I also, no doubt, spend way to much $ on shoes. I'm tall enough (6') to not need them, but will wear them for the sheer fun of it.

27 Jul 2014

Mint skoal

25 Jul 2014

No, I tend to believe such is grade school-esque.

An exception, my ex and I both thought David Allen Coe's "You Don't Have to Call Me Darling" was special to us. We met laughing to it, so it was special in a way. but it wasn't "our song."

24 Jul 2014

New Goal: finish the one inhabiting my head. This character must get on paper and soon. She's taking over everything.

24 Jul 2014

Quote by Dirty_D

Checking in
previously unfinished, now published:Under Pressure

first audio story: Still

Still working on a pair of collabs, but I added a bonus story:sandcastles mine that suddenly needed to be told. (and yes, it too is a love story. whats up with the necessary tales being about love?)

checking in, i seem to have been very productive since the last check in:

Pair of collabs: Syncopation, written with Milik
with the lovely Poppet: Crimson Skies

second audio:Shower Time

bonus not planned story:Released from Duty

24 Jul 2014

24 Jul 2014

My new favorite: "Catgroove," Parov Stelar

23 Jul 2014

Makes me smile.

Also has a very active comment section

23 Jul 2014

Quote by Magical_felix

No, I guess I am not good enough to have a story idea ready to start writing right when the comp is announced. I am not that good unfortunately.

You're with sprite on this one eh? Yeah, me too. How dickish of me to ask an author their method so I can learn how to have a story, sorry, I mean an idea ready to go right when the comp is announced. It's amazing. Usually takes me a week or more to have a thorough idea down for a comp before I can start writing. Probably why I struggle to get them in on time with only a few days left before the comp closes. I found Jayne having an idea ready to go right at the start when she first heard of the comp to be noteworthy. So I asked her about it, my bad. Not sure why you would be so sensitive about it. I would brag if I were that good.

Surely you have a bank of ideas? I always do. Mine tend to be stored as a paragraph or two to remind me of what the gist was, enough to jump start. I save these starts all on one document, and from time to time use one.

I have a couple ideas that I could take and with a minor tweek turn into comp stories. But I think I have too many projects going already for this time around. I'm afraid starting one more might crash the entire juggling act. Maybe the next one will be a better time for me.

23 Jul 2014

Ribeye, cooked to perfection, a great crust, and red in the center.

mac n cheese, steamed broccoli, ice cold beer.

20 Jul 2014

Quote by clum
I pretty much just write about what I do with your mum.

evil5

20 Jul 2014

LOL... Funny