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Over 90 days ago
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Looks around, stunned at the chaos..
Where can I get a drink... oh, never mind
Where can I get a drink... oh, never mind
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Maybe this will be the night she says or does something that she wants to do.
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I'd be a poor judge here as my experience in two of the the three are either limited or non-existent. On the other hand, there is just no place like pussy. And where else can you watch your pleasure reflected back at you?
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"I don't like that"
Things are usually pretty hot for a few days after that
Things are usually pretty hot for a few days after that
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Try Carol O'Connell's "Mallory" books, or Dennis Lehane's "Patrick Kenzie" books. Kathy Mallory is a NYC detective who is very different from every other cop. Quirky character, deep plots. Lehane's Kenzie is a little more rough and tumble, Boston Irish, tough crowd.
Raw, underground anti-hero crime drama? The Burke novels by Andrew Vachss
Historical Drama, and some of the best battle scenes, get Jack Wythe's "Camulod" series, or his "Archer" trilogy.
Fantasy: Robert Jordan's "Wheel of Time series. And as already stated, George R. R. Martin's "Song of Fire and Ice" on which the "Games of Thrones" is based.
Joe Abercrombie wrote a great Trilogy, the First Law Trilogy, if you're interested in Swords and Magic with a harder edge. I'm currently going through the Richard K Morgan library, his "Altered Carbon" stories are so different and yet strikingly reminiscent of his "Land Fit For Heroes" Trilogy
Raw, underground anti-hero crime drama? The Burke novels by Andrew Vachss
Historical Drama, and some of the best battle scenes, get Jack Wythe's "Camulod" series, or his "Archer" trilogy.
Fantasy: Robert Jordan's "Wheel of Time series. And as already stated, George R. R. Martin's "Song of Fire and Ice" on which the "Games of Thrones" is based.
Joe Abercrombie wrote a great Trilogy, the First Law Trilogy, if you're interested in Swords and Magic with a harder edge. I'm currently going through the Richard K Morgan library, his "Altered Carbon" stories are so different and yet strikingly reminiscent of his "Land Fit For Heroes" Trilogy
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Introduce the title of your story: Five Nights (a seven part series)
Genre/Category: Group Sex
Provide the links:
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-01.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-02.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-03.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-04.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-05.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-06.aspx
The last chapter coming soon...
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
I had been writing erotic tales for a while, and really enjoyed it because it gave me the freedom to vicariously experience things that I had never done and was not likely to ever try. I'd had fantasies about threesomes for a long while, and started considering a threesome story, but couldn't decide what I'd like to have happen, and didn't want it to devolve into an "every kink ever imagined" threesome. I solved it by deciding on a group of friends, two married couples, who agree that they will each get their own night of threesome fantasy.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
Honestly, like in most of my stories, the characters just create themselves. I mean, I have an idea of who they are, how they act, how they sound when they talk. And then I let them be themselves, with a little nudging. They aren't really based on anyone I know, although some have characteristics of people I know. But in the end they are all pretty much reflections of different aspects of my own personality and desires.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
Well, it's notable that it's written from a male POV, which I don't do a lot. I prefer sexy stories written from a woman's POV - yeah, go ahead, diagnose my issue, I have already. I'll wait.
Done? Good.
And unlike any other series I have ever written, this was written originally as one long story, and then broken into readable parts for posting.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Well there were a lot of challenges; consistency, not repeating myself, making each night different. But the toughest challenges were making the characters believable and likeable and setting a realistic setting, and then keeping chapters One and Three interesting. While 2, 4, 5, 6 and 7 are pretty much just straight threesome sex from end to end, the first and third chapters are mostly discussions of sex. I knew I stood a good chance of losing readers by opening with a limited-sex chapter, but I felt it was essential to the story to set up the rest of the series and establish the believability.
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
It was fun to write. Based on the comments it feels like I succeeded, and it's fun to read. The characters are good friends who trust each other. They have a LOT of fun. A couple of people favorited some chapters and I picked up some new followers. If you have the time, give it a read.
Genre/Category: Group Sex
Provide the links:
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-01.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-02.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-03.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-04.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-05.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/five-nights-ch-06.aspx
The last chapter coming soon...
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
I had been writing erotic tales for a while, and really enjoyed it because it gave me the freedom to vicariously experience things that I had never done and was not likely to ever try. I'd had fantasies about threesomes for a long while, and started considering a threesome story, but couldn't decide what I'd like to have happen, and didn't want it to devolve into an "every kink ever imagined" threesome. I solved it by deciding on a group of friends, two married couples, who agree that they will each get their own night of threesome fantasy.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
Honestly, like in most of my stories, the characters just create themselves. I mean, I have an idea of who they are, how they act, how they sound when they talk. And then I let them be themselves, with a little nudging. They aren't really based on anyone I know, although some have characteristics of people I know. But in the end they are all pretty much reflections of different aspects of my own personality and desires.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
Well, it's notable that it's written from a male POV, which I don't do a lot. I prefer sexy stories written from a woman's POV - yeah, go ahead, diagnose my issue, I have already. I'll wait.
Done? Good.
And unlike any other series I have ever written, this was written originally as one long story, and then broken into readable parts for posting.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Well there were a lot of challenges; consistency, not repeating myself, making each night different. But the toughest challenges were making the characters believable and likeable and setting a realistic setting, and then keeping chapters One and Three interesting. While 2, 4, 5, 6 and 7 are pretty much just straight threesome sex from end to end, the first and third chapters are mostly discussions of sex. I knew I stood a good chance of losing readers by opening with a limited-sex chapter, but I felt it was essential to the story to set up the rest of the series and establish the believability.
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
It was fun to write. Based on the comments it feels like I succeeded, and it's fun to read. The characters are good friends who trust each other. They have a LOT of fun. A couple of people favorited some chapters and I picked up some new followers. If you have the time, give it a read.
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I's like the see the red banner stay in place as I scroll down a page.
also, when voting or commenting it returns you to some random place in the middle of the page. Then you have to scroll down again to comment. and then BACK to the middle of the page. Can a vote leave you at the vote box?
also, when voting or commenting it returns you to some random place in the middle of the page. Then you have to scroll down again to comment. and then BACK to the middle of the page. Can a vote leave you at the vote box?
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Oh this is too rich. Even here, in an Ask The Guys forum, the women need to lead us to our answers. (thanks ladies, but this was in ASK the guys not TELL the guys...lol... but your feedback here, as in real life, is never unwelcome... or unstoppable)
What do I want from having sex. With a woman.
Everything? I don't know that i've ever actually experienced gratuitous a unemotional sex. For me it's always been with someone close. So I thinks for me its all about her, wanting her pleased, feeling her responses, seeing her enjoy. I can be alone and get off. But getting her off, watching her enjoy and respond, and react, and return pleasure, that completes it for me. makes it fulfilling.
Because that's what i want. to be fulfilled. To be satisfied physically and emotionally, and to connect on a personal level afterwords, touching, reassuring, cleaning up... getting some water. laughing.
What do I want from having sex. With a woman.
Everything? I don't know that i've ever actually experienced gratuitous a unemotional sex. For me it's always been with someone close. So I thinks for me its all about her, wanting her pleased, feeling her responses, seeing her enjoy. I can be alone and get off. But getting her off, watching her enjoy and respond, and react, and return pleasure, that completes it for me. makes it fulfilling.
Because that's what i want. to be fulfilled. To be satisfied physically and emotionally, and to connect on a personal level afterwords, touching, reassuring, cleaning up... getting some water. laughing.
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yaa! (happy dance)
Close my eyes and spin.... yeah, sure!
Close my eyes and spin.... yeah, sure!
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Trinket pulls the legs off flies and braids them into her eyebrows
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Has troublesome nose hair and ignores it, letting it grow out
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Okay, good to know. I like the list of options idea. And in general and for the critique process, for authors who wants to know, want advice, and want to improve. I would be a user. I want the critique to improve my writing.
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Quote by DanielleX
As a newbie to the mod team, I don't expect it, but a note of thanks leaves a warm glow
Looking forward to the opportunity to thank you.
Thanks in advance for volunteering!
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In general, I prefer to vote and comment on every story I read. I think the author should get that from me, at the very least. Sadly I don't get to read as much as I would like. *sigh*
I like the "non-agression" comment policy here. And the voting and comment ratio are about what I expected. (Less than 1%) But it does sometimes seem that the voting is overly generous.
All that said, if I have something to say to the author that I do not think needs to be in my comment, I will send a private message to make my point. The danger of a public critique area is always that the will surface and take over. Sad to say. Maybe the button should just indicate a desire for critiques to be sent as email. And if the author wants to take the comments further, they could start a forum thread.
Just a concern that the honest request "I'd like a critique of my writing efforts" could be read as "attack me without mercy, I'm asking for it". And then it's a one-sided dodgeball game.
I like the "non-agression" comment policy here. And the voting and comment ratio are about what I expected. (Less than 1%) But it does sometimes seem that the voting is overly generous.
All that said, if I have something to say to the author that I do not think needs to be in my comment, I will send a private message to make my point. The danger of a public critique area is always that the will surface and take over. Sad to say. Maybe the button should just indicate a desire for critiques to be sent as email. And if the author wants to take the comments further, they could start a forum thread.
Just a concern that the honest request "I'd like a critique of my writing efforts" could be read as "attack me without mercy, I'm asking for it". And then it's a one-sided dodgeball game.
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A man who is trying to be dominant for you, no matter how he acts when he is doing it, is not dominating. He is role-playing.
He will be constantly measuring his actions against your reactions, insuring that he is not overstepping, not going too far. No matter what you tell him about your limits, your desires. It is not how he sees himself with you. Depending on his ability to role play and his connection with you, the ability to see your desire, push you slightly past that, he may in fact be effective. But it takes a special person to absorb himself in that role without allowing the "actor" to show.
Because trying to be dominant and being dominant are two very different things
He will be constantly measuring his actions against your reactions, insuring that he is not overstepping, not going too far. No matter what you tell him about your limits, your desires. It is not how he sees himself with you. Depending on his ability to role play and his connection with you, the ability to see your desire, push you slightly past that, he may in fact be effective. But it takes a special person to absorb himself in that role without allowing the "actor" to show.
Because trying to be dominant and being dominant are two very different things
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Are you asking us to give you approval? I'm not sure anyone here can tell you how to eat your own cum better. Nor do I think that we can help you feel better about it afterwards.
Either do it, or don't
Follow your impulse, or don't
It's a personal decision. But if you're doing anything that makes you feel guilty or shamed afterwards... you're probably having fun!
Either do it, or don't
Follow your impulse, or don't
It's a personal decision. But if you're doing anything that makes you feel guilty or shamed afterwards... you're probably having fun!
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Quote by Dina001
you can't unless you practice, practice, practice.
then practice, practice, practice some more.
not a skill i've aquired. not a skill i'm interested in aquiring
if thats what your man needs then,
you'll need to practice, practice, practice.
Can you tell me where the line for volunteers is forming?