>Hmm, interesting you say that. I find the start of your competition story quite incomprehensible!<
It is comprehensible but, as he said, the word count limit meant it had to be quite stripped down. (No pun intended.) It's exactly at 1,000 words. The sex act does seem to take up the entire text but, yeah, that's one way to handle the tight restriction.
I didn't plan it that way but in my story readers at the start may ask, "Where the hell is 205th Street?" (I'd have the same problem if it was set in London or Berlin.) It's not until the third paragraph where I mention coming out of Manhattan, so it has to be one of the outer boroughs of New York. Near the end, I mention Bronx Boulevard, so that finally pins it down. It was mostly inadvertent however.
I did a quick count, and I may be off a bit, but I counted 112 entries. Is that the most ever in a comp?
Also, just to check the password - the password retrieval link brings you back to the Planned Migration announcement page, which isn't useful.
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Sorry, Nicola, I shouldn't have bothered you with a PM. Anyway, the Lush Stories log-in - user name and password - doesn't seem to work on Stories Space. Am I missing something?
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I don't think I've ever started a story with a sex act. Not that it can't be done; it just never seems to fit what I want to do.
I may indeed have omitted an existing first paragraph, but off-hand I can't remember. I've definitely added them later if something occurs to me. There have been times when I have started, not quite in the middle, but some ways into it. Also, if I'm having trouble with a scene, I'll just skip it and put in a note about what is eventually going in there.
Somewhere near the beginning, I usually like to give a bit about the setting, where and when this is happening. I don't go into a John Updike level of detail, but I think the location does have an impact on what the characters are thinking about and makes the story seem more real, more plausible.
Assume it's a real location or a perhaps a slightly fictionalized version of one. So readers my ask: I've never been there, I don't know what it looks like. Well, go online. Use Google Maps or Bing Maps street view. Even places that are now gone usually leave photographic images behind. I often use the City College of New York as a setting. I've found every building that ever existed there (I mention them by name in the stories), plus many photos of the campus as it used to appear going back to the 1860's - it's all online.
Of course, if it's in ancient Rome or a fantasy setting, then you're probably on your own!
We talked about this on Literotica. Nathanael West called it "excited disgust." People are fascinated with certain things, including aspects of sexuality, but then the guilt comes in and they can't admit it even to themselves. Thus they feel compelled to read about it a lot and then proclaim their disapproval.
I used to do it once in a while with my ex-wife. But we always did it in a bathtub full of soapy water, which was as clean as we could make it.
Well, it's British, right? Not too many of those made in over here I guess. What is the date on it?
It doesn't look very subtle, but porn rarely is.