Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
I have a question I'd like to get some advice on.
The demented tale I have for the comp is way over length even with trimming so thought I'd ask a question here.
So far at 8k words and not done so is it better to run it as a single long story or chop it into installments and run it as a series.
I've only 1 verified submission so wanted to hear is it harder to get a series verified instead or a single story?
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Take all the time you need sprite, it's worth it to have you with us. In the words of the great Rupaul Charles "If they don't pay your bills, pay them bitches no mind."
Be well and be safe, always.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
From my experience some suggestions. Anything you put into your body changes the quality of your bodily fluids. If you drink more water they tend to be thinner, and less pungent. If you eat things with powerful flavours some of those can be transmitted to your fluids. If you're starting out swallowing them, be a good boy and drink lots of water, keep your foods light.
Make the whole experience as pleasant for the lady as possible. Of course if I was going to give you that kind of little gift, I'd want you to give me something that was on my bucket list.
If this is your first time doing this, some other little tips.
1. Don't put your hands on my head, I'm playing this skin flute and I will make it play the melody I chose. Don't shove it into my mouth or down my throat. If I want it there I'm more then capable of moving my head to put things where I want them. If I feel I'm in control and not some passive participant I feel a whole lot more liberated and willing to be wild.
2. Give feedback, lots of it while I'm doing it. Faster, slower, harder, softer, keep doing that, etc. Every skin flute is different and they require different techniques to play them properly. Feedback makes me play better, orders make me use my teeth and not in a good way.
3. I decide how I take the load, it might be in my mouth, it might be down my throat, I might even let some of it spill for erotic effect. I get to make that call, but if there's a particular way you'd like it to be done, say so when we start the performance. Remember you're only giving a suggestion, I still make the call.
4. I'm going against decades of social custom and the little sex rules I learned as a teenager. Doing this is highly emotional , well it certainly was for me, and I risked feeling like a total fucking whore (not in a good way) for doing it. Remember that, make me feel like the most beautiful girl in the world, and your utter respect for this act of devotion. The men in my life never did, which is why I stopped playing this instrument early in my life.
5. Reward me for this devoted act and I'm far more likely to do it again.
Example the first man I ever deep throated only wanted to fuck my roomie in a threesome or take my ass. There was no glory and no credit for the devotion.
My second serious girlfriend, Eimear, took my ass with a strap on, the first person to ever do that. She bought me sushi the day after as a special reward. I'd never had it before and always want to try it.
As a result I gave my ass up very eagerly when she wanted it, because I knew she properly valued that gift I offered. Don't be a jerk, be Eimear.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
A big fan of butterflies.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Goth gamer, I wasnt too happy in high school. Far happier when I got out the other side.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Any dance the lady chose would be my pleasure to perform.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Oh I've been involved in a few of those, gloriously messy, though we did lock the boys out and keep it to just girls.
Great fun to give and receive.
I might just make poor Carl go a little pale.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Innocent.
Ever taken the virginity of someone of the same gender?
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Ahhhh, phew. That does make sense, she works so very hard and deserves a rest.
Thank you Liz.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
When mine do that , I respond with Russian symphonies or Italian Opera. HAve some culture you bastards!
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
A handsome big cat, with a big heart.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Maybe it's just me but if I open sprites profile, I get a 404. I don't think she's editing it.
Anyone else having this problem?
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
I'd go find Jane Lynch, give her a few bucks, then tie her up, suspend her from the ceiling just out of Xanders reach. You can look baby, but no touching.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Here's my little contribution. I've been a role-player for longer then I care to think about, and I approach the scene like I would a role-playing scenario.
Who are the people in the scene?
Where are they? Why are they there? What do you want to explore in that scene?
So let's say I put A and B in a basement. B is a nervous person but feels very safe when A holds them in their arms. A suggests they try tying up B to see how they find that. Now since B finds being held reassuring, maybe they find being tied up like being very tightly held by A. So as they get tied up, they might feel less afraid, start to feel an underwhelming pleasure at being confined but also loved. Maybe A enjoys the way it feels to tie B up, they way they wriggle and moan when being bound. Maybe A wants to touch B now they're helpless to resist.
Then you can take it from there.
When I give the characters a reason to be in the scene, their responses to the action feels less forced to me, and they sometimes head off doing things I didn't think of when I started. Because they have their own motivations, their actions feel more organic and less dancing puppet.
Also if you think your friend might be exploring BDSM, just ask them. I've had several conversations over coffee with people I know about my understanding of the Life, but then again I'm happy to talk to people about all kinds of things.
Also like Jim Butchers parking lot, the world of your story is just that YOUR world. If you want a toy to make a certain sound and it doesn't in reality, well in your world is makes that noise.
As long as you're consistent with how things work in your world, most readers won't know or care.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
I'd strip naked, straddle their face and eat a doughnut over them.
