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1 month ago
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Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Stopping in late today. Been a long day that started very early. Still working, but please set a couple fingers of Bulleit there at the end of the bar as a carrot to get to the end of the day.
Monster storm hitting the area tonight, and tomorrow will be a mess. The slight upside is that a writer's group I was forcing myself to network with (I hate networking) is doing their meeting by . Networking is less odious if it's online
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I put this story up on a lazy Sunday, so if anyone missed it, I am pretty proud of it. It's called Engagement, and I try to ride the thin line between sex and romance all the way through.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/-engagement-.aspx
Keep that bourbon ready. An hour and a half....
Monster storm hitting the area tonight, and tomorrow will be a mess. The slight upside is that a writer's group I was forcing myself to network with (I hate networking) is doing their meeting by . Networking is less odious if it's online
.I put this story up on a lazy Sunday, so if anyone missed it, I am pretty proud of it. It's called Engagement, and I try to ride the thin line between sex and romance all the way through.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/-engagement-.aspx
Keep that bourbon ready. An hour and a half....
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Milik_the_Red
Just stopping in for a quick jolt from BB, but I wanted to give my best to Curvy, TangerineSky and Wannabewordsmith. My gosh, all three wrote terrific pieces for the comp! As Seeker pointed out, it’s cool that so many top ten listers hang here in Rumps. Congrats to all!
Simplicity and I are overwhelmed at the response my entry received. Thank you to all who read it.
Rump, can you put a shot of something stronger than coffee in my coffee?
Milik, my apologies in excluding you from my previous congrats. So, congrats! You are quite a fine writer, and I am glad to see your name among the top 10.
*note to self: must restrain self from gushing about Curvy any more...*
There are some new faces around here Larry. Cool to see! As long as they don't start hanging ferns or serving avocado toast or do anything to harm out beloved Terrance.
Iced tea, please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
I already gushed at length over on the Rump's thread about how happy it makes me so see Cyn grab the top ring of this contest. She's so good, and working in an under-valued genre for such a long time. Lovely to see her labors rewarded with a first place win. Congrats to Tangerine and Wannabe too, and to all the rest of the top ten. Nice to see Ayla break into the winners list, her writing has been on my radar for a little while now, and it's great to see her talent recognised.
This was a great contest. Nice way to start the day.
This was a great contest. Nice way to start the day.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Always happy to read who the comp winners are, but this crop is paticularly fullfulling. And not just becaue of all the Rumpers on the big ten. Currrrrrvvvyyyy the Unquenchable!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! It's gotta be hard (heh) to toil in the fields of historical erotica, surrounded by all these fast, modern tales with cocks and pussies flopping around left and right, and get relatively little notice. Cyn has always continued on, writing perfectly structured, well-researched (I assume, I don't know anything about the periods she writes in) sexy tales, and managing to NAIL the tone and stick the landing time and time again. And keep things sexy. I don't quite know how she does it. I will quit gushing, but this win makes me so happy. Okay, a little more gushing: she is always generous and kind to the other writers here, and is the best damn beta reader on the site. AND she make a helluva cup of coffee.
Equally cool is Tange taking second. She only recently showed up on my radar, frankly because she stopped by for a drink here, but she clearly has some serious game. Good story. No spoilers, but I love the way she slips in a very important plot point midway through.
I wiill confess I didn't read Wannabe's but I will shortly.
Big sloppy hugs to Laura, Larry and Annie too, for breaking into the top 10 of a tough field.
I'm buying Curvy's drinks for the rest of the YEAR!!! Yay!
Thanks for the set-up Tonya. Let me me pour YOU a cup a coffee for a change, and I will sit and join you.
Equally cool is Tange taking second. She only recently showed up on my radar, frankly because she stopped by for a drink here, but she clearly has some serious game. Good story. No spoilers, but I love the way she slips in a very important plot point midway through.
I wiill confess I didn't read Wannabe's but I will shortly.
Big sloppy hugs to Laura, Larry and Annie too, for breaking into the top 10 of a tough field.
I'm buying Curvy's drinks for the rest of the YEAR!!! Yay!
Thanks for the set-up Tonya. Let me me pour YOU a cup a coffee for a change, and I will sit and join you.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by sprite
i want my share of the profits. what's 10% of 35 cents, btw?
I'll split the profits with you. Your two lines are, after all, the best two lines in the story (seriously).
Hit me with a shot of well bourbon, beer back. And whatever the lady is having. :)
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Morning all. Man this place gets rowdy on weekends.
New story up, and appropriate for a Sunday morning. It's called Engagment.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/-engagement-.aspx
I stole a couple of lines directly from a message from sprite (shhh, DON'T TELL HER!).
Hannah, I look forward to the new story by you and Frank. Your flash too, Scott.
Coffee please.
New story up, and appropriate for a Sunday morning. It's called Engagment.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/-engagement-.aspx
I stole a couple of lines directly from a message from sprite (shhh, DON'T TELL HER!).
Hannah, I look forward to the new story by you and Frank. Your flash too, Scott.
Coffee please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Morning all. Thanks for waking up Bertha Curvy. And clean mugs - good Lord! Is this really Rumps? *blinks and looks around to make sure* Yeah, Curves, I had to go to the U.K. Amazon site to read your reviews, but that doesn't lessen my gratitude at your kind words.
Hey Susie. Can I buy you a cup of Beaver's Breath inhanced coffee?
Date night tonight! Sadly, a busy day precedes it.
Nice sunny day out. The snow slowly melting, but the mountaintops are capped in white. I love living here.
The winner of the first comp I ever entered is humbly presented to you in the sig line below. I'm really fond of this story. It's a bit of a love letter too. But then, all these stories are love letters. Hot sex-saturated love letters, but love letters nonetheless.
Kôffêê please.
Hey Susie. Can I buy you a cup of Beaver's Breath inhanced coffee?
Date night tonight! Sadly, a busy day precedes it.
Nice sunny day out. The snow slowly melting, but the mountaintops are capped in white. I love living here.
The winner of the first comp I ever entered is humbly presented to you in the sig line below. I'm really fond of this story. It's a bit of a love letter too. But then, all these stories are love letters. Hot sex-saturated love letters, but love letters nonetheless.
Kôffêê please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
I love dialogue. These are excellent (I skipped the first one too, because I don't use dialects). Even found out a mistake I was making. I always used an ellipsis and a period--so, four dots--if a character's dialogue trails off at the end. Wrong, apparently. No period, just the ellipsis.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by TheSensualLady
I've followed you on Amazon and hope to binge-read all four stories this weekend. I really loved Serious Moonlight, and it was worthy of the win. The covers look great.
It's warm and sunny after a day of rain in Las Vegas. Lemonade would be perfect. I hope everyone is having a wonderful week.
Quote by curvygalore
Hooray! Thanks, Susie, I am just back from book group and could do with a drink.I'll get the next round.
I agree with TheSensualLady, Verbs' stories and publications are awesome! I forgot to download Serious Moonlight 3 so will do that with 4 tomorrow. Hopefully my reviews for 1&2 should be up on Amazon UK by now. :)
Thanks for the props, Sensual and Curves. The review on the UK site are separated out from the US site? That kinda sucks. Regardless, thanks for the extremely kind words here AND in the UK.
Barkeep, a drink for both these lovely ladies and a burrbin for myself. This day has been a bit punishing.
EDIT: Just read your reviews on the UK site, Curvy. Thank you SO MUCH.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by TangerineSky
I'd like to hear this long story one day. Reminds me of my youth, when I wasn't fully living unless I said yes to literally every opportunity. (Jeez, have I stopped living?)
Your mountains sound a lot like mine.
Tange, your youth sound a lot like mine.
Sidle up next to me at the bar someday, I'll buy you a drink and tell you the whole long saga. I still have a scar on my forehead from that little adventure.Bill, I am already sick of Spring Training (and of Tim Tebow in our outfield). I will try like fuck to be patient until Opening Day.
I blather on and on over at the Shard-o-verse thread this morning. If any of you remember the short story Serious Moonlight that won a comp a few years back, it releases on Amazon tomorrow (though technically it's up now).
https://forum.lushstories.com//yaf_postsm3301739_The-Shardoverse.aspx#3301739
Lots to do today. Sigh. These days can get so busy.
Köffee me up, please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Saucymh
So sorry I'm very late to the party
I just read this whole thread and I've purchased the first in the new Serious Moonlight series - on Amazon.co.uk, with no issues. All good
I'm so happy to see you publishing your work and I wish you all the best with it. Expect another review on Amazon UK and Goodreads in the near future xx
Thanks for the love Mags. You are never late to a party, because it doesn't begin until you arrive. Looking forward to the reviews!
The story that comes out tomorrow is what I like to call the "origin myth" of the relationship (the tagline is "Every relationship has an origin myth; this is theirs.") It's certainly the origin of the other 51 stories. It's a short story called Serious Moonlight, and it won first in a comp and grabbed an EP here. I truly hated pulling it from Lush, as it was the best thing I'd ever written here. And I liked the shiny yellow ribbon on my page. :)
Anyway, it's my attempt to describe the wild altered state of consciousness that D/s sex can pull you into, both her descent into "subspace" and his into "domspace" (I'm not sure that's a thing, but it should be). Very stripped down writing, no descriptions, no character names, almost no backstory. I just throw the reader into the middle of things so that they can experience a little of what the characters experience.
It's basically a long hardcore BDSM sex scene bookended with scenes that show the great love and caring and commitment they feel for each other. Because the two are NOT mutually exclusive. One requires the other. Sex is emotional, and emotion is sexy. Two sides of the same coin.
It releases tomorrow, but it's actually out now (I have to publish early cuz Amazon says they need 72 hours): https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07PFLNDSW/
Buy it! Or alternately, send me 35 cents in the mail (which is what I'll make in royalties).
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Charlotte_
Oh, very much so. Both reading and writing.
Maybe 10 or so years ago I had a friend whom I traded drafts for editing. Her drafts contained "(!)" in a few places. I finally asked her what that was about. "Oh, that's where I had an orgasm while writing."
I tried it once but my draft was littered with them. Of course, I read my drafts a lot before I show them to anyone else....
(!)
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Milik_the_Red
Perhaps. But considering all the accounts of men doing just this, albeit in person, this is a habit some men have that easily gets out of control. It just seems outrageous to me under any circumstance save if one is in a relationship
I don't think we disagree on this. I just think it falls a little short of sexual asault. It's certainly kinda messed up.
That said, in the context of a relationship it can be kinda hot (and I know we both understand handling the long-distance relationship thing).
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Milik_the_Red
That type of behavior is, unfortunately, a common occurance on most sex sites. So many men think that if a woman is on one, she must be craving images of their junk.
Personally, I cannot fathom why a man would do that. It seems to me a kind of sexual assault and the site should consider suspending or banning guys who are serial dick sharers.
Sexual assault seems a little strong, but it's pretty rude. If it's unsolicited, I suspect there's some hostility toward women in general behind it.
Unsolicited boob pix, on the other hand, should be mandatory.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by TonyaL
Good morning family. Some sludge for fuzzy before I clean up Bertha and get her ready for the day. Susie coffee will be ready in just a few moments. The kettle is on for tea and cocoa. Today is wacky Wednesday for my littley. She is very excited and has some crazy clothes to wear today. I hope everyone has a wonderful day and thank you all for the birthday wishes for Chris.
Sludge for Fuzzy is a good name for a band.
Thanks for the set-up. Your littley is so cute it's almost like I can picture her. :)Writing critique group went well. I am too hard headed to get a ton of use from it, but I enjoyed the feedback, and enjoyed giving feedback. They really liked the horror flash. Didn't show them the erotica, though I mentioned I had a flash series out there.
Feels like a Monday today.
Later, all! Enjoy the day. I'll hhave a köffee.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Shannon3K
Verbal has been my very good friend here for as long as I can remember. He is smart, witty, thoughtful and considerate and engaged to my favorite poet (poetess?). And he knows his baseball, Japanese art films,and the best TV show ever!!!
That's very sweet of you to say. I'm happy and honored to call you a friend.
As for the above, she's outspoken, original and a babe to her freinds. And I like the way she dresses.