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hello authors,
any tips on writing realistic descriptions of online encounters? My problem is with the dialogue. In the cold light of morning the chat log is about as erotic as a laundry list (error, some laundry lists are quite good cf Woody Allen).
I feel the reader should be seduced in the same way I was by my cyber partner's chat but oh how to do it?
Many thanks
any tips on writing realistic descriptions of online encounters? My problem is with the dialogue. In the cold light of morning the chat log is about as erotic as a laundry list (error, some laundry lists are quite good cf Woody Allen).
I feel the reader should be seduced in the same way I was by my cyber partner's chat but oh how to do it?
Many thanks
I am very very grateful to everyone who replied, thank you. I felt rather silly reading some of the comments because of course I had not considered the comparison with childbirth and I have only very recently been reading about how the elasticity of the vagina means that even quite small penises can usually give a woman pleasure during intercourse, so i should have made that connection also.
I started to believe that I must have imagined the changes in my wife and that it was really about my own fear that she still "needed" David's larger cock. But actually I think Bethany may have hit on something when she speculated that because my wife is now much wetter during sex she feels looser to me. Throughout our marriage we never used a lube of any kind, and as a result we often struggled with painful and frustrating experiences in the bedroom. In many ways I was pleased my wife enjoyed David, he gave her the sort of sexual experience I was not able to and if she is now more easily self lubricating that bodes well for her future. Unfortunately my wife and I separated recently but I hope she is making the most of her new found excitement for physical love and now I know she can take even those monster cocks in the shape of a child's head. Thanks again. E
I started to believe that I must have imagined the changes in my wife and that it was really about my own fear that she still "needed" David's larger cock. But actually I think Bethany may have hit on something when she speculated that because my wife is now much wetter during sex she feels looser to me. Throughout our marriage we never used a lube of any kind, and as a result we often struggled with painful and frustrating experiences in the bedroom. In many ways I was pleased my wife enjoyed David, he gave her the sort of sexual experience I was not able to and if she is now more easily self lubricating that bodes well for her future. Unfortunately my wife and I separated recently but I hope she is making the most of her new found excitement for physical love and now I know she can take even those monster cocks in the shape of a child's head. Thanks again. E
My wife had an affair over about 3 months with a guy who had a large cock, about 5" thick 8" long from my brief perusal. I know they had sex nearly every day and often more. She was always a lovely tight fit even for my very small cock (2" thick by 4" long), but since she split up with her lover and came back to me her vagina is much looser, very loose in fact and also incredibly wet when aroused which was never the case before. She is 44 and otherwise very fit, runs everyday and in good health. I wonder if this guy has stretched her, or just made her more receptive to sex. Any explanations gladly accepted.