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Very well said DM

While I was there, I tried to right click on a story and do have to say, that will stop some people from stealing. Not knowing much about computers myself, it took me less than two minutes - after trying the right click and viewing the source - to finally work out a way to download the page (which took less than a second) for people to be able to copy and paste on to another site. But as DM said, it's not just Lush, it's everywhere that it can be done.

I just went over to stories space and now can't wait for the Lush V.2 to arrive. I love that you can see the one liners on the front page; looks fantastic!
Quote by DLizze
I believe there are certain rules of civility that shoiuld be maintained in all situations, and complimenting strangers is one of them. Keep it honest, clean, and private. That shows a little restraint, and a little respect.


If I got dressed in my sluttest short skirt and most revealing top to go out to the clubs and pick up men (or women), then I would be patting myself on the back.

Otherwise, what DLizze said.

When I was High School, the weirdest comment I ever received was a stranger coming up to me while I was at the mall, and complimenting me on my small feet. He stared (and stared) at them in wonder and awe - a good four (very long) minutes. I was somewhat confused and a little flattered. Now a little wiser, knowing that he must of had a foot fetish, I would feel just a little creeped out. There is a time and place for everything - one, I was UA and secondly, I was shopping! No-one should ruin a woman's day of shopping. Never! LOL
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Could we have a 'LIKE' button on The Forum posts so that you could just 'LIKE' someone's post?

Kind of like FaceBook, so the person who posted could see who liked what they wrote...... I think it might encourage interaction between members........

xx SF


There you go, SF Just for you





LOL sorry, I did this for another thread a little earlier today and couldn't help myself
Hello Darkstar,

Could you please send me a link of your story and I will have a look at it for you.

PM me
How can anyone not know that this is true!

Doesn't anyone read the *lush stories, to know that EVERY woman comes on command.

"Cum for me baby," he ordered.

"Okay," she moaned as she came.

Surely you have read that before!

Shame, people, shame

* Please note that Lush Stories is a FICTION story site
Hmmm girl sitting on toilet drinking yellow fluid

Gawd I hope that is an alcoholic drink she is drinking, otherwise she is very dehydrated
Welcome to Lush, Teddy

I just had a look at your latest submission and it is not as bad as I thought it would be. I hope you don't mind, but I thought I would reply here for future reference, and for others who have the same problem/s.

Here are some basic hints for getting a story submitted (please still look at the links that magnificent1rascal suggested). None of us are perfect, and we don't expect the stories to be perfect. All we ask is, is that the stories are readable and are presented in a reasonable format. I will try to say this in layman terms as I am (a) pretty lay myself.

1. Most importantly, please read the rules before submitting. One of the most common rules that is broken, is mentioning . Most people do not understand that while we allow stories with children, ie. A family picnic etc. - we do not allow stories where children may witness a sex act, have participated or have had sexual feelings (even crushes) under the age of 16. Or, as with your story, you have broken this rule unintentionally; you mentioned that in a 'sex industry', that they were as young as 14. That will need to be changed to 16 for it to be approved.

2. If unsure, think commas as pauses or taking a breath. Read your story out loud, and when there is a pause in the sentence, place a comma. Eg. you wrote 'I do have a blog that I post my stories on and although people seem to enjoy my stories my grammar and punctuation are often pointed out as being bad.' It should roughly read as 'I do have a blog that I post my stories on, and although people seem to enjoy my stories, my grammar and punctuation are often pointed out as being bad.'

3. A comma does not belong at the end of a sentence. This leads to run-on sentences. Breaking these sentences up, will stop you getting a rejection slip for run-on's. Our biggest run-on sentence was an entire story! Not one full stop

4. There should never be a space before a comma (or a full stop), but there should be a single space after a comma. There should be one or two spaces after a full stop - either one is acceptable. There should never be a space after or before the end of the quotation mark. ie. "This is the correct way," and " This is not the correct way. "

5. Paragraphs ideally should be between 3 to 5 sentences long. This is not a set rule, rather a suggestion for it to be easier for the reader. Block stories not only look bad, but you often lose your place. When someone speaks, it should be treated as a new paragraph, meaning a space above it and below it. And, we would prefer if there was never more than one person speaking in the same paragraph - it is confusing for the readers.

6. Narration. Hmmmm, I will give an example from your story.

Policeman . “So are you rent, or just cruising?”

Me .“I don’t know what you’re talking about !”


This format is a play format and not for a story. It should read this way.

“So, are you rent, or just cruising?” asked the Policeman.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about!” I replied.


Often, you can miss out the 'asked' and 'replied' if there are just two people speaking. Different rule, if there are more than two.

“So are you rent, or just cruising?”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about!”


Another example:

"Wow, this story is full of grammatical errors," she stated. "This really spoils the whole story for me." NOT " Wow this story is full of grammatical errors . "She stated " This really spoils the whole story for me "

* Please note: The red comma indicating that it should not be a full stop, and the red s should not be a capital. Narration should be treated as a sentence and have a comma and full stop.


7. No text talk. BF should be written as boyfriend!

And also, please read any link that is provided to you when you get a rejection slip.

I hope this helps in someways. As I said, we are not looking for perfection (if we were, I wouldn't be here LOL), we are just looking for a well presented and readable story. Good luck and if you have any questions, just pm me.


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@ bigguns This is not even remotely funny anymore - Just more work for the admin.

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since i have been on the receiving end of the hurtful attacks many a time


Doesn't this then say to you that maybe you need to take a break or approach the forums in a different manner?

I know I need a break from this. You cannot post defamatory post, then get all apologetic and expect everyone to forgive you. Unless that is not your attention, and you are doing this just for fun??? If that IS the case, congratulations on spoiling Lush for so many people.
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Hi all,
Just writing to make myself heard.U see I have just found out that I love cock rather than pussy, I wonder if any of u guys are in the same predicament and what can be done about it?????


The best thing you can do is just be honest - with yourself and with your wife. You never know, it may not be a predicament, it may be an exciting new adventure for you and your wife just as you described in your blog. If not, it is better to end the marriage now before anyone gets hurt.
LOL In fact I do have a custom made badge that only took me a couple of hours to make, going for a very cheap discounted price of only $49.95




As you can see, the workmanship that has gone into producing this, makes it a bargain!
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I like wearing a collar and leash sometimes for dirty sex and role-play but for me it's just a moment in time, not a lifestyle.

So I have a question for the collard and cuffed people: Is this similar to an 'engagement ring' or 'marriage' of sorts. I'm not in the BDSM lifestyle, so I'm really just trying to understand the dynamics behind this concept. Also, how serious is this commitment viewed? Knowing that many/most relationships and marriages meet their eventual demise, I'm just wondering how difficult it would be for a sub/master relationship to end and what the "uncollaring" ritual entails? Also.. would a sub seek out another master to collar them or is this considered a 'once in a lifetime' commitment only? And lastly... can you be in a relationship or marriage to one person and be collared/cuffed to a different "master" or is this prohibited?


Collaring a sub means ownership. Once on, the sub is classed as 'property' of the Master/Mistress. You could say it is like a wedding ring and that it is on display for the world to see that the sub is owned and that it is like a marriage - that is if you don't mind being in a marriage that may be sexless and no way ever be considered equal. The Master may have as many subs as he/she wants - The sub has only one Master. The Master may loan out her/his pet as he/she is the Master/Mistress and must never be questioned or denied.

For a sub, it means pride of ownership, devotion and commitment. Subtiggy's post was wonderful and you can tell how much love and respect (even in her stories) she has for her Master as you may notice that she always capitalize His, He and Him. Subs often do not own names - They are named by their Master, such as 'girl' etc

Once collared, the sub must be fully committed but if it came to the 'end of the agreement' (uncollared), then it simply means that they have the collar taken from them. No big ceremony and it is the ultimate punishment in some cases. They (the subs) are then free to look for a new Master.

Often a married person has a Master as well. In these cases, their wedded spouse are not their Masters. A sub may ask their Master for permission to have another Master but the answer is normally no and it would be frowned upon. The sub may live a normal life with their spouse, but when it is 'pet time', they are the sole property of the Master and only does what He or She orders. If a sub seeked out another Master or another person besides his spouse for sex on his/her own accord, they would be uncollared.

@Yahtzee I understand what you mean There is a difference to a person who truly lives a BDSM lifestyle to those on here that use it often as attention seeking to get views etc. A true sub will only speak when they are told to and not cyber chat - unless they are in the same room with their Master and are being told to. A real sub would not go in the chat rooms by themselves - they would wait for their Master.
As bigguns said, when you marry, fortunately/unfortunately, you tend to not only to get a husband/wife but a new family - sometimes close, sometimes not too close. But basically, Sex + New Family - Blood =

If you are sleeping with your brother in-law, you are cheating on your spouse and cheating also falls into the category.

sex stories relate to the restrictions placed on sexual activities and relationships (sex outside of marriage, adultery, intermarriage).


If you are not married anymore but still consider his brother as a in-law, that goes into the straight sex category - unless he is married LOL
I've broken two myself. I don't know if it's because they were cheap, or in the excitement I twisted them too hard for higher speed, disconnecting the wires from the batteries. Probably an easy fix, but I just buy push button ones now.
I've had my Samsung Galaxy S2 now for three weeks and just adore it! - much better than the iphone

Just like the others, I use it for everything and I'm using it right now.
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Nocola and losh? Have you been dronking again?

loshstories.com available, add to cart


LOL Me? Nooooo Never

I should have included a disclaimer

* Please note names have been changed due to the fact that Nicola, Gav or Lush have no involvement in my get rich scheme - DirtyMartini on the other hand, is as wicked as I am. No refunds will be given if you are unhappy with your badge or it's placement - Sorry, but the money will be spent as soon as I receive it and I can't give it back if I don't have it! smile
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I'm sorry i just can't stay away. I posted in another thread that has since been removed that a donations tab would be really pretty cool. all of us who feel like freeloaders could go and show some support for the awesome work that nicola and gav and the other mods do here. it could also be cool to give badges to donators profile pages and even super cool badges with yellow text (like the mods and famous story badges) if you donate a lot like $100 or more (either at once or over the course of a few donations) I realize that getting a secure server to manage people's credit card info may be spendy (i don't really know) but i can practically guarantee that if you made that investment you would get people donating especially if the charge was discreet and said something like (thanks for your support.....$15) you could even sign up to allow people to pay using secure servers they already have accounts with like pay pal amazon and mobicharge just a thought (even better than my lushmerch idea i think)


I have talked this over with *Nocola and *Gat, and we have decided that if you are so eager to donate, contact me via my profile and I will send you my... umm I mean Lush's paypal details. For every $50 you donate, I have been given the privledge to personally design and place a golden donator's badge on your profile in your friends comments box. The more you donate, the bigger the badge will be

Thank you in advance



uhm can't tell if your joking or serious if you are serious do you think we could idk make it a little less sketch lol


Of course I'm serious

I have already designed several badges on the behalf of Losh based on a scaling donation



Just remember to contact 'The Losh Donation Centre' and as soon as I have received the payment and you have added me as a friend, you will get one of the above badges.

@ DirtyMartini FFS I saw him first!!! LOL
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I'm sorry i just can't stay away. I posted in another thread that has since been removed that a donations tab would be really pretty cool. all of us who feel like freeloaders could go and show some support for the awesome work that nicola and gav and the other mods do here. it could also be cool to give badges to donators profile pages and even super cool badges with yellow text (like the mods and famous story badges) if you donate a lot like $100 or more (either at once or over the course of a few donations) I realize that getting a secure server to manage people's credit card info may be spendy (i don't really know) but i can practically guarantee that if you made that investment you would get people donating especially if the charge was discreet and said something like (thanks for your support.....$15) you could even sign up to allow people to pay using secure servers they already have accounts with like pay pal amazon and mobicharge just a thought (even better than my lushmerch idea i think)


I have talked this over with *Nocola and *Gat, and we have decided that if you are so eager to donate, contact me via my profile and I will send you my... umm I mean Lush's paypal details. For every $50 you donate, I have been given the privledge to personally design and place a golden donator's badge on your profile in your friends comments box. The more you donate, the bigger the badge will be

Thank you in advance
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Mine is actually a drink...I had started writing a couple of years ago using the name Exakta66, because I collect Exakta cameras and was using that name for everything else I did on the net...

Then I found out last year that Exakta is an active registered trademark, and thought it best to change it...my girlfriend Nancy suggested the DirtyMartini name, and I agreed it seemed like a good choice...a hint of "dirtiness" without being too dirty...



I read about a week ago, that a guy who used the word "Speedo" in his username and his web site/blog. Because it was associated with gay and bi-sexual sites, Speedo is now taking him to court. So, good call DM

When I first joined, I used the name mystique. I got pm after pm requesting my time to pleasure them, so the very next day, I deleted that account and tried to think of a really fucking ugly name LOL and that is how I became Fugly Not one request for cyber for the first day and only a small handful since then!!!
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I just found a free plagiarism checker, it uses a short quote from your stories and searches google and for a match, found one of mine just now

Looks like I can post links then

The site is www(dot)plagiarismchecker(dot)com
(Can someone who can post a link please post it for me)


Thanks MistressS. The link is http://www.plagiarismchecker.com/ I googled my stories but came up with nothing - was actually disappointed LOL - but then I tried plagiarismchecker and came up with one story being posted at '*** friends' by 'Lucy' with no link to Lush or myself.
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I have an idea for an interracial story idea here which most people will find rather novel because it involves an Asian men bedding Caucasian women rather than vice versa. The central character is from Vietnam or China and is the extremely handsome and wealthy playboy son of a tycoon who has dubious dealings with the Asian triads. Upon turning 18, he is set overseas to study in Australia. Now ever since he was a young teen, he has been fascinated by the beauty of the plump and voluptuous Caucasian beauties that he has seen on internet porn sites. The fact that such women are practically non-existent in his own country only serves to add to their appeal. Naturally, upon arriving in Australia, he quickly sets about seducing numerous Aussie females who are fascinated by both his good looks as well as his obvious wealth. They include his classmates, casual acquaintances and even many housewives. Very soon, being as business savvy as his father, he decides to start his own porn site which stars him and his local sexual conquests. These films find a huge audience in numerous Asian nations. He makes both himself as well his lovers plenty of money and is encouraged in this by his father who appreciates his son’s initiative. Eventually, he decides that he wants to move to the U.K where he can tap into the larger Chinese market there for his productions. In the U.K, he finds it even easier to seduce the local Caucasian women since they find him infinitely preferable to the local British men who tend to be rather overweight and boorish. I guess the question that I’m asking is that would anyone enjoy reading this story? Also, would anyone find it racially offensive? Your feedback would be greatly appreciated.


I, for one, am glad you have thought out your story in such detail. But I do have to ask, is this a story for Lush or for a novel? As a story verifier for lush, I can honestly say that readers do appreciate detail, but not too much.

If you are concerned about insulting people (and I do agree that at the moment there are too many stereotypes in your brief), do you have to write an 'interracial' story? Would you be happy keeping your original idea minus the races?

eg.

I have an idea for an story. The central character is an extremely handsome and wealthy playboy son of a tycoon. Upon turning 18, he is set overseas to study in Australia. Now ever since he was a young teen, he has been fascinated by internet porn sites. Arriving in Australia, he quickly sets about seducing numerous females who are fascinated by both his good looks as well as his obvious wealth. They include his classmates, casual acquaintances and even many housewives. Very soon, being as business savvy as his father, he decides to start his own porn site which stars him and his local sexual conquests. These films find a huge audience. He makes both himself as well his lovers plenty of money and is encouraged in this by his father who appreciates his son’s initiative. Eventually, he decides that he wants to move to the U.K...


Without all the stereotyping, this could be a rather interesting serial story.
to sprite (I hope the bitch didn't spoil your b'day! ) and DD

Love the reviews! Keep it up.

I just hope she is not a member of Lush, considering the 5 stories (maybe more) and the bio came from here and the dates of her submitting them at fanfiction are different.
As a story verifier - not tonite though - I can understand why men need to be told/lied to that they are fantastick lovers and have huge dicks, especially if they are from lush! I have read - oh my god, I have lost count - about giant cocks, enormous cocks, super dooper cocks and they ALL bring their women to multiple orgasms. Oh, don't forget about forum topics such as the 16 inch cock!

Yes lafayett, I do believe it is from watching too much porn and ummm lush
Yes, as much as men are when they say we don't look fat in those jeans LOL

To be honest, yes I would say he is the best fuck, biggest cock etc if that meant he would perform better.
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you really think of 100,000 members only 100 could spring the 10 bucks a month?

maybe your right but if you refer back to my previous post i did say if takes off if being key i wouldn't suggest as a thing to start doing right away if at all. but come on one LushStudios major production sold for 24.99 for non members on DVD at the LushStore and streaming for pro members for 4.99 per 10 day viewing period? no that would be awesome with spectacularly lengthy clips and extended trailers free for pro users.

what story would make the best feature length movie?




(PS) a lush store with smart ass t-shirts lush approved toys and lingerie could be awesome too right?


I must say that some of your ideas are interesting. But, and it is a big BUT, would we still have the number of members or quality of members that we have now, if we go from an Erotic STORY site to a PORN site?