Hey, this is my first story, and your comments would be greatly appreciated. Please point out things I could improve on. Thanks. He moved a few pieces of hair out of my face and kissed me. I cuddled closer to him, not wanting this moment to end. "Danielle, I love you." "I love you too Der-"My alarm clock went off. I woke up. It was a dream. Of course it was. Why would Derek love me? We're friends. Derek and I had been fri...