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What is the site policy on character age?

All references to anything of a sexual or arousal nature must occur to characters 16 years or older. No exceptions.

Pigtails.

Yes, a superbly hot piece of writing and well deserved of the award. If you've not checked it out, do so. Have a bucket of ice handy for afterwards.

Now it's complete, I thought I'd pimp my teen series Pink, which sees the permanently horny and teasing girlfriend of a man's son piling on the sexual pressure to get what she wants.

Fans of intense teasing and seduction stories will enjoy the way this temptress wraps everyone around her finger and taunts the poor dad to the limit of his resolve... and beyond, as he fights to resist her charms.

• Pink - Chapter 1 (The Meet)

• Pink - Chapter 2 (The Shave)

• Pink - Chapter 3 (The Shorts)

• Pink - Chapter 4 (The Car)

• Pink - Chapter 5 (The Toy)

• Pink - Chapter 6 (The Lesson)

• Pink - Chapter 7 (The Fallout)

All chapters received a Recommended Read award, for which I'm insanely proud, and the series has been getting a fabulous number of Likes, Favourites and comments. Each chapter is only around 4k words, so if you've yet to dive in, there's no excuse not to lose yourself in her terribly tempting ways.

Hope you like it.

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You're old enough to remember some of the gaudy nightmares that passed for "design" in the nineties web, right?

Geocities, ftw 🤣

Edit: I loved playing with the geocities-izer before it disappeared, taking honest to goodness modern sites and making them gaudy monstrosities full of scrolling text and garish colours. Fun!

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lesbians don't romp. we saunter and occasionally bounce.

Noted. Mine's now a lesbian saunter and occasional bounce on the Isle of Fistaria.

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I am assuming you can make up Islands as well. Shoot DC and Marvel do it all the time 🤷🏾‍♂️.

Absolutely. Mine's a lesbian romp set on the Isle of Vibratium. 🤣

I'm one vote shy of 69 on Pink Part 6. If anyone would like to do the honours, it would be most appreciated 😎

Part 7, the finale, is in the queue awaiting someone to have time to moderate it. I hope you enjoy it and it's a fitting send-off to the series.

Thank you to everyone who has followed along from the start, and for anyone just joining who wants to binge read, welcome to the ride.

Edit: and Part 7 is released. Hope you enjoy.

Jen has a good eye for style. Pretty sure she picked the image.

As you know, the abundance of red on this site is a long-standing bugbear of mine. Some complementary accents would do wonders for the site and its usability.

Thank you for your kind comments on the banner. I'll pass those along and maybe when the dev team have more time to devote back to our corner of cyberspace, we can convince them to widen the colour palette a little 😎

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Italics, unless it’s in the first person, then there is no need.

This also works, and I've done it this way in the past if it's clear the thoughts are thoughts (which most of the time they would be if it's written well).

As I mentioned above, as long as it's consistent and clear to people consuming your content, use any convention you wish. If it's not clear, mods will return it and ask for clarity.

I've used italics exclusively in my latest series to represent thoughts, and I prefer it as a device to indicate them, as long as it's made clear that's what they are on first usage. In first person, it's fairly obvious so it may not even need tagging as such. Depends how clever you are at introducing them.

I've also seen double quotes for direct speech and single quotes for thoughts. That also works, as long as it's consistent, although it can be less clear if the story is read quickly: apostrophes are easy to miss if a story is exciting.

The key is consistency. End of the day, you want readers to consume your work as effortlessly as possible, so any convention you use to help them do that is welcome.

I'm beavering away on the finale to my Pink series. I decided that 7 was a good number of chapters, so I brought things to a dramatic point in Chapter 6 and am now figuring out how to end it on a satisfactory note. It's gonna be a hot one!

Pink - Part 4 sees Molly upping her game another notch and teasing poor Andrew crazy. It's gaining a favourable response from readers.

Hot on its heels, the fifth chapter takes her behaviour to another level while he's at work.

The poor protagonist not only has to contend with Molly's incessant seduction, he's also having to balance his wife's response to it.

I hope this series continues to deliver. Part 6 is half written. I'm just deciding where to take it next before I commit to it.

It's just started doing the same for me and I popped in here to see if anyone else was experiencing the same 😞

Might be out of disk space or something. I'll alert the dev team. Thanks for the report.

Just finished Pink Part 3 for anyone who's following the exploits of teen temptress Molly. Part 4 is in the works...

It's an amazing piece of work. Top marks, and congratulations on the award.

For anyone who enjoyed Molly's exploits in chapter 1 of the Pink series, the second chapter is published. She's upping the game considerably, but will Andrew's wife suspect anything between the teen temptress and her husband?

Chapter 3 is in the works...

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I have to say that getting the audio attached was not a quick or smooth process ... it wasn't clear to me or my moderator that the audio will not get attached until after the story gets published.

I don't know the reason it has to be attached post-publication but I guess the admins need a published story link to attach the file to. All the while it's in your drafts (and that includes while it's being moderated) nobody but you can access it.

Hopefully when the dev team have more resources to divert our way, they can add a direct upload so it can be bundled up and moderated together at story submission time.

Worthy winners indeed. What a fun competition. Thank you so much for championing it, Kimmi. You're a true gem.

I'm having serious fun with a hot teenage character who's teasing her boyfriend's dad. She's lively as all fuck, so if you like your erotica with lots (and lots) of seductive teasing, you should check out Pink.

Chapter 2 is awaiting moderation, chapter 3 is underway and chapter 4 is a sketch in my head. I wonder how far I can take this girl, hmm...

You could try recording it and using something like the free Audacity app to subtly pitch shift or time stretch the file.

If you do that, I would be tempted to record it directly into Audacity as a wav file to benefit from its lossless nature. Then export as mp3 (224 kbps minimum if you want to maintain the quality) in the final step

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I'm bashing away on a long-term collab.

And we finished it! Hope you like CTRL-Z: Love In The Time Of Anarchy. Bonus marks for figuring out who wrote which bits

Thank you for your generosity running challenges like this, Kimmi. It's hard coming up with a story bigger than 70 words. Stretches my creativity. ❤️

[Rain pic, obvs 😁]

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‘A chance of rain’?! Ha! He'd better be worth the wait.

I scan the crowds, deluge breaching my umbrella. There. Single rose. God, better than his profile pic. I quake at that dimply smile. Ridiculous behaviour, woman!

His baritone cadence undoes me. “Sorry. Meeting overran.”

Predatorially, he eyes my soaked, translucent dress. Boobs. Panties. “Let's get you out of these clothes.”

“Where?”

He points to an alley.

I drip.

Follow.

Dude, don't.

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Is the tech team wicked busy

This. And they won't be back in the office till Monday morning unfortunately.

Nothing yet. They're super busy.

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please keep it plausible.

Amen to this. It's what I strive for in my writing most of the time, even the sci-fi ones.

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How have you found writing from a female POV? ... Any tips or advice would be much appreciated!

It took a little practice but the main difference I find is to focus more on senses other than the visual.

As far as other tips go, read read read other works from that POV. I'm far from the best at it, but here are a few that you might be able to glean something from. Take your pick:

The Waitress (lesbian)

Where Angel Dared To Tread (hardcore)

Fucking With Art (by KimmiBeGood)

Learning The Hard Way (writing tutorial!)

Choices: Between A Cock And A Hard Place (noir lesbian)

The Five-Year Silence (seduction)

The Gift Of Leather (lesbian. Competition winner)

Contrast (flash bdsm)

Former Good Girl (flash bdsm)

That should give you some ideas. But I strongly urge you to seek out authors who can do it way better than me, and study how they construct the stories.

I expect there's a soft limit of 100 because nobody expected anyone to write more than 100 chapters in a series. I'll raise this with the tech team and see if they have any suggestions.