How about changing the title to something less grating grammatically, that's a start. Then maybe try writing in categories that aren't . Like Dudealicious said, I wish you luck.
I will admit to being guilty of folding a corner in a book or seventy when I was younger. Then I found that I could just remember what page number I was on, and the problem was solved. Not a thing.
Truly brand spiked seltzer water, in lemon and yuzu flavour. It's amazing.
Yes. By my partner, whom I love and trust beyond all measure.
Coffee, with a coffee chaser.
Congratulations to all. We are blessed to have you among the Lush community.
Soft but distinct Francophone Canadian accent. In English, French, and Spanish.
Is this even a question? Chocolate.
A cuppa would suit me, too, Rump. I take mine with sugar and a little milk, if you have it. Thanks.
Welcome, Anne. We've many talented authors of both sexes here. Enjoy yourself.
Blackcurrant tea from Murchie's, in Vancouver.
What Verbal and Sprite have been saying. Try looking at the Flash Erotica if you want an idea of how to grab a reader and keep them transfixed. My own "Double Oxer" might be a good read (hello, shameless plug!).
Yah...no. Even as much as I enjoy fellating a guy, I'm not going to fellate some random.