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Dirty_D
Over 90 days ago
Pan Female, 47
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Quote by vines
Awww look guys she want a guy to give her a standing ovation. When you said I'm 6' and 180. All I heard was I'm slim and pretty and want to get fucked--HARD! Correct me if I am wrong.
Wait I just got a vision of you, "Ay, papi make me use my tippy-toes."
Again correct me if I'm wrong.
Um, Im 6' tall, and very proportional.
Why is it simply stating the truth, that its hard for tall girls to fuck standing up, asking to be fucked? Since the average height for a man is 5'10," most guys simply cant stand up to fuck those of us who have no trouble reaching the top shelves.
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Quote by BlondeBabyGirl
Have you done it yourself? I've looked into it and have the savings for it but worried about regretting it.
Not me, but my sister and another friend have. I thought about it also, but what I have seen of their experiences makes me hesitant to do it. They both have not had the success they had hoped for.
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Quote by dpw
No, why should anyone do that? Being a gold member doesn't mean you can write well. It simply means that you pay to support the site, and get a few perks.
There are plenty that don't even write and some that should think about giving up.
If you are refering to the mods, I still don't. They tend not to write in the categories that I like. However, I've yet to read a poor story by a mod. They might not be my sexual cup of tea, but they are well written.
In response to the second half, you might try this story, Amor Vincit Omnia, by clum. I think you might like it.
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Gone forever, is nice in a way, but it is expensive and time consuming to get to that point. There are many follow ups required. and and each one costs more. even after 6 months of treatments, there is frequently hair left, particularly if, like me, you have thick dark hair.
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Settle for Nothing was a collaboration with Delphi. When it was fully edited, it came to 19,000 words, and is posted in three parts. I'm also pleased to say it received the new award for Outstanding Series 
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Quote by vines
Two different times. Two different people. I only have one stroy posted up. And yeah maybe he does have lots of views and what not. I only have two stories posted up. As far has his skill at telling a story. I don't know. Didnt seem very good to me. Do me a favor read Kisses in The Dark. It is the first story I ever wrote. Or 2nd store I wrote I can't remember. I wrote it +10 years ago. You'll understand why would want to read other stories of mine. I'm just on another level. And if my stories are good enough to find enjoyment out of reading then they should be allowed on the site.
Fair enough, Ive read Buz's work and cant remember ever reading yours. Your claim to be a better writer then Buz is a strong one, but I was willing to approach it with an open mind. So I followed your suggestion and read "kisses in the dark."
Here is my assessment of Kisses in the Dark: If this was posted now, it would be returned. I couldn't follow it. The POV changes from 1st person to third, to third person using "a man" and "a woman." It switches from past to present tenses with no continuity at all. All of this works to speed bump the reader, jarring them from what they are reading. Your punctuation is incorrectly formatted. But the worst sin to me is that your story is all tell, with no show.
Now to compare that to, say, Miss American Pornstar, is in fact on a different level. It is like comparing the work of a high school student with that of a grad student. Miss American Pornstar is meticulously edited for proper punctuation, correct verbage, and POV. And it shows me the story with lots of attention to detail.
Keep writing Mr. Vines, someday you too can approach the level Buz is at. Then maybe you will have more votes then 2 on your stories.
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I dont find that odd. You might have had things that if fixed would make your story better. Verifiying does not equal liking, trust me! Hence you can think something is a good story, while knowing it is not ready for publication. as a matter of fact I have a few like that right now
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Quote by daddysweetheart
Time will lessen the pain..and possibly someone new might as well.
Maybe writing in a notebook might help..eventually this will get a, get worse..or b, you may finally let go or accept the fact it won't be..
Or c, you'll get back together.
Hugs..best of luck.
Jumping from one obsession to another is terrible advice. Listen to dani. Get a hobby. Something that forces you to focus on it instead of what your emotions are trying to get you to fixate on. Then you'll slip into not thinking about her without conscious thought on your end.
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Quote by Liz
Knives and pepper spray... you lot would be locked up in the UK
Cop: "Right, hands behind your back. You're under arrest."
Me: "What!? You've got to be joking. Why?"
Cop: "Carrying a concealed weapon."
Me: "A concealed weapon? It's a fucking spork!"
Cop: "Still sharp."
Me: "It's attached to a goddamn salad pot! I've only just bought it from Tesco!"
Cop: "Yeah but... you could still scratch someone with it."
Me: "Yeah, and I could kick you in the balls, too. Want to confiscate my shoes?"
Disclaimer: Not a factual account. This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
and hand guns. I know several people who are packing when they run.
I'm very predictable in general. I run work days before I shower and head in. The variance comes from my schedule. Ive been going different routes though now. 
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Quote by Raven_Star
Be careful, hon. People are bold, even in public. It may just be that the pervs and scaries came out this week. You can probably take care of yourself, but still, it's prudent to be safe.
Change up your running route. This may sound extreme, but I usually carry a small spray can of mace attached to a bracelet when I run outside. In an emergency situation, you don't want to be caught without options.
Just my
Yea, Im changing up my pattern. (the guy who chased me down freaked me out a bit honestly ("I know you work out a lot. I see you running here all the time" what?!) Plus I always carry a(well maintained) knife in a sheath in my bra.
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1) hold my hair, head, drive the action as you desire it.
2) of course
3) either, prefer not to get it in my hair
4)I prefer to swallow myself. but Im amenable to other methods when asked
I really enjoy giving head, and what makes it enjoyable to me is seeing that I am giving pleasure. So grip my hair, pull it. drive deep into my mouth. moan. let me know how you want it. Because i want it to be great for you, and I want to know you are enjoying it.
2) of course
3) either, prefer not to get it in my hair
4)I prefer to swallow myself. but Im amenable to other methods when asked
I really enjoy giving head, and what makes it enjoyable to me is seeing that I am giving pleasure. So grip my hair, pull it. drive deep into my mouth. moan. let me know how you want it. Because i want it to be great for you, and I want to know you are enjoying it.