Did I kill this thread? I'm not ashamed for my erotic writing and I'm not ashamed at wanting to feel loved and have the physical pleasure I'm denied. I'm happy to say one very special lady here who knows me and my writing. It makes me happy to know I can share my writings and have them attached to the real me.
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diamondjim
6 hours ago
Straight Male, 69
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I like having a personal side. No family knows of my writings and I'm sure non of my daughters would enjoy it. I have a couple friends that know the real me that I have shared my writing with. One enjoys, one is indifferent and one does not approve. I appreciate when someone here comments on my work.
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Quote by diamondjim
35, she was a young intern in our office who lived with her Dad. She was very shy and I was to learn absolutely afraid of sex, although, after two months of casual conversation, she admitted to feeling very aroused most days. Over the course of the summer she want from wearing very goth like baggy clothes, tennis shoes and unkempt hair to nice summer dresses, heels and a fresh hair style. Although she was not very pretty her eyes sparked with excitement as she realized I was not going to hurt her and really wanted to know her. One night she just showed up at me door to announce she was going on a date. When I congratulated her she began to cry. She was terrified the boy was going to want to have sex and she had no idea what to do. As I held her, trying to comfort her, she softly asked if I would make her not a virgin anymore. I spent over an hour kissing her, teasing her and teaching her about her body. I even found her G-spot, much to her surprise. After giving her a very sensual shave I gave her a good climax for the first time with fingers inside. After a lot of oral and teasing I finally broke through and her pain quickly subsided. With lots of kisses and very, very slow thrusts, she was treated to her first climax with a man throbbing up inside of her. She withered in rapture, cried with joy, dressed, left and never came back to work again.
Re-reading my old post I had not thought of Lynn, the young lady in this story, for over 40 years. I hope, when remembered as her "first", she thinks well of the gentle man who took so much time and care to please her.
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Seeker, I appreciate your help. I highlighted the name of the story and click the link button but it just inserted the link, it did not create a hyper link.
DG
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Quote by WellMadeMale
You are writing in a niche with the series/chapters thing. That by itself is going to limit you audience a bit, I think.
I'm just another reader on the internet, but I don't pursue story series with multiple chapters. Other people eat that stuff up and can't wait for the next chapter to drop.
You might branch out & try your hand at other genres and categories. Hell, if all else fails, label some of your stories as Taboo. That always draws eyeballs. Just make sure there's some taboo inside the story, so your audience doesn't feel click-baited and down vote you for it.
That is an interesting piece of feedback. I tend to write in chapters because my stories tend to be very long. I think I will combine my next story, Making Music Cum Alive from my time as a DJ, into a big story with maybe one "continued". Would that work for you?
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I hope this finds all the Lush readers safe, well and looking for good stories to read.
I know my imagination pales in the light of the many of the stunning pictures that are posted. All I can offer is that I am trying to improve. Feedback is always appreciated.
I completed one arc Take Me, Take Me, NOW!
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/take-me-take-me-now-chapter-1.aspx
is an outgrowth the story of a story of a house wife seduced by an online writer.
Will I regret This Tomorrow? begins at https://forum.lushstories.com/yaf_postmessage.aspx?f=56
After taking a break from writing erotic stories my new story arc Finding Lynn will run between BDSM, a Lesbian awakening and eventually erotic romance. I hope you enjoy the ride.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/bdsm/-finding-lynn-part-1-.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/-finding-lynn-part-2-.aspx
My very best wishes for good health and a GREAT tease.
DJ
I know my imagination pales in the light of the many of the stunning pictures that are posted. All I can offer is that I am trying to improve. Feedback is always appreciated.
I completed one arc Take Me, Take Me, NOW!
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/take-me-take-me-now-chapter-1.aspx
is an outgrowth the story of a story of a house wife seduced by an online writer.
Will I regret This Tomorrow? begins at https://forum.lushstories.com/yaf_postmessage.aspx?f=56
After taking a break from writing erotic stories my new story arc Finding Lynn will run between BDSM, a Lesbian awakening and eventually erotic romance. I hope you enjoy the ride.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/bdsm/-finding-lynn-part-1-.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/-finding-lynn-part-2-.aspx
My very best wishes for good health and a GREAT tease.
DJ
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Hello Reese:
I hope this finds you well and safe. I find myself in the same spot as you. I have one story with 6000 vies and not one comment or score. I'm wondering if people are actually reading it, or a "vie" is given if they just look at the list?
How are you able to list your stories in your signature line? I look forward to your reply.
DJ
I hope this finds you well and safe. I find myself in the same spot as you. I have one story with 6000 vies and not one comment or score. I'm wondering if people are actually reading it, or a "vie" is given if they just look at the list?
How are you able to list your stories in your signature line? I look forward to your reply.
DJ
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From a romantic male standpoint here is my input
three questions:
1) do you ever appreciate women who go out without your bra: Yes because they have confidence in their sexuality
2) Have you ever been with a woman who wore her bra to bed? Yes, were both so hot and the bra was so shear that taking off would break the spell of seeing her hard nipples poking out as I kissed them
3) Do you enjoy seeing women who flashed her breasts, for you? Yes and no matter the size that is one sure come hither that gets my attention.
DJ
three questions:
1) do you ever appreciate women who go out without your bra: Yes because they have confidence in their sexuality
2) Have you ever been with a woman who wore her bra to bed? Yes, were both so hot and the bra was so shear that taking off would break the spell of seeing her hard nipples poking out as I kissed them
3) Do you enjoy seeing women who flashed her breasts, for you? Yes and no matter the size that is one sure come hither that gets my attention.
DJ
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Quote by AnnLuvsThat is an awesome tease. I could only hope my stories tease as much.
https://78.media.tumblr.com/46bd1f7c76713697788c61143226ddaa/tumblr_mkteucQIcY1sn6ya0o1_400.gif
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Quote by April601
Yes and partly.
First guy was ten years older than me and I really had no idea what was happening. It all happened so fast. I was crazy about him and just wanted to please him.
Being young I just did what I was told. He came in my mouth as he was holding my head. I coughed and choked but I did swallow what I could. Afterwards he told me I needed more practice if I wanted to be his girlfriend...what a prick...but I had a crush on him...so I practiced
Just because he has a dick does not mean he is not really an asshole!
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Quote by ChandlerAja2
I am not married and have never been. But that does not mean that there not men who really care about me and maybe one day conditions will be right so we can be together.
I know there are men out there who get so turned on watching their woman having another man's cock in her to the point he is almost out of control.
I would be glad to act as your substitute hubby so you could play.
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Having slow sex in the sauna with my red head neighbor while her very sexy virgin daughter watches us from her room
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I looked at your profile and #6 is my favorite. The white frames your ass in an awesome and sexy way.
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35, she was a young intern in our office who lived with her Dad. She was very shy and I was to learn absolutely afraid of sex, although, after two months of casual conversation, she admitted to feeling very aroused most days. Over the course of the summer she want from wearing very goth like baggy clothes, tennis shoes and unkempt hair to nice summer dresses, heels and a fresh hair style. Although she was not very pretty her eyes sparked with excitement as she realized I was not going to hurt her and really wanted to know her. One night she just showed up at me door to announce she was going on a date. When I congratulated her she began to cry. She was terrified the boy was going to want to have sex and she had no idea what to do. As I held her, trying to comfort her, she softly asked if I would make her not a virgin anymore. I spent over an hour kissing her, teasing her and teaching her about her body. I even found her G-spot, much to her surprise. After giving her a very sensual shave I gave her a good climax for the first time with fingers inside. After a lot of oral and teasing I finally broke through and her pain quickly subsided. With lots of kisses and very, very slow thrusts, she was treated to her first climax with a man throbbing up inside of her. She withered in rapture, cried with joy, dressed, left and never came back to work again.
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I also visited the chat rooms and found that basically everyone interested in chatting was talking with someone they already knew. I have read and commented on stories because I like to get feedback also. I like to write stories that take time to develop the characters and the background of the stories. I enjoy adding twists that are resolved in the next chapter, like the old Rocket Man serials you use to see before at the movies. That seems to turn off many readers who are an anxious for a completed tease at one sitting. Because of what I do for a living I have to be very circumspect, that also seems to translate to some people that think I have hidden motives or character flaws. For example I replied to one young woman, whom I never heard from again, yes I may sit nude when writing but frankly that is the most comfortable way if I'm going to sitting for several hours, trying to get it straight. Now that could have a double meaning, ha ha.
If you get to know me you find I believe one special slow dance, close and comfortable, can be the best foreplay.
DJ
If you get to know me you find I believe one special slow dance, close and comfortable, can be the best foreplay.
DJ
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Quote by eroticstoryreada
Redheads
Virgin
pregnant
BBW,chubby,fat,plump.
Could u describe the type u have had sex with, how old was that girl and what did she look like?
I will resist the analysis of why you asked the question and just enjoy the exchange.
Redheads, Yes, several the most memorable had freckles from her head to her toes, including her areolas.
Virgins, Yes, numerous. I was a DJ and a rocker and several wanted me to be their first.
PG, Yes and probably two of the most sex starved women I have ever been with. One most memorable was a neighbor. Hubby on deployment. Tiny heart shaped ass, firm thick nipples and a womb so swollen she HAD to be on top.
BBW, Yes, and by far the best tit fucks I have ever had. Awesome watching your cock slide in and out as she sucks her own nipples.
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I'm definitely a nipple man. I prefer which ever bra, for that woman, gives the most opportunity to tease and firm her nipples.
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Quote by 1Zratedgal
And why do feel you guys just love pregnant women for the fact that our boobs get bigger???
LOL!
Kisses!
Steph
For the milk, of course
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I'm going to be UP all night. Great thread.
I'm going to be UP all night. Great thread.
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Quote by Leiza350
Well ....lol ..some thing i know about ....i have them ...altho they are small ...32b/c....depending on my weight.....i would rather had regular ones ....altho they look good wit no bra/top on ...with a bra on not
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