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browncoffee
1 day ago
Straight Female, 31
England

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Introduce the title of your story: Departures
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Provide the link: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/departures.aspx

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?

Roald Dahl. This story idea is totally stolen from his short story 'Galloping Foxley'. I've thought about interpreting it in my own way for years and finally got around to it.

2. How did you come up with these characters?

Well, Victoria/V is a little like me and a little like a dream of me. Harry is (to me) the kind of messed-up, kinky, bad boy that you just can't help falling for.

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?

It's probably a little less explicit and more of a battle between right and wrong. It's held up by this all-too-common experience of mine which is KNOWING what's right and what you SHOULD do but being finding yourself giving into wants.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?

Making the characters sympathetic. Harry's not a faithful husband and while V was younger during their affair, they were both consciously being selfish. I find it difficult to write about protagonists without liking them and so I had to make them sound like decent people.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?

I love it. I'll probably hate it by next week, but right now, even though I want to rewrite and tighten it, I'm super proud of it.
Looking forward to witnessing Buz's joy!

Just want to thank all of you who read Departures; your comments made my weekend.

Too late for a drink, but I'll take one of the beautiful Burquette's cookies (for the road.)

Bill, you got friends in HIGH places. I'm hoping Gil can somehow incorporate those umbrellas into a nude pic themed story.
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"Remote vibrating egg... You get the egg, he gets the remote... For when your on a date and you want to be turned on all.night.long. "

I agree, My gf made me wear one, kept the control in her bag, After a while I forgot it was there, until she turned it on. When I was at the bar. I had to hold on to the bar to keep from falling. It is intense and cannot be ignored. Had me grinding my teeth and squirming. As she later demonstrated to me, at the bar and at several other times during the evening, she had it on 4 or less, back home, before I even took my coat off, she turned it to full, number 8 I think. I was on the floor helpless and came in moments. A fantastic toy and the anticipation keeps you wet constantly.


I. Hope. My. S.O. Doesn't. See. This.

Dodgy ideas and all that.
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I was looking for a monogamous relationship. She said she couldn't be happy without satisfying her other sexual side. It ended.


Wow, an honest answer. You're meant to say, 'I was overjoyed and had a seven-some with my gf and her stripper friends'.
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Okay, so BC wants brown coffee (don't we all?)

Any refills, fresh drinks, thoughts on Claudia Cardinale?



Well, it's half one in the morning, my husband's not home, my story's not verified, and a weirdo has been inaugurated as the U.S. president. If you want me, come live in London.

I'm going to bed.

Oh, and this Claudia was a real looker!
I hang out laundry with clothes pegs. Also have a couple of other uses for them.
No, only because my husband gets me off better than I ever can while flying solo.
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BTW, just finished Mike's story. It's a must read.

Any more orders, for drinks, that is?



Mike's story is awesome, I agree. I am very jealous of him.

I'll have some coffee, please. With milk, so it's a nice, dark oak colour.
Totally dependent on the story. If a guy's looking at a girl, he'll notice (and thus describe) different things, depending on his personality and perceptions. It's hard to go into much detail about a character's looks when writing in the first person unless the protagonist is looking in a mirror or being told they have great tits/eyes/hair. Even then it's tricky, because who knows the motives of the person talking to them? Perhaps he just wants to get her into bed. Shock. Horror. Gasp.
Oh, and I started a birthday thread for a friend but only the wonderful Laura has contributed. Have a heart, people! Poor Pete has to share his 82nd birthday with Trump's inauguration.
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I'm buying, Hannah. (I'm buying Hannah? I'm buying a Hannah?)



Please, Mike. You can't afford me. But feel free to have a Hannah, though I suspect you'll opt for something stronger.

This place is buzzing tonight! I love everyone here!
DRINK, DRINK, EVERYBODY DRINK! I thought for such a long time that the world was playing a practical joke on me but no, this is a stark reality. I'm really not happy.
Which is a goddamn ACHIEVEMENT! I hope you will all join me in wishing this lovely gentleman a VERY happy birthday!

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BTW, we will be open tomorrow. However, patrons are asked to wear mourning black in recognition of the day's 'big' event. (sigh)

Anyone ready for a refill, or coffee, or (gasp) a real drink?



I'll take another Hannah, please.

And I'm wearing all black in RL. But my shoes are brown, sorry. My thoughts are with all of you in the USA. Anyone needing a strong drink can put it on my tab. Between me and Laura, you're covered.
i don't even know how to collaborate properly. i stole this dude's plot and wrote a story based on it but that's as collaborative as i got.
i feel this thread ought to be renamed... 87,103 is quite a bit more than 50k! idk if mine counted 'cause i've checked out your profile before but i clicked anyway.