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Michael
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male
0 miles · Fort Lauderdale
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Quote by LadyX
Entertainment for some, tiresome for others. Let's take this episode away from the forum, please. If there's more to this than passive aggressive sparring, please one of you let me know via PM. Thanks!
I bow to the Marvelous LadyX and adore the ever Delightful Shylass...
I do apologize to the other readers... My vision sometimes misses the arena I am in.
so I bury all..
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WTF was the original question?
Oh.. "Do women like to Suck Cock in Public?"
Well based upon google research the answer is a resounding 'Yes"
as long as they don't get caught.
Google "Girls Sucking Cock in Public" results are >
About 11,600,000 results (0.10 seconds)
Jeez, I need to be in public more!
But I do recommend to look and see who else needs a BJ...
Google - College girl arrested for sucking dick in public - HumorON.com (I am sure it will lead somewhere satisfying yet degrading)
Guess cops need lovin' too!
Oh.. "Do women like to Suck Cock in Public?"
Well based upon google research the answer is a resounding 'Yes"
as long as they don't get caught.
Google "Girls Sucking Cock in Public" results are >
About 11,600,000 results (0.10 seconds)
Jeez, I need to be in public more!
But I do recommend to look and see who else needs a BJ...
Google - College girl arrested for sucking dick in public - HumorON.com (I am sure it will lead somewhere satisfying yet degrading)
Guess cops need lovin' too!
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Quote by sazraz
Angelina Jolie...i just dont get it
I first saw Angelina on HBO in the movie Gia...
She was amazing to see, her full lips, her sensuality, and her acting all made her a fantasy realized.
I understand the 'unrated' version of Gia was just released... I need to find it.
but on the less than stellar list is>
Jenny Lopez - Met her during the filming of Selena, rudeness is never attractive.
Jenny Aniston - Am I missing something?
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Quote by Dancing_Doll
Sorry, I don't speak geek.
All I know is, everything you need in life is right between her legs.
... And yes, her pussy-juice tastes like apples too, hence the fun of getting a little apple-sauce on your sausage while you surf Lush on this fabulous laptop!
DD, We all luv' ya' so much because, as always your words go right to the point...or the right spot, or area....okay the right feeling.
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I had read this post previously and since then use the Flesch-Kincaid website to analyze my own writing
As Dirty Martini mentioned, poetry just does not work and I would obtain similar scores as him when checking my poetry.
I just finalized a story I wrote last year. The final chapter of "You Me" and obtained the following>
Method used: Flesch-Kincaid (English).
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 10.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 58.
The other chapters had similar results.
Then looked at a later story, "Coming to You" and obtained the following>
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 8.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 67.
Coincidentally, my last story "Collaring My Slut" had identical results.
It would seem that my writing had trending to easier reading but has stabilized.
Out of interest I checked the opening page of Steinbeck's "Of Mice and Men" which scored>
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 10.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 60.
Hemmingway's "Farewell to Arms" scored an even higher >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 12.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 61.
John Grisham's "The Associate" scored a respectable>
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 11.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 54.
Interesting a recent NY Times story on "Selling Abroad, China" scored >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 17.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 16.
And their report on the drug war in Mexico scored >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 15.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 33.
CNN's story on U.S. Secretary of Commerce John Bryson scored >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 13.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 25.
But how many still read the news unless it is on Comedy Central?
How do your stores score on readability?
As Dirty Martini mentioned, poetry just does not work and I would obtain similar scores as him when checking my poetry.
I just finalized a story I wrote last year. The final chapter of "You Me" and obtained the following>
Method used: Flesch-Kincaid (English).
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 10.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 58.
The other chapters had similar results.
Then looked at a later story, "Coming to You" and obtained the following>
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 8.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 67.
Coincidentally, my last story "Collaring My Slut" had identical results.
It would seem that my writing had trending to easier reading but has stabilized.
Out of interest I checked the opening page of Steinbeck's "Of Mice and Men" which scored>
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 10.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 60.
Hemmingway's "Farewell to Arms" scored an even higher >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 12.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 61.
John Grisham's "The Associate" scored a respectable>
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 11.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 54.
Interesting a recent NY Times story on "Selling Abroad, China" scored >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 17.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 16.
And their report on the drug war in Mexico scored >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 15.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 33.
CNN's story on U.S. Secretary of Commerce John Bryson scored >
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 13.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 25.
But how many still read the news unless it is on Comedy Central?
How do your stores score on readability?
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Quote by Michael_X
How long do oyu think a story should be before just making it two parts?
Should you split it in two to make it easier for the reader?
Leave it on a cliff hanger? How to leave the first part...
Opinions? Thoughts?
Hi Michael... Great Name!!!!!
You ask some questions that have already been addressed in the links the esteemed Author Martini linked to.9Eul3g9WgMCYWLUC
Do read them...
But you have also tossed in a few new questions...
So how long per chapter?... I have learned that 3000 to 4000 words per chapter works best... less and you cannot generate enough reader interest to carry a second chapter; longer and few will ever read it.
Cliff hanger - few stories here use action other than sex, so a cliff hanger is doubtful, I prefer to find a natural break in the story to end a chapter, such as the characters going to sleep.
Read some of the great multi chapter stories already on Lush... the great ones like LadyX and several others....
http://www.lushstories.com/ladyx
Final word of caution... Never Post Chapter #1 until the final chapter is done... if it is good, they don't want to wait.
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My favorite is Cherry Dump Cake with French Vanilla Ice Cream..
It is really more like a cobbler but is really the easiest dessert to make and has a short list of ingredients.
1 can (21 Oz.) Cherry Pie Filling
1 can (15 Oz.) Crushed Pineapple
1 box (about 18 Oz.) Yellow Or White Cake Mix
1 stick Margarine
1/2 stick Butter
Whipped Cream
You don't even need to stir anything thus the 'Dump' aspect.
It is really more like a cobbler but is really the easiest dessert to make and has a short list of ingredients.
1 can (21 Oz.) Cherry Pie Filling
1 can (15 Oz.) Crushed Pineapple
1 box (about 18 Oz.) Yellow Or White Cake Mix
1 stick Margarine
1/2 stick Butter
Whipped Cream
You don't even need to stir anything thus the 'Dump' aspect.
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Quote by NoahBody
I just recently started shaving...the pubic area...I shave it everyday without fail.
My question is this...since I only shave my balls and a three inch area above my cock,
sometimes the hair on my leg irritates my balls, is there any way around this issue?
Other than shaving my legs...
Should I possibly use a powder or a lotion perhaps, something better?
Thanks in advance to all SERIOUS posters.
When I starting shaving my balls, I would usually wear jockey shorts which cupped and prevented chaffing.
It has been several years and I no longer have any need for such protection, now boxers or commando are fine...
So, at least know it is only temporary.
And he did not say we could not find something humorous... he was just saying thanks to everyone else...
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Quote by Lisa
A good way to search for quality stories is to find an author you like and check the favourites list on their profile. If they have high standards when it comes to their own writing, they'll more than likely have well-written stories on their favourites list. There are lots of great authors here. When you find one you like, you can "follow" them and receive notifications whenever they publish a new story.
And welcome to Lush!
Lisa, Great Idea !!!
But please don't get paranoid that I am following you...
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Quote by WellMadeMale
Guys/boys/fucktards - show their dicks.
Men generally do not, ( unless they are total perverts at and in the moment - speaking from experience here - at which point - they become fucktards )
Gentlemen certainly do not.
This is a free lesson and you may thank me later.
My dog licks his balls, cuz he can...
And here I thought we was all dogs...
Thanks WMM for another erudite explanation for something I have long pondered... (really, seriously thanks)
So I guess I should holster my pistol now?
Also, how come we don't have any condom emotes... we should promote safe sex.
Really thank goodness, I was getting embarrassed cuz I thought someone said we were supposed to be showing...
ahh never mind...