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Verbal
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male
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Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by trinket
I think I’m perceived as a whiny little troublemaker by quite a few people. Shut up Jack. I’m actually not, what makes it seem that way is that I retaliate against bullshit, while others just accept it; bullies on the forums and object when I believe I’ve been treated differently to others. I’m not complaining, only saying how I think I’m perceived.
Because of that, I think some don’t try to get to know the real me which is so far from the above, it’s ridiculous. Too many people listen to gossip instead of trying to get to know others for themselves.
I think you are sharp and funny and have a low tolerance for bullshit, and I think most people here think of you that way. Good writer too!
I have no idea how I am perceived. Kinda pretentious but generally pretty chill, would be my guess.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by browncoffee
Verbal, I hope your story (or parts of it) come to fruition. My advice? Just post it! I sometimes get hung up on wondering whether people will like my stuff or if it's good enough but it just is what it is. It is what you're writing. It is you, or at least part of you. Let us read it! I have so many ideas but I just can't write!I'm so glad I posted a piece last week. I get more and more anxious if I have a long off time.
I have to think it's good. But, hey, I just fixed it! I think. A lot of re-editing to do, but I cut a big chunk out of the middle and added some connective tissue and it might just work. Now I have to sew everything back together. But yay!
An herbal furball please! And a Hannah for Hannah.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
I don't know if promotion threads do that much good, though I have one, and enjoy adding to it. Same with signature links (though I do that too).
Commenting on other stories has always struck me as the best way to promote. Finding people who like the same kind of writing you do, and interacting with them is really helpful.
And like Mari said: rewrite, rewrite, rewrite. If you write a good story, people tend to notice here.
Commenting on other stories has always struck me as the best way to promote. Finding people who like the same kind of writing you do, and interacting with them is really helpful.
And like Mari said: rewrite, rewrite, rewrite. If you write a good story, people tend to notice here.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by curvygalore
Verbal, your shards are always welcome, but I really thought your story could hang together complete but fiddled with a bit? That is a shame.
It's like three different stories (with the middle one not being very interesting). I think the beginning and ending bits might work better alone. Still tinkering, though.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Yes! I actually heard Howard Stern say this on the radio once, when I was young, and it puzzled me at the time, but I have given it some thought over the years.
I think we are more honest with ourselves and open to our desires when we're older. We're more creative, we've been around enough to know what we like and we don't like, and we have the maturity to bring up stuff we'd like to try with a partner.
My sex life is far more satisfying than it was in my twenties (and it was pretty satisfying in my twenties!).
I think we are more honest with ourselves and open to our desires when we're older. We're more creative, we've been around enough to know what we like and we don't like, and we have the maturity to bring up stuff we'd like to try with a partner.
My sex life is far more satisfying than it was in my twenties (and it was pretty satisfying in my twenties!).
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Glad to see Tonya and Scott back! Drinks are on me.
And Sara and Buz, congrats on (grr...) sweeping the Mets. You guys have a very young, very talented team. We scored 2 runs in a 3 game series.
Now that I've officially thrown my story in the trash, I can at least pull out a couple sections and use them as Shards. It's such a disjointed story that they should be pretty easy to present out of context of the rest of the story. Thanks to CurvyGee, who read it and gave me some much needed guidance. Her drinks are on my tab until the end of time.
Me? I'll have köfffee.
EDIT: Read a couple of very good flash fictions from a guy whom I've never seen around but has apparently been here for awhile: Jason_NYC. Frankly, I read this story cuz it had the word "pearl" in it. But he has a fast, staccato style and sets a good pace.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/pearl-necklace.aspx
And Sara and Buz, congrats on (grr...) sweeping the Mets. You guys have a very young, very talented team. We scored 2 runs in a 3 game series.
Now that I've officially thrown my story in the trash, I can at least pull out a couple sections and use them as Shards. It's such a disjointed story that they should be pretty easy to present out of context of the rest of the story. Thanks to CurvyGee, who read it and gave me some much needed guidance. Her drinks are on my tab until the end of time.
Me? I'll have köfffee.
EDIT: Read a couple of very good flash fictions from a guy whom I've never seen around but has apparently been here for awhile: Jason_NYC. Frankly, I read this story cuz it had the word "pearl" in it. But he has a fast, staccato style and sets a good pace.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/pearl-necklace.aspx
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Denim_Daisy10
*blows kisses*
Chipper doesn't suck
No, Chipper doesn't suck. The Mets do, though. Lost the game, our best pitcher AND first place, all in the same night. Oh well, at least the were in first place through all of April before tumbling back to mediocrity, as the Mets always seem to do.
Quote by InThisMoment
Hi everyone ?
In answer to your question and in light of Jeff’s research perhaps I can be called Whore!
Momento, i agree with Bill, we are much too chill here to ever call you Whore. Unless of course you'd like us to. Then I'm sure something can be arranged.
Tell us something more about yourself, M. Give us something to work with! It's cold and rainy here, and my new story is unpublishably bad, I think. The individual parts work, but it just doesn't pull together.
Sigh. Köffee please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Denim_Daisy10
Howdy Jeff (if your still speaking to me after the braves beat the mets last night) ... Ohh a trilogy with tentacles
Of course. However, if you beat us tonight you take first place. I'll still speak to you, but mutter "Chipper sucks" under my breath at every opportunity.
I think, now that we have Sara's drink named, we should move to giving ITM a nickname. So far, we have Smart-ass and Maria from the band ITM (had to Google her, but she's pretty hot). I'll throw in Natasha, of Moose and Squirrel fame, since she ordered a Moscow Mule.
Finished the story. Even wrote "The End" at the end. Sitting in it for a day or five.
Three thick fingers of Old Crow, please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Larry, that does sound like a nice trip. You describe it well.
Congrats on the new part time bartending gig, Weekender! Foo-foo drinks only. I'm guessing you'll have plenty of time for fly fishing.
Congrats to Hannah for the mod o' the month thing. Very cool. Well deserved.
Hey to Curvy, Bill, ITM (we really need a name, or at least a noun, to call you).
So I have a 6000 word story done (it's actually the first in a trilogy), but the last 500 words suck hugely. My kingdom for an ending!!!
I'll have to settle for köffee, I guess.
Congrats on the new part time bartending gig, Weekender! Foo-foo drinks only. I'm guessing you'll have plenty of time for fly fishing.
Congrats to Hannah for the mod o' the month thing. Very cool. Well deserved.
Hey to Curvy, Bill, ITM (we really need a name, or at least a noun, to call you).
So I have a 6000 word story done (it's actually the first in a trilogy), but the last 500 words suck hugely. My kingdom for an ending!!!
I'll have to settle for köffee, I guess.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Denim_Daisy10
Howdy folks
Coffee and wooden baseball bat please Rump
Hey Jeff ... How goes it
Weekender howdy
I'm doing well.
Mets/Braves game tonight Sara. The mighty Thor is on the mound for the Metropolitans. That why you're carrying around that bat?
Hey, ITM. Nice to see back.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by prettywild
Umm yeah I'm buying... drinks all round, whatever you want , it's on me
Just follow the link that Emily gave and your drink will be waiting for you ?
Hey all.
Congrats on the move to prose, wild. Good story! And I see you have a new one up (heh) today. Love to see people convert to the dark side and start writing prose. Where do I go to redeem my drink?
Thick black sludge from Bertha for me please.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Quote by Denim_Daisy10
Howdy folks !
RUMP a TAILGATER please asap ..
Today has been a Monday from hell !
Sorry your Monday blows, Sara. Mine is kind of blowing as well. Might be from that long, caffeine-starved drive home.
So did I officially name your drink then? A Tailgater? Do I get a prize? A copyright? Intellectual property rights? A thank you kiss on the cheek?
Three fingers of your finest bourbon-like liquid. It's nearly 5.
Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
Hey Jim.
Hey Sara. Please don't kick me (hides behind jukebox).
I wrote 1400 words today! Woo-hoo! Finally, back in the saddle (heh). Almost done with the first draft. Three fingers of whatever-doesn't-kill-me bourbon, please.
Mets are already down 4-0, and the top of the first isn't even over. Thinking I will skip tonight's game.
I'll buy whatever anyone is drinking.
Hey Sara. Please don't kick me (hides behind jukebox).
I wrote 1400 words today! Woo-hoo! Finally, back in the saddle (heh). Almost done with the first draft. Three fingers of whatever-doesn't-kill-me bourbon, please.
Mets are already down 4-0, and the top of the first isn't even over. Thinking I will skip tonight's game.
I'll buy whatever anyone is drinking.