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2 months ago
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Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by IMPÜRETHOUGHTS
Fond.
Fond of you as well, and your descriptions of your day's attire particularly.
I don't know E at all, but she seems fun and smart and friendly on the Forums, so I will take a stab at it and assume I would be fond of her, should we ever cross paths.
EDIT: the stab is figurative, I promise not to stab you!
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Good morning everyone! Should be a sunny day here, but not too hot. Sara and CG, nice to hear your weather is equally pleasant (or was yesterday).
School starts this week! School supply shopping is done! Schhol clothes shopping is done. Waking the girls up annoyingly early today and tomorrow to get their sleep schedules adjusted.
The Perseid meteor shower was pleasant if a bit underwhelming - we watched it on the porch in city light so only saw a handful of meteors. Fun date nonetheless.
I think I read all the Rumplations entries for the comp, finally. Should be a good one.
My own story, after 2 full months, is at 1750 words. Slow going. It's essentially the end of the Shards, though, so I want to get it right.
I'll take a köffee Bill. Thanks for beginnning the day with a baseball bat metaphor.
School starts this week! School supply shopping is done! Schhol clothes shopping is done. Waking the girls up annoyingly early today and tomorrow to get their sleep schedules adjusted.
The Perseid meteor shower was pleasant if a bit underwhelming - we watched it on the porch in city light so only saw a handful of meteors. Fun date nonetheless.
I think I read all the Rumplations entries for the comp, finally. Should be a good one.
My own story, after 2 full months, is at 1750 words. Slow going. It's essentially the end of the Shards, though, so I want to get it right.
I'll take a köffee Bill. Thanks for beginnning the day with a baseball bat metaphor.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Date night! Dinner followed by the Perseid meteor shower, followed by...well, let's see where the evening takes us.
LJ will have a gin on the rocks, I will have bourbon, equally rocky.
Lube and baked goods? To each his own, but not for me.
I hope everyone is enjoying the weekend.
LJ will have a gin on the rocks, I will have bourbon, equally rocky.
Lube and baked goods? To each his own, but not for me.
I hope everyone is enjoying the weekend.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by julie_slink
This is great. I often end up wasting time constructing or writing stupid things when I should be spending that time on actual projects. It's so fun though. I look at this and think "wow, he actually expended effort and talent to construct such a convoluted turd of a sentence. This is an underappreciated and underrated art form for sure. I see that this was from a year ago, but I hope you've been keeping track of your adverb usage.
I have serious skills in creating convoluted turds of sentences. It's the simple ones that give me problems.
I was particularly proud of "newly mopped floor wet love cave."
You should collect them too. 
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
I am glad my spidery obsessions have resulted in Terrence getting some attention, not to mention presents from the lovely Sara.
Here's some dead flies for Terrence. I put them in a bowl with a cocktail umbrella and a lemon slice and everything.
I DID step on a spider with babies once, Ping, when I was a kid. They went everywhere! Truly scary. They all died a few feet from her - I think she was carying the egg sac. Anyway, deeply creepy.
Wrote 400+ words yesterday. Trying to get back on the horse.
Jim, you don't need lessons from me - just submit a story and see what happens. Here's a sci-fi erotica flash link: http://www.circlet.com/writers-guidelines/. Give it a shot!
Köffee please.
Here's some dead flies for Terrence. I put them in a bowl with a cocktail umbrella and a lemon slice and everything.
I DID step on a spider with babies once, Ping, when I was a kid. They went everywhere! Truly scary. They all died a few feet from her - I think she was carying the egg sac. Anyway, deeply creepy.
Wrote 400+ words yesterday. Trying to get back on the horse.
Jim, you don't need lessons from me - just submit a story and see what happens. Here's a sci-fi erotica flash link: http://www.circlet.com/writers-guidelines/. Give it a shot!
Köffee please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Dialogue! I run into that problem from time to time and dialogue really opens things up. Like WW said, even two lines can give the reader a break fromm sameness.
You can also have someone break a lamp or fall off the bed or something else unexpected. Throws some action in, breaks up the scene, and their reaction (too revved up to give a shit, or laughing and geting right back to the action) tell us a lot about the characters and their relationship.
You can also have someone break a lamp or fall off the bed or something else unexpected. Throws some action in, breaks up the scene, and their reaction (too revved up to give a shit, or laughing and geting right back to the action) tell us a lot about the characters and their relationship.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by seeker4
Humidity. Hurricanes. Pythons and alligators. Now it's huge spiders. Like I need any more reasons not to live in your state.TUDrfZcRPXXvJ7A6
Quiet in this place. I'll have a beer and put on Bertha for those who might still be in a time zone where coffee is relevant.
Thanks Scott. I have an hour and a half of coffee drinking before I make myself stop, so I'll take another cuppa.
Tell Terrence I am sorry for not mentioning him yesterday, but please point out to him that I said I find tarantulas beautiful creatures.
LJ, having learned of all the spider varieties, excuse me, cute "kitten" varieties here, is now being introduced to the insane August monsoon weather we have here. She's been through two crazy hailstorms - the second one caused roof damage (insurance will pay, it happens nearly every year), killed 2 birds at the zoo, and sent several people to the hospital. Bigger than golf balls. Cars everywhere with shattered windshieds. I kinda like crazy storms, but I'm used to it. And the sky is dark now, so another storm is looming.
Hope everyone is well.
Köffee please.
you know she will find out eventually