Thank you so much everyone!
Platonic or Passionate kisses to each and every one of you (your choice!).
I feel that my biggest weakness, other than being a rank amateur, in my writing is that I am too close to the thoughts behind the words and thusly don't read or hear the words themselves, only the intent behind them. I'm also in a big rush to move on to the next thing (thanks to my moderator friend for pointing out that blatantly obvious point that i was ignoring). With that in mind, I have decided that my next story, while hopefully as torrid as I think it is, will deal with something that is really messing with my heart and mind. Because I am emotionally close to the events, that should make me take pause so I can choose the proper phrasing. I'll also hopefully recruit a small militia of folks that wouldn't mind reading it as a work in progress as the muse strikes me. That will hopefully give me good, organic, feedback in the moment rather than afterwards when I feel that the story is complete.
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krystalg
Over 90 days ago
Bisexual Female, 43
United States
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Smut-slinging slut
Hello everyone!
I'm absolutely horrendous at editing my own writing prior to submission. Yes, I've read, re-read, and "know" all the rules of grammar, etcetera.
However, when I go to edit or check my work I don't "see" my own errors, I more or less "see" what I meant, rather than what I wrote. I'm sure that the moderators now probably give my stories to each other as punishment!
I'd like to have a much more keen sense of editing and structure. It isn't that I don't know, I just don't catch my own errors.
Do you have any tricks or methods that you use to maximize your accuracy when you self-edit your own work?
thank you
K
I'm absolutely horrendous at editing my own writing prior to submission. Yes, I've read, re-read, and "know" all the rules of grammar, etcetera.
However, when I go to edit or check my work I don't "see" my own errors, I more or less "see" what I meant, rather than what I wrote. I'm sure that the moderators now probably give my stories to each other as punishment!
I'd like to have a much more keen sense of editing and structure. It isn't that I don't know, I just don't catch my own errors.
Do you have any tricks or methods that you use to maximize your accuracy when you self-edit your own work?
thank you
K
Smut-slinging slut
I went to an small orgy once with a guy and his wife that I was fooling around with off and on. Except for me and one other single guy it was 3 other couples. For a brief moment I was being licked by one woman while licking another; it was amazing. I've always wanted to repeat that moment, without any men present, but I haven't as of yet. I just read this thread and have added it to my must-do bucket list.
Smut-slinging slut
My current VERY BENEFICIAL friend is in his fifties. When I met him I actually thought that he was a couple of years younger than I! I'm more attracted to the person, not the venerability of their mortal coil; while I'll admit that I also do need to find them physically attractive, it is the confidence, personality, and whether or not they are in control of their life or just reacting to events that either does it for me, or not.
By the same token, I recently had a one-off with a young man barely 20 years old...so I guess that you can say I swing both ways on this. I like swinging both ways. If he or she is sexy, confident, and has a real lust for life I have no issues with their age.
By the same token, I recently had a one-off with a young man barely 20 years old...so I guess that you can say I swing both ways on this. I like swinging both ways. If he or she is sexy, confident, and has a real lust for life I have no issues with their age.
Smut-slinging slut
Why am I always posting after Twisted_Skald, she's a tough act to follow!
I love getting oral and will grind on his or her face all night and scream for more. I also love a nice hard cock in me, especially if the guy knows how to use it right (far too many do not). By far though, my favorites are the guys that will get me all heated up first, then move on to oral, then penetration, then back to oral, and so on. the only thing better than that is getting both at the same time.
I love getting oral and will grind on his or her face all night and scream for more. I also love a nice hard cock in me, especially if the guy knows how to use it right (far too many do not). By far though, my favorites are the guys that will get me all heated up first, then move on to oral, then penetration, then back to oral, and so on. the only thing better than that is getting both at the same time.
Smut-slinging slut
I tried the monogamy thing before...it didn't take.
Now, any of my lovers that have potential for more than one-off need to pass a secret test. I'll comment on a man or a woman that I find hot and then just casually say how much fun it would be to fuck them right now. If they react negatively then I know it is a no-go. My favorite response, ever, was, "Damn that's hot. I'll call him over right now if I can watch."
In this case the teachings of my mother hold true. That which you send out returns back to you times three. If he (or she) wants to take on a new lover, that's fine. I get three! My parents were openly into free love and I guess I inherited that (lack of) morality.
Pleasures of the flesh with another is not cheating. Lying and hiding it is the actual pain-inducing betrayal. If it is done behind my back then hell hath no fury like a Krystal scorned!
Now, any of my lovers that have potential for more than one-off need to pass a secret test. I'll comment on a man or a woman that I find hot and then just casually say how much fun it would be to fuck them right now. If they react negatively then I know it is a no-go. My favorite response, ever, was, "Damn that's hot. I'll call him over right now if I can watch."
In this case the teachings of my mother hold true. That which you send out returns back to you times three. If he (or she) wants to take on a new lover, that's fine. I get three! My parents were openly into free love and I guess I inherited that (lack of) morality.
Pleasures of the flesh with another is not cheating. Lying and hiding it is the actual pain-inducing betrayal. If it is done behind my back then hell hath no fury like a Krystal scorned!
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I do NOT know the person above me, but reading her profile I can see that she not only has excellent taste in both literature and movies, but that she is empowered within her own identity and gives zero fucks if you cannot handle it. To "see" somebody revel in their own true self is inspirational and the most complimentary thing I can say is that I want to be more like that, myself. Her strength, power, and the way she thrusts such beautiful raw sexual energy into her profile also makes me tingle all over.
Smut-slinging slut
In general I'm not a fan of pantyhose. I find them to be hot, restrictive, and they get far too...um...humid in the crotch area. Thigh highs don't like to stay up on my skinny little chicken legs, although I have found a few that do. Overall I like a somewhat thin and sexy garter belt, but I've recently discovered the garter belt style hose. Those are the leggings and garter built into one stretchy unit, and they come all different styles and colors. I've started wearing those quite a bit recently.
However, if it is a strictly formal affair then I will go with the pantyhose in a feeble attempt to be somewhat classy. If I'm out to seduce, then a skirt with garter and stocking brings everyone ot their knees.
However, if it is a strictly formal affair then I will go with the pantyhose in a feeble attempt to be somewhat classy. If I'm out to seduce, then a skirt with garter and stocking brings everyone ot their knees.
Smut-slinging slut
I do it all the time. Sometimes I do it in public just to see who might notice. You'd be very surprised how many people are oblivious to what is going on around them. With a lover it can be both erotic and instructive: here's how I touch myself, this is how I like it, I get off on your getting off watching me. In public, it is more about the thrill of it, the risk of getting caught, seeing the reactions of those few that notice. My favorites, though, are when I'm someplace safe and secure and I know I'm being spied on, but they are clueless that I'm onto their sneaky voyeurism. then I feel like a sexual goddess, enticing my captive audience, knowing all the while they'll look, but are too timid to touch.
Smut-slinging slut
I usually don't mind it too much, but it depends on the situation and very much on the guy. However, if the guy wants me to treat his cum like it was the "Skin Lotion of the Gods" and then doesn't want to kiss me, or touch me afterwards lest he get some of his own juices on his lips or body, then he'll never see me again. Also, if you want to treat me like the star in your blow-bang porn fantasy then you need to be perfectly at peace with me treating you in kind.
Smut-slinging slut
In my parent's ritual-room, which was an outbuilding on our land. It didn't last long but at least there were candles to make it feel romantic. When we walked out, both of our parents were sitting outside by the fire. My mother smiles at me and asks, "Was it good, dear?" So embarrassing!
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Damn! Ensorceled took my answer!
Seriously though, I don't have an ideal for role playing. It isn't high on my list of kinks, but it isn't at the bottom either. I think it's more about the playful experience with the person one is with. The last time I tried role playing with a guy ended in disaster, though...but not as bad as the first time. The first time I suggested it to an ex-boyfriend that we try roleplaying together he said, "You mean like D&D?" This is not a joke, that his real answer!
If i were to choose, I'd like for my beau or lady to pretend to be a high-class escort, trained to cater to my every desire. I'd take them out and show them off, making all the others jealous and then have them service me. Then I'd have them massage me to nirvana service me again and send them home with cab fare! Second would be a guy that could pull off a non-sparkly vampire and seduce and drain me.
Seriously though, I don't have an ideal for role playing. It isn't high on my list of kinks, but it isn't at the bottom either. I think it's more about the playful experience with the person one is with. The last time I tried role playing with a guy ended in disaster, though...but not as bad as the first time. The first time I suggested it to an ex-boyfriend that we try roleplaying together he said, "You mean like D&D?" This is not a joke, that his real answer!
If i were to choose, I'd like for my beau or lady to pretend to be a high-class escort, trained to cater to my every desire. I'd take them out and show them off, making all the others jealous and then have them service me. Then I'd have them massage me to nirvana service me again and send them home with cab fare! Second would be a guy that could pull off a non-sparkly vampire and seduce and drain me.
Smut-slinging slut
OK, maybe it's just me, but why does it seem that all guys want a wild, wanton, woman that is down for naughty adventures and experimentation and that gets horny at the drop of a hat but then get all insecure, possessive, and jealous when they find one?
My mother always said that it was a case of "be careful what you wish for," but it seems to mostly be a theme in not only my life, but in the lives of my friends as well. My FWB says it as, "women are like motorcycles, we all want the ones that will kill us." Men all say they want an untamed and unrestrained woman, but after they've tasted it they always want us to calm down and behave! what am I missing?
My mother always said that it was a case of "be careful what you wish for," but it seems to mostly be a theme in not only my life, but in the lives of my friends as well. My FWB says it as, "women are like motorcycles, we all want the ones that will kill us." Men all say they want an untamed and unrestrained woman, but after they've tasted it they always want us to calm down and behave! what am I missing?
Smut-slinging slut
For the sake of it itself, no. However, as a part of sex, it is a must. On me, in me, in front of me, oh goddess yes! When I'm feeling really riled up I'll have him cum on me and rub it into my skin so he cannot help but to think that we're out together and I'm covered in his love juices. Plus, it makes him last longer the second and third times around!
Smut-slinging slut
For me, it depends. If it is all about sex, then I might if his pre-cum is tasty. I might also let it fly or let it ooze out of my mouth just to be perverted and dirty. If I'm really turned on, or if I'm really into the guy I won't stop and I'll swallow all of it and keep going until I have him worked up again.
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Well...a couple of hours ago I got a sort of naughty confession in my mailbox from a lady here. So, if I were to be perfectly honest, about 2 minutes ago, 15 minutes ago, a half hour ago, an hour ago, and right after I replied to her message. Good thing i have a date tonight otherwise I'd get hand cramps!
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Never did 6 or 6a, but of the others you may color me guilty.
I've also done 8 & 8a.
At a bachelorette party one evening the dancer got into kneeling down in front of the ladies and putting his head between their legs. when he got to me he forced my legs open (I put up every once of resistance I had...which was none at all) and then dove under my skirt. Surprise1 No panties. With the others cheering me on, I grabbed the back of head and clamped on. It was more naughty fun than sexual, but he was really good down there! Too bad that he wasn't the type that slept with the clients.
I've also done 8 & 8a.
At a bachelorette party one evening the dancer got into kneeling down in front of the ladies and putting his head between their legs. when he got to me he forced my legs open (I put up every once of resistance I had...which was none at all) and then dove under my skirt. Surprise1 No panties. With the others cheering me on, I grabbed the back of head and clamped on. It was more naughty fun than sexual, but he was really good down there! Too bad that he wasn't the type that slept with the clients.
Smut-slinging slut
As an update, one of the moderators let me know that they have 100 plus stories in their queue, so it may take some time. Mine just got approved today. I have no problems waiting my turn; I just find that I am so impatient. I've tried to develop patience, but it takes so long to change the habit! I want patience now!
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Myself, I'm not complaining at all, but I'm on my 8th day of being in Limbo. Pity, I noted some typos and unclear sections after submission that I wanted to clean up. I fully understand that it takes as long as it takes and thank the volunteers for doing what they do.