Points?
Consistent Style*****
Red Flags?
Multiple cats
Decorative clutter
Dirty clothes in the living room
Disorganized kitchen
Deep ocean swimming alone, due to the not knowing what is just below me.
But in my sleep it is heights, which strangely enough does not bother me in real life.
But Poizenivy luvs being tied up and used.
Hmmm..
The sign on door #1 reads
Makes you orgasm. Sounds like there is a glory hole behind this door.
The sign on door #2 reads
Make someone orgasm. Sounds like there is a glory hole with some thing exposed.
The sign on door #3 reads
Several people orgasm. Sounds like it leads to many glory holes.
Door 3
On cold winter nights in South Florida, (yeah, I know) I wear socks. That is my extent of my bedroom wardrobe.
Wet his bed until he tried an electric blanket.
Those eyes say yes.
How can I say no?
Fuck
Only if I can help with the shaving!
A forum friend suffers and we all feel her pain. I hope she has roof overhead and her "life" soon returns to normal.
All the best, Michael
I would bet that you have already made a few "Out of this world experience?"
Fuck
Benzo, gas up the transport.
I would let her wash my head...
No Dear, it's down here!
Hug, kiss or ?????
Yeah, in that order.
Received a rectal probing by a Suzuki.
With "The Unprofessional Masseuse"
Yeah!
I would say Fuck, but then I end up in her next story.
I just can't imagine it staying private so...
No
This bondage thing is just getting out of line...
Ron Abuelo and Coke
It Saturday Night!!!!
Clum, your comments are both thoughtful and helpful. I had written a story with two chapters when I was becoming dis-enchanted with aspects of the story. I took a divergent path and wrote a totally different story in one evening, which was well received. Today I have returned and written the third chapter to my first story. I struggled for a while before I found my characters. I basically had to reread my story to be able to continue it.
Lisa, I wholeheartedly agree with not publishing until completion, I now feel "obligated" to write a new chapter as though it is a pending deadline.
I do hope to hear more authors input on this subject.
Beyond the obvious , , etc...
I have a fear of writing about a handicapped person.
I believe I would have to have a greater understanding of their handicap and how they view it. It is all to easy to imagine some handicap, but it is difficult to be able to present it in a sensitive and intelligent manner. I am still considering several stories that deal with handicaps and continue to do research on it, perhaps I will have to start with a poem to wade in those waters slowly.
PennLady is doing a marvelous job with her "Pretending" series which deals with a similar situation and I would love to hear from her.
What do others think?