Thank you I appreciate the advice, sometimes I get carried away and keep writing. I am trying to slow down and keep them short and readable.

Thank you I will try that

Thank you I will keep that in mind. I try to keep them interesting and entertaining

I enjoy writing my stories, I read a lot of stories here and on other sites. I think sometimes I become to invested in characters and try to make them more interesting.

I have been told I expound too much and should stick to strictly sex but I find that hard to do sometimes. Does anyone else have this problem?

Thanks for your help, I think I will change the direction of my story. Just to be safe

Before i finish my next story, i was wondering what the rules are concerning fantasy. I don’t want to over step or create any issues.

I have submitted a story twice now, it has been sent back both times. I used the correction example sent back by the moderator,, I put it through quilbot, grammarly, and a third proofread program. They each gave me a different correction. I am at a loss, now because I don’t know which one to use. Because I don’t know which one is acceptable.

I have submitted a story twice so far, I have used grammar and a second proofreading program and, a spellcheck program and it still isn’t being accepted. I do this for my enjoyment, but at this point it is neither enjoyable nor fun anymore.

I am so frustrated I don’t know what to do.

Thank you very much I will try to share it with you

I’m writing a story that has been rejected a few times. I have gone over and fixed it I think. If there is anyone that would be willing to proofread it and let me I would appreciate it. Thank you